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TOEFL Essay - Cars cause a lot of air pollution...

5 - In my view, this payment it is obviously their responsibility to pay for cleaning the environment and to support...

Writing Feedbackinextricable - Mar 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Samoan Govt Scholarship - Information Technology Course

4 - Up at the top, you said to me, "I really appreciated." That's a common mistake, but you are supposed...

Scholarshipambster - Mar 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Interview a Person whose Native Language is not English

9 - Cool idea from Sean! A common, wise saying from that language......

Essaysemmi - Mar 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Advertisment analysis

5 - I agree that the first paragraph should be cut. Instead of saying obvious things, say your most important truth...

Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Mar 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Which essay idea seems to be best.

8 - The first sentence seems abstract. Maybe you should say "monetary value." Maybe not, though since money was not always...

Undergraduateflight23 - Mar 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2009
Reasons for transferring (NYU's BFA Program of Dramatic Writing)

7 - Hey, I look forward to seeing the next draft! I see that all but the second paragraph are quite...

Undergraduatejudas - Mar 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2009
"PGD method" - feetback on introduction of short academic essay

12 - "a morally problematic way of thinking that the Holocaust should have taught us to avoid." Avoid comparing things to...

Writing FeedbackTAMTAM - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
'biology course' - Mech Eng @ UPENN

3 - Yeah, ditch the Hamlet reference. Starting an application essay by chaining together the concepts of suicide, vengeance, living through...

Graduateasabti - Mar 30, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
Do circumstances determine whether or not we should tell the truth?

10 - Your second essay now stays on topic, and is much better. For the first essay, your proposed revision still...

Writing Feedbacktiantian12 - Mar 28, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
Motivation essay for Student Exchange Program (deadline at Monday)

2 - Now I'm studying Advertising and have already realized that main tools of an advertiser, as well as any human-related...

Undergraduatereactor - Mar 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2009
Questbridge Application, vegetarianism

5 - Vegetarianism prevents many of the health problems that are sweeping across America, pushes back against inhumane treatment of animals,...

Undergraduatekenziii - Mar 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 30, 2009
If you cannot excel in a field, simply leave it for someone who can. Decisions

9 - It is absolutely wonderful, enjoyed readind it....

Writing FeedbackRosamond - Mar 26, 2009tasneemspring - Mar 30, 2009
Broadening Horizons Spiel: Conclusion, Questbridge essay.

2 - There are a few rough grammatical constructions here and there, but by and large, your essay seems fairly solid...

Undergraduatekenziii - Mar 29, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
My narrative story on how bank of america charge off department closed down

3 - Some excellent advice from Mustafa. I would go even further, though, and say that you should add dialogue even...

Writing Feedbacksexyness1421 - Mar 29, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 30, 2009
Should the policy of supplying textbook for free adhere to colleges?

16 - The first sentence is manifestly false. First, as it stands, you are saying that most adults and high school...

EssaysMSNYCBRATTY - Mar 20, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 29, 2009
Choice of buying a brand new car or a used car

5 - You should probably post the essay so we can give you a title that matches. Try and make it...

EssaysBlackxClover - Mar 21, 2009kenziii - Mar 29, 2009
Social worker in offices at a local hospital - Personal Statement for Grad School

5 - You might also want to consider combining some of your sentences. At the moment, they all tend to be...

Graduatedeelyons - Mar 23, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 29, 2009
Management of Planning - Arthur Anderson (Enron case)

4 - If you have already done the research, you are halfway there already. Try to find connections between the pieces...

Writing Feedbackchampion510 - Mar 28, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 29, 2009
I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt")

17 - a single leaf is falling swung by the wind dried and dead now not knowing where it goes tree...

Poetryamie - Mar 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 29, 2009
Goodman Brown's Epiphany Essay

8 - Thank you I went back through it!!...

Essaysamymcewen - Mar 26, 2009amymcewen - Mar 29, 2009
essay on the topic "who i am"?

7 - With regard to the essay about who "you" are, you could argue that every single quality embodied in you,...

Undergraduateemmi - Mar 17, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 29, 2009
International Student Essay for SUNY (motivation essay)

3 - Thank you so much for your help. I really appreciate it!...

Undergraduategreep - Mar 28, 2009greep - Mar 29, 2009
Transfer to NYU from Rutgers Newark -- Entrepreneurs, Pioneers.

10 - thanks a lot! i appreciate your help! so i'm submitting it tonight! i think it's ready! wish tme the...

Undergraduatetransfer498 - Mar 21, 2009transfer498 - Mar 29, 2009
IELTS Writing Task--Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood

18 - It's a classic breakdown in an argument, out of viciousness and disrepute -- failing to stay on point as...

Writing Feedbackkirin - Mar 25, 2009Mustafa1991 - Mar 29, 2009
"Improvability" - NYU Transfer (activities, additional information)

6 - Thank you, Kevin. Your recommendations were a great help....

Undergraduatejudas - Mar 26, 2009judas - Mar 28, 2009
Expanding my knowledge; Scholarship (the United World Colleges)

6 - "This college offers me many different opportunities and resources to take the road of success." You might want to...

Scholarshipstefan - Mar 25, 2009EF_Sean - Mar 28, 2009
If you can interview any living person, who would it be and why?

6 - Rich Monte) I appreciated your points ! I realized how important to distinguish the truth through television or...

Writing Feedbacksukjay - Mar 26, 2009sukjay - Mar 28, 2009
Essay on The Cons of Social Text Messaging

4 - Thank you. That helps much Joseph Walsh...

Writing FeedbackNathan - Mar 27, 2009Nathan - Mar 28, 2009
Essay on the Reformation in Europe - Feedback

2 - ...Along with it, the Protestant Reformation brought religious pluralism in Europe, attacking religious dogma which at that time dominated...

Writing FeedbackAMk - Mar 26, 2009EF_Kevin - Mar 27, 2009
Do images and impressions have too much of an effect on people?

5 - EV Kevin~thank you for your encouragement. I really appreciate your help. I will work harder to improve my writing!!^_^...

Writing Feedbacktiantian12 - Mar 26, 2009tiantian12 - Mar 27, 2009
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