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UC #1 Family influence: Bioengineering

3 - I felt puzzled as I stared up at the strange ... In my mind, I imagined the contraption...

Undergraduateowlcity24 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Common App Short Answer - Working at A&F - criticism welcome!

2 - Excellent, it is great that work feels like a party. Remember in the future, when you have jobs that...

Undergraduatemattsaysfierce - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Stanford Supplement Essay: Personal Narrative on career decision

2 - You know, what my first thought was? I thought, I would not want my surgery to be performed by...

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Obsession with time - Stanford Roomate short essay response

5 - This can sometimes become problematic, as I find just relaxing extremely difficult. Lots of people find relaxing difficult....

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Arguementative/Persuasive essay on camping

2 - How about "camping can take many forms" instead of "definitions?" Camping to one person can mean seclusion in...

Writing Feedbackbrianw - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"My Mission Trip" - UF prompt

3 - Graciously , I walked over to ... I think you should also talk about the part time job...

Undergraduatelilminkzmayb - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
essay on Scuba Diving(rough): Common App Essay

5 - I wrote about a similar experience under topic of my choice. When I had an admissions coach read my...

Undergraduatepeekachoo - Oct 24, 2009redsox34 - Nov 4, 2009
"More than meets the eye" - essay for Chicago U.

4 - ^Because...that is a unique ability, as most people fail to make eye contact during a conversation? Overall,...

Undergraduatelisandrag - Nov 1, 2009Liebe - Nov 4, 2009
I was going to be alone for most of the summer; Significant life experience

2 - Hi David, Nice work! First and foremost, I love how your sense of humor really feeds this piece...

Undergraduatethebabybull - Nov 4, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 4, 2009
Non-academic subjects should be removed from school. Agree or not?

6 - thanks so muhc Mustafa1991 as you see, my E is not good, so i cannot point out my own...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Nov 3, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Nov 4, 2009
'Finite element method and Material science' Engineering statement of purpose

7 - Jean253, thanks a lot for your response. Basically I want to do a masters in civil engineering,...

Graduaterabita - Oct 26, 2009rabita - Nov 4, 2009
Life goals from a liberal arts education

2 - From Spiderman to FDR to Jesus, we have all... I think the paragraph about pro-athletes does not fit....

Undergraduatemichiganmaniac8 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'Project WORTHY'. I need to cut some of this UIUC essay down, can you help?

9 - The first paragraph is identical as is the last. The second paragraph is better served by the second version...

Undergraduateanuj1450 - Nov 1, 2009Mustafa1991 - Nov 3, 2009
Chinese Chess - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay. Currently overlength )):

3 - fifteen instead of 15. Don't say "under me," because it sounds a little haughty. I think you...

Undergraduatezhangyitao - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
How to write an Essay Proposal?

2 - Well, if your class requires you to write this proposal, probably a rubric is provided with grading criteria... right?...

EssaysOptical24 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'One Step Further' - Personal Statement dealing with overcoming challenges

2 - Gwendolyn, You're a great writer with a firm grasp on mechanics. Your personal story takes guts to share,...

Graduategfwillia - Nov 3, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 3, 2009
"what to gain from diversity"-UM prompt 2

3 - I think a lot of people would agree that those first sentences are not necessary. But... I really like...

Undergraduatebmore1991 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Meaingful interest- UM prompt #5

3 - This is an idea I had: Off in the distance, the world around me seemed to have stopped....

Essaysbmore1991 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
I saw that dual potential in National Art Honor Society (NAHS) ; extracurricular

2 - A few general comments: You know those people who get excited when they can fulfill mundane tasks and...

Undergraduate10healyc - Nov 3, 2009theplaniverse - Nov 3, 2009
TOEFL essay large firm and small company - higher income in a large one

4 - I like your essay... I preferred to working in the big firm. I will definitely benefit from their experience...

Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 3, 2009bilal ABUZENAH - Nov 3, 2009
Basketball has become an indispensable part of my life - Common app short essay

7 - Thanks everyone :D This is my second draft. But it's 160 words long ==! So help me to cut...

Undergraduatetrung2012 - Nov 1, 2009trung2012 - Nov 3, 2009
My Cello - playing on it is my most challenging, but most rewarding personal activity.

3 - Playing the cello is my most challenging, but most rewarding personal activity. Sometimes, I practice anywhere from thirty minutes...

Undergraduatebyflash - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
World of knowledge, digital art

4 - Sorry I did not get here in time to help. I think you should not, in the future, use...

Undergraduatehdirt1 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Bringing attributes of Determination and time management to UF

2 - Oh, this part is very good!! ----> As the youngest child, I had the advantage... I think you...

Undergraduatepenutsmurf - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Two Statements - life experiences, perspectives, talents, commitments

2 - Write a sentence about what you were doing instead of focusing on school. If you were passionate about something...

Undergraduateohmygoodness - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Common Application Volleyball essay; My family is notoriously terrible at sports

4 - In the last paragraphs, reflect on experiencing moments of extreme focus, meditative, similar to your other passion, which is...

Undergraduatesmallfry320 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'Immigrant to the United States'; I did my best to avoid alienating from my American peers

5 - Don't end with that "good tings come in small packages," because it weakens your essay. Your essay is very...

Undergraduatemadmadiah - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Can happiness be defined? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

2 - Hapiness is an experience people wish to have. How to measure or define it has been a controversial topic...

Writing Feedbackwest - Nov 3, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Nov 3, 2009
The View out my Widndow and what it means

2 - If you want to talk about meandering, use commas: As I meander into the kitchen, I glance through...

Writing Feedbackperejdam - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Diversity Essay-Illustrating the value of diversity in my life.

3 - In the beginning, I think it is impressive that you talk about globalization as something that makes out fates...

Undergraduateperejdam - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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