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Dec 26, 2012
Writing Feedback / Having children late in life; 'A family without children is not a really family' [5]
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.... it's not economy; it's economic conditions.
Among the reasons, economic conditions get the highest priority.
..high makes large redundant. So you should use one of the words.Also try to say things in a more simple way. That makes your arguments more conceivable.
Today, the young couples face a great challenge in meeting financial needs of running a family with kids.
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As for reasons, economy come the first.
.... it's not economy; it's economic conditions.
Among the reasons, economic conditions get the highest priority.
The high and large financial pressure for young couple is huge challenge
..high makes large redundant. So you should use one of the words.Also try to say things in a more simple way. That makes your arguments more conceivable.
Today, the young couples face a great challenge in meeting financial needs of running a family with kids.