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Good teachers should give Challenging tasks to their students

4 - One word... This probably isn't the best way to fix it, but you should definitely change...

Writing Feedbackyasmin85 - Dec 10, 2009Logical_Fella_C - Dec 10, 2009
"I am an equestrian." - Common App Activity Essay

3 - Thank you all so much, you have no idea how much this helped. This is my revised draft after...

Undergraduateto6 - Dec 10, 2009to6 - Dec 10, 2009
Common app essay - my family moved to Bangladesh, factors, challenges

2 - I still remember vividly when the time my family moved to Bangladesh. I started to help my mother...

UndergraduateDrAculEX - Dec 10, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 10, 2009
ENGLISH RESEARCH PAPER ON BABY DESIGN

2 - Your essay is very good! I only found a few minor things; Imagine a futuristic couple desiring to...

Undergraduateazncat - Dec 10, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 10, 2009
'teaching the English language in South Korea' - Why did you choose to apply to UCF?

3 - I would probably try to focus more on the things that the college has to provide instead of what...

Undergraduateimcoole - Nov 25, 2009PatelJ - Dec 10, 2009
"I would like to study in the UK" - UCAS Personal Statement

3 - Hmmmmm... it is not enough to want to study in the UK. I think a serious student is...

Undergraduateproudtobepinoy - Dec 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Common Application Essay (Anti-Semitism)

3 - That makes it sounds like you are saying Jews are not people! Revise, revise... :-) Being Jewish,...

Undergraduatedannyfwk - Dec 9, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Why does Brown appeal to me?Who or what has influenced my decision ?

9 - Two ideas: I have been a die-hard enthusiast about Economics ever since I received the first lecture on...

UndergraduateSayeemin - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
'Key Club and the National Honors Society' - NEOUCOM what will i contribute?

3 - Each paragraph has a different idea, and they need to all be preceded by an intro para that puts...

Undergraduatekouyaken - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
WISH FOR CHRISTMAS

3 - I still remember your promise two year ago, but you may have forgotten it completely. Therefore, you cannot be...

Writing Feedbackautumnwave - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Florida State University Admission Essay- How Vires Defines My Life

2 - I believe that the mind is created to be able to think beyond boundaries and that the more that...

Undergraduategrocks6 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Dental training, Obstacle Essay Help

6 - Use quotation marks: ...the strength to say, "Pinkesh, mane bathroom layja." Use a comma: ...both of us more;...

Undergraduateshahps41592 - Nov 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Common App Essay (Multiple Sclerosis)

12 - This is a powerful essay. I think you could incorporate a paragraph that tells about some of the most...

Undergraduateilovelaughing - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Comparative Essay on Charaters of The Great Gatsby and Hamlet

4 - I always suggest taking a guess with this kind of essay. Choose a striking characteristic of one character, and...

Book Reportslynpenny2003 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Macaulay Honors College-Discuss some issue of importance...

3 - To the reader, it is obvious that you are just going for a dramatic effect here. Obviously, you...

Undergraduateneil098 - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Technology developments kill the traditional skills and ways o living.

4 - Thanks you both for your corrections, they are really helpful :)...

Writing FeedbackRuah - Dec 1, 2009Ruah - Dec 10, 2009
IELTS: Success has broader definition than the earning power of a person.

8 - It's my pleasure :)...

Writing Feedbackgms - Dec 8, 2009Ruah - Dec 10, 2009
My Personal Statement For Accounting

4 - Thank you so much i really appreciate your comments......

Undergraduateicefola - Dec 9, 2009icefola - Dec 10, 2009
Brown Short Response (Why Brown)

6 - The essay is disjointed. It would be good if the Thoreau quote had more application that just to that...

UndergraduateFiddysin - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
English CLEP Practice Essay - Friendships today are easier than ever to form

3 - Here is something I think will help. Use this structure: First sentence - attention grabbing, colorful words. Last...

Writing FeedbackKMK - Dec 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Paper on Euthanasia-How to argue it can be research paper & not just persuasive

5 - Ha ha, I guess that would depend on one's circumstances....

Research Paperspeacemaker - Dec 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Need Ideas! 5 Page Essay on concept defined by both author within their writing.

5 - The concept of outsider is one that Sue already gave you. There are many others. I insist that you...

EssaysKimPasha - Dec 6, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 10, 2009
Cornell ILR (Essay)

2 - Idid not know much about my country's history other than the historical references made in pop culture. I BECAME...

Undergraduatepacers7ind - Dec 10, 2009IntlIndian - Dec 10, 2009
AN Influential Person-My Math Tutor-Princeton Prompt

3 - "With the terrible first impression about the tutor thing" Wich one? Why was it so bad? you have to...

Undergraduatexugx29 - Dec 10, 2009hern255 - Dec 10, 2009
"How can I contribute in the community" - Short Answer

8 - You should use positive words! Example: I have strong academic interest in both Business Administration and computer Engineering. I...

Undergraduatestarzia - Dec 1, 2009pacers7ind - Dec 10, 2009
Letter of Motivation for applying Computer Science related fields

4 - I would leave it out because it's on your transcript and resume. Everything I've heard says you shouldn't duplicate...

Lettersleonardo092 - Dec 8, 2009bankafirekn1ght - Dec 10, 2009
"traditional foundation and style" - Applying for graduate school at SVA

7 - Wow, that was EXTREMELY helpful. I really appreciate that bankafirekn1ght and Kevin. I'm going to look it over and...

GraduateShihanB - Dec 7, 2009ShihanB - Dec 10, 2009
Racism, UT essay B - issue of importance

5 - avoid using 'you's handful example? i realized , which gradually...

UndergraduateJaeL - Dec 5, 2009yang - Dec 10, 2009
"My Life as a Midwestern Belle" - Emerson College Supplement

6 - yea, that would be something amazing...but still not story telling, unless the song's a story. it's good to...

Undergraduateidiotruler - Dec 8, 2009yang - Dec 10, 2009
Research Paper on Reincarnation

13 - There are objects of emotions, of rational thoughts and of intuition, just as there are physical objects. Objects are...

Research Papersheathere - Nov 16, 2009Rajiv - Dec 10, 2009
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