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'Shopping and Dinner with the Girls' - UCF HONORS COLLEGE

2 - Good afternoon :) Mechanically, make sure you don't use contractions in formal academic pieces; for instance, "couldn't" should...

Undergraduatemolzeeee - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"

4 - Excellent! This is a great passage; if you keep your comparisons similar to this, you're going to have a...

Writing FeedbackTe Amari - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
'It was God' - UCI PS Prompt #2 Help - quality, experience

2 - Good afternoon :) I think this is a proper answer to this prompt; you describe the experience and...

Undergraduatekobenit4eea - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
New SAIC essay now that it is on track, last advice needed.

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Undergraduateadelewu - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
UC essay prompts 1&2- "The Jaws of Life" Any Critique would be appreciated!

4 - Good afternoon :) I don't think that it is too personal; there is a difference between the familiarity...

Undergraduatejojomover - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
The Sleeper, Poetry Analysis - Assignment "Literary Analysis"

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Poetryinsanitywhisper - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"every time I walk into the open space" - UC prompt #2

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Undergraduatesncooper10 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Tryouts" - essay prompt 1

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Undergraduatesncooper10 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"Asian Americans and the glass ceiling" - Prompt #1 UC APPL

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Undergraduateswt_babiigrl - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...

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IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

3 - Thank you so much, i would definitely keep your corrections in mind.....

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In search of an Epigraph for an essay on Poe's "Ligeia"

3 - I actually liked Antoine's more, but I thought I might've been biased. The Little Prince is my all time...

EssaysTe Amari - Nov 24, 2008Te Amari - Nov 24, 2008
'my grades did not meet my standards' - University of California PROMPT #2

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Undergraduatekids_jessy - Nov 24, 2008kids_jessy - Nov 24, 2008
UC Santa Barbara Application: Prompt #1

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Undergraduatebwood - Nov 13, 2008cielov - Nov 24, 2008
UNC essay - the result of my curiosity

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"Gained social, intellectual, or cultural differences" - UM Diversity

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Undergraduatemihirmj - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism

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Writing Feedbackjay45 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"I learnt to be positive" - UC prompt

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
essay for the Pratt (plesase revise the grammar)

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Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Accounting research paper - any (advanced) topic - but easy as possible!

2 - Good afternoon :) What about doing a piece on IRC Sec. 651; trusts? I wrote a piece on...

Research Papersfibonacci - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"young teenagers" - UC prompt 1- does this work?

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Undergraduatemathfun1227 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
Animation career - Essay Question (how to begin and topics to cover)

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Essaysjasleen - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"I am the youngest of eight children" - Prompt 1 essay Help in title

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Undergraduatejrod91 - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
UIUC essay - Child Education Work

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
A time when you tried something for which you had no talent. Essay.

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UndergraduateAkvsp - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
"born in Salinas, California" - application essay

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Undergraduatemember123 - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
my first intro to chemistry class - UM Major

3 - yea sorry i forgot to answer what exactly i wanted advice on but I just wanted to know if...

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"Music is discipline" - Prompt #2 uc essay

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Undergraduatehsgrad09 - Nov 22, 2008hsgrad09 - Nov 24, 2008
Law School SOP (single mother)

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Telling the truth is not a best option always

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Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 24, 2008
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