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Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Undergraduate / Med-O-lark/grades do not reflect me; Environment/Ability & Potential [4]

It's a place where you can be yourself and anyone is going to criticize no matter what, It's a place where through the years I have learn so much things about me and it have made me the person that I am today.

I don't get the first part of this sentence, specially the phrase " and anyone is going to criticize no matter what" :( If others are going to criticize then you cannot be yourself. So I guess what you try to mean is it's a place people mind their own business and abstain from criticizing others. I think you should rephrase this line.

It's a place where through the years I have learn so much things about me and it have made me the person that I am today.

It's the place that shaped me into the person who I am today through many lessons it taught me throughout all those years.
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS; youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly [3]

Drug abuse is a dangerous social curse for modern generation.

.... nice start :)

Parents and guardians are nowadays very concerned about feeling of drug abuse.

Today's parents need to be very concerned about this issue in order to protect their children from this social threat.

Many adults are addicted to taking drugs at an early age in modern society. But certain sociologist blames the patents and local people often play an example. However, There are many reasons of involving in drug abuse and on the rise.

Here your flow breaks. You now need to introduce the argument.
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Integrated Writing Task; Research Writing and Quotation [3]

Throughout the article, the differences between professor attitudes towards research writing and quotation and student attitudes have affected academic life.

Are you referring to this article? It's not very clear :( The sentence sounds a bit confusing to me ... what affects academic life?
Throughout this article, the differences between the attitudes of professors and students with regard to research writing and citing quotations ...

how students can be students successful if they follow the simple direction of the instructor.

... successful in what? in research?
how students can be successful in research if they follow simple guidelines of the instructor.
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS ESSAY:WHAT CAN WE DO TO PROMOTE EQUALITY? [7]

Well... it's good if you posted the full prompt with the essay for us to understand it better. Generally, the IELTS prompts for this task are much more descriptive than what you've written above, so I guess it is just a part of the prompt. Also, it seems you can write very well. Your sentences, vocabulary, grammar , all very good. However, this topic is different to other topics we deal with IELTS and I wonder whether I can suggest you the normal essay structure we follow for this one too.
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Undergraduate / None of these words can describe a person; Fresno Pacific/ Faithfulness, Wisdom, Service [2]

"Faithfulness, Wisdom, Service"... I believe that none of these words can describe a person but can define them.

I like the way you opened the essay. Nice :-)

It became a routine, something I felt like I had to do because my parents made me go and I was supposed to "believe in God".

It became a routine, something I felt like I had to oblige because it was my parent's wish and I was supposed to believe in God.

Good writing :)
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Course of study that has no direct employment opportunities serves no purpose [5]

In addition, the job market with its volatile nature cannot be taken as the gaugebase for judgingto judge the importance of a course.

Further, due to its high volatility, the job market may not be the best basis for judging the importance of an academic course.

For example, in the early 90's the courses of computers had very little job market compared to the government jobs .

.... there can be government jobs that involve with computer job profiles.
For example, in the early nineties, the credentials in computer science had very little significance in the job market.
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS - Do the same thing and Avoid Changes; GOOD or BAD? [4]

Nevertheless, many people think that changes are necessary for their life and that they can live theirlivelife from changes.

.... this sentence does not make sense.... I think you have made some typos. Is this what you mean;
Nevertheless, some people think that changes are necessary for life and they can well adapt to such changing situations.
he lives - verb (singular) ... they live - verb (plural)
my life - noun (singular) ... our lives - noun (plural)
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Media should present diverse aspects of our life, so like bad guys sometimes live happy [4]

I think this is too lengthy for a body para for this task. You need to manage time well and if you spend too much time in body paras, you'll surely run short of time to complete your essay. Stick to one reason per one para. Support that reason with one example. As dumi highlighted you have gone a little bit out of track. So I don't intend to give any feedbacks on this essay as they may be irrelevant. If you re-do the essay and post it here, then I can have a look at it and give my comments :)
Pahan   
Oct 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Personal enjoyment? Everyone is working as a diligent worker for the family. [9]

Looks like those links have been deleted. Hope dumi will find you some other good essays for reading :D
Anyway, reading essays written on similar topics will surely help you gather lots of points. Also, read the comments given by others in those essays. They too are very helpful.
Pahan   
Oct 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS; Why do we need music? [5]

It may be true because the traditional music is one of aspects of national culture and it is a national treasure.

This may be true because traditional music is an important aspect of one's culture and therefore it is treated as a national heritage and treasure.

However, the role of the international music can not forget

However, the role played by the international music cannot be forgotten.

While the traditional music reflects the old national life and is suitable for older, the international music reflects the model life and is suitable for adults

While the traditional music forms preserve cultural identity for a nation, the international music helps nations to come together by sharing something common.
Pahan   
Oct 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS; Popular events help ease international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions [4]

International games are the great source of relationship among the nations which bring their citizen close to each others.

International games provide the opportunity to build healthy relationships between nations which promotes peace and harmony in the world.

Many peoplespeople participates or join to sports events because they makes them happy, excited and enjoyable

"People" is the right word and it means a collection of men/women. So it is a plural word. .... People participate
They have a significant effect on the nation and bringing all nations together on a single platform to represent their country and play in pride for it.
Pahan   
Oct 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / Eating at restaurant vs eating at home; Which is better? [4]

Many people prefer to eat out at restaurants while others who would rather like to eat at home.

Some people prefer to eat out at restaurants while others like eating at home.

Of these two ways of eating, I prefer to eat at home because it is cheaper,faster and more nutritious.

... faster? I think lots of people choose restaurants to eat because it is faster. If you eat at home you need to cook your meals or prepare them. That takes time. But at restaurants, it's a matter of ordering and the food comes on to your table.

At first, eating at home is cheaper because it reduces the cost by many ways like it cuts travelling cost to restaurants; I do not need to give tips, do not need to pay tax and service charge at my home.

Here more than every other detailed costs, the price you pay for a dish is about three times more than what you spend to prepare the same at home :D
Pahan   
Oct 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / My favorite room is my study because it keeps my memories alive! [7]

i'd like to say that the room is the one that witnessed my growth from a little kid. Those happy moments were happend in that room. i don't know how to express it.

Okkkkkk.... how about saying it like this;
This little room has watched me growing up from a little kid to who I am today. It is the only thing in this world that knows me perfect because it was the place where I comfortably let my true feelings and emotions out.

and here i wanna say : when i was a little kid, my mum or dad used to tell me stories [ the book they used was difficult for me to read ] as I grew older, they bought me a new book that i could read by myself.

I still remember the joyous moments spent with my mom and dad in nights listening to their bedtime stories. I couldn't read those story books and they used to read them for me.
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / Should you start a career or enter university at 18? [2]

It goes without saying that education plays a very important role in our life. However, many people after finishing school do not enter university, but they start a career. There are some advantages and disadvantages of both choices.

good introduction :)

If a person starts his career early, he will become a qualified worker quicker.

... I guess he would become an experienced worker rather than a qualified worker. Qualifications usually refer to one's credentials. Experience or Exposure are the terms that are generally linked with work. :)

One positive aspect of starting a career at 18 is an opportunity for gaining experience. If a person starts his career early, he will become a qualified worker quicker. In addition during your work you earn money for a living and it gives a feeling of independence. However not everyone is an academically-gifted person or they got poor grades at school. The only thing to do for them is getting a job.

This is very good writing and a good para too.... However, you have not included any specific examples to support your reasoning. That is important to convince your reader.
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because [3]

To begin with, at the present time, world goes to globalization, and many people in world have to communicate to each other.

.... this sentence needs improvements in its presentation;
To begin with, the world today is becoming closer and closer and these globalization effects have demanded close communication between different nations.

They have to trade, voyage, go to university and migration to other countries.

International trade, travel, studies, migration etc. are taking place at a rapid pace and therefore the need for a common language has become a necessity for everybody today.

Now, he says if I he did not have good base onknowledge in Germany language Ihe could have not passed those courses

If you quote a saying, you need to use inverted commas to quote them. e.g. "xxxxxxxxxxx"
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / [toefl task] TELEPHONE or TELEVISION? Which one is more effective in people's life? [8]

Yes, as dumi suggests you need to keep your writing with the prompt's requirement. Also, do not spend too much time for one paragraph. This TOEFL task has a time limitation and you need to finish within that allocated time. So, get hold of a good structure and start practicing with time. One reason per one body paragraph is more than enough. That way you can include all necessary feature in your essay.
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / The fewer language the world have, the more convenient we can live our life [3]

Secondly, education in our society todayishas become global.

has become / is becoming

The number of international student come from overseas is increasing constantly each year.

The numbers of international students coming from overseas for studies are increasing at a rate each year.

Therefore this is important for them to use the popular language for communication and studying.

Therefore, having a common language across the world is a very convenient solution that eliminates linguistic barriers that international students face today.
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / My favorite room is my study because it keeps my memories alive! [7]

itIt recorded the moment i got my first story book as a little gift from my parents.

... how can a room record a moment? I feel you need to put it differently;
It still keeps my first story book that I got from my parents when I was a little girl.

But to me, it's more than just a book.

To me, this book is very special,

Before that, my parents often read me books before i went to sleep.

I remember that either my mom or dad used to read this story book to me every night before I went to sleep.

After that, i can read it by myself.

As I grew, I learned to read it myself
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you [4]

Dear Sir or Madam

Dear Sir/ Madam

I am Mahdi Hajirajabi ,the network engineer who passed a job interview in your company for working at penetration test department on 23 October

.... Generally, you receive a letter from the employer informing that you've been selected and to report to work on a particular day. So, you need to write back to this person about your inability to make it on that day. So, you need not to mention about the tests because he or she already knows.

First, thank you very much for informing me that I have been selected to work as a Network Engineer at your prestige institution. I am delighted with this job offer and would really looking forward to making my fullest contribution to your organization. However, due to some unavoidable commitment, I have an issue with the date, 23rd October, that you requested me to report to work.
Pahan   
Oct 6, 2013
Writing Feedback / TOEFL writing 2 essey: Big city vs small town [4]

Let's take your first body paragraph -

There are lots of social places in big cities like restaurants, museums, bars, sporting clubs, cinemas, theatre and etc. People in big cities have many options to enjoy their life and spend their times with their friends in social places in contrary to people living in small towns who have few choices and at most cases one bar or one cinema and one ... to socialize with their friends.

In body paragraphs you should give reasons to justify your opinion. And then you must support those reasons with examples. In what you have written above, the reason is ;

People in big cities have many options to enjoy their life and spend their times with their friends in social places

So you must give prominence to this. I mean, ideally you should have started the paragraph with this line. You can have cinema and other stories for your example to back this reason.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 2 : Modern Technology make parents have no time for their children [5]

Your introduction makes me feel really confused. What is the full prompt of the essay? I guess this is about modern society rather than modern technology.

I too feel the same. In modern society, the parents have less time to spend with children is a reality. Also, your justification too suggests the same....may be a typo, but better you re-post the prompt once again :)

Since MisterWandering has given lots of good comments on your introduction, let me try one of your body paras;

Let's take the first sentence;

Modern society is developing so many student take time for playing games more than studying and talking with their mothers and fathers.

Your ideas should flow logically - What's the connection between development and gaming? You need something in between to link the two ideas.
As a result of technology advancement, in modern society, children are addicted to online gaming. This is one reason why they spend less time to interact with family members.

However, some family let them play all days just only for kind of a reason is have patties with friends. Things like these usually happen in the rich families.

I find these sentences are not really necessary. You can straight give the example to back up the reason you just stated.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / 'telephones rank first and television second' - what have a bigger impact in people's life? [9]

During the twentieth century, there are great deals of invents,inventions, such as telephone and television, making profound impacts throughouton our lives.

...
invent - verb , invention - noun

Recently, there is certain magazine which has conducted a survey to elect which inventinvention plays a most effective role in people's lives.

... here you are supposed to introduce the argument (your prompt). You are not required to justify one of those sides. Tell the reader what the argument is and doing so you need to tell the two sides of the argument. Then state your opinion. You don't have to give proof for your opinion in the introduction.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Graduate / Seeing my first seedlings sprouting out of the ground;Personal statement for Grad School [3]

The hunger for something more has always been one of the greatest drivers in my life, from learning new languages and cultures, playing my first song on the guitar and violin to planting my first garden way back in the nineties.

"The hunger for something more" has always been my key motivator in life. From learning new languages and cultures, playing my first song on the guitar and violin to planting my first garden way back in the nineties, this has been the motive behind.

he joy that comes from seeing your first seedlings sprouting out of the ground gives you the yearning to actually see what will come out of them, what flowers will emerge, what will they look like?

....nice :)

They say one can grow hungry for knowledge as for food and this yearning led me to finance which was always my lifelong career dream in waiting. I have always been looking for a program that was tailored to fulfill my career goals.

.... here, it's better you can connect your previous idea , " the hunger for something more" to this one; I mean it should come more obviously.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Essays / Extended Definiton Paper for my stickler lit teacher! [2]

The teenaged years are considered to be the golden years. It is the time for recklessness, change, and rebellion. But it is more than that. Those five years are the time you figure out who you are, who you want to be, and who you are not.

I this very much.... sounds very logical :)

Society sees teenagers as lazy and arrogant, when in reality the youth are so much more than that.

"Society sees teenagers as lazy and arrogant"? - Why do you make such a generalization ? Actually, I don't believe this is true. There may be some people who hold this opinion, but society at large do not perceive teenagers as lazy. I may agree with you about the arrogant part. However, this sounds a bit like stereotype of thinking and I like if you rephrase this a bit to avoid that effect.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Undergraduate / Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love! [4]

I am tired of trying to do everything a man can do so I can be treated equally

.... Okkkkk....now I get your point :)
I am tired of convincing others that I am on par with any man in terms of my skills and capabilities.

and Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love as a woman being her very own self.

This is why I love Smith's environment where I do not face gender discrimination allowing me to be my own self.
Yep... your revised version makes lots of sense. I think now you are on right track :)
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Undergraduate / Challenges faced in a foreign land ; UCF Common App [5]

I love challenges, even if I feel scared or not confident enough I still do my best, because it is better to try and learn something than do nothing and learn nothing. That is why on my sophomore year in high school I decided to go to School for Advanced Studies. I was terrified and nervous because it was a new experience for me. To go to college instead of a regular high school, and only take AP, honors, and college classes is quite a challenge for almost any high school student.

You can even say this gave you an opportunity to know yourself better. I mean, you were put on test with so many challenges and you somehow faced them all bravely and finally succeeded. If you like this idea, you can say something like this;

Although I was confused and scared at the beginning, I never let challenges let pass by without facing them. Though nervous, in my sophomore year I took the bold decision to attend college for Advanced Studies instead of attending a regular high school. My decision paid me off giving me an opportunity to know my strengths better.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IETLS TASK 1; CHARTS on results of a survey of adult education [7]

There are three basic things you need to structure an IELTS writing task 1.
1. Introduce the graph
2. Give an overview
3. Give the detail
I wish you arrange your contents once again in the above format and re-post here.
Pahan   
Oct 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK1 THE GRAPH SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF UK AND INTERNATIONAL STUDENTS GAINING SECON.. [3]

... It's good if you uploaded the chart. You can do it with "Attach file(s)" . We can give you better comments if we have access to the diagrams.

There are three basic things you need to structure an IELTS writing task 1.
1. Introduce the graph

The bar chart illustrates the rate of Uk and international students achieving second - class degrees or better in eight subject in Uk university.

2. Give an overview - most obvious trends
3. Give the detail -detailed account with figures
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / Should students have to wear uniforms? - Persuasive Essay [3]

Uniforms don't directly conflict with behavioral issues, but there have been students who would start a fight over something so ridiculous.

.... is this "something so ridiculous" has got anything to do with uniforms? You need to link that with the first part of your sentence!

Uniforms have deletedremoved this whole situation by removing clothes related issues that would provoke another student.

Uniforms offer the best solution to avoid the issues that are linked with the way students dress to school.

Students are encouraged to be creative and do something amazing every day by teachers or parents.

.... you have a grammar issue here
Students need encouragement to be creative.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Undergraduate / The pride and unity; Virginia Tech Essay/ 5 reasons you want to be a Hokie [2]

The pride and unity felt by the students was infections???? and within minutes I knew I wanted to be a Hokie.

The pride and unity of its students was so obvious and within minutes I knew I wanted to be a Hokie.

It makes Tech more then just a place to learn, it is a place where I can truly experience all the different activities there are

... this sentence and the previous one are loosely connected. I feel your flow is getting disturbed here.

To me college is a great opportunity to find what I am truly interested in. The dozens of different sports, clubs, intramurals, and other activities offer so many opportunities to find another passion.

To me, college is a great opportunity to find out myself ; what I am truly interested in. I find myself at Virginia Tech through its dozens of different sports, clubs, intramural and other activities.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / "wake up, sleepy head!"; My Memoir : Art is silence of thougths [3]

It was around two o'clock, the sun outside was beating mercilessly through the window and cause the room feel a little warm.

It was around two o'clock, the sun mercilessly invaded my room through the window making it pretty hot.

need to be toss out

need to be tossed out
It reminded me of a most happy, yet embarrassing memories of an art contest in middle school.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Graduate / Family and physical therapy? Need help connecting the two for PT school apps! [2]

I sat on thecourt knowing something was wrong; knowing that I was not going to be the same person that I was before.

.... specify what court - e.g. football court

The student athletic trainers soon came to my rescue and a trip to the emergency room revealed that I had completely torn my ACL and needed surgery. That is when I had my first encounter with physical therapists.

... I think you should not give so much details;
I was soon rushed to the emergency room where I was informed that my ACL (better specify what ACL stands for )was completely torn and hence I should face a surgery. This was my very first encounter with physio therapists.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / GRE Issue Essay; All nations should help support the development of a global university [4]

) What about sentence structure?? Can you suggest some points to improve on it?

.... I don't see issues with your structure. I think it is well structured and you have presented your ideas clearly and convincingly. However, I feel you can further improve the presentation of your sentences.

Some nations which are developed may compel to put forward the content which would bebeneficiary beneficial for its own country their own countries.

... You should maintain the same level in a sentence (nations --------> their)
The developed nations may have the power to influence the course contents in view of meeting their national requirements which may not be helpful for the poor countries.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Undergraduate / Smith creates an environment where I can proudly do what I love! [4]

Smith College makes me proud, of itself ,and of women.

... why does it make you proud? that is not justified here :(
When I saw a picture of Smithies lying on the grass enjoying onea sunny day , this pride transformed into my love for Smith.

I don't know if I am being too general ? Should I write about something more specific ? truthfully speaking, it's the spirit rahter than the importance of academic that has made me love Smith . I would appreciate all the help

I think this writing has made very little effort to bring up Smith's outstanding features. The statements you've made are lack of logical justifications. This is my view about this and hope others too give their comments for you to take appropriate actions on improving your writing.
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / Technology and Its Effects on Reading and Writing. [2]

Technology is the "go to" place when someone needs an answer, but it has not always been that way.

... This is not clear. Who thinks like that ? and why it is not always so? You need more details here to present this idea with more clarity;

Many people believe that technology is the place to go when someone needs an answer or solution. However, it is not the case always.

As technology has advanced over the years it has changed the way people communicate and function, which eventually will becomea big part of history.

... why you mention about history?
The main problem I see with your writing is that you do not form a proper flow of ideas. Your ideas should flow in a logical sequence. Pay some attention to this aspect!
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / CHEATING IS GOOD AND BAD! (in easy words) [5]

It's obviously th devil telling us to cheat because it's made of fire and in end it will go into that fire of the hell but we can save ourselves by choosing the right path , the right choice , to listen to our mind because heart is only made to keep us alive but the brain is seperately present in us so that we take all our decisions by being in senses , by taking the right choice and kids believe that cheating is the only way to make a teacher happy and to make his mood the best , but kids also should think that if the teacher will get to know that we cheated then he will give us big punishment and his mood will become the worst so we should never rely on cheating , we should find or make our own and easy way to success that is hardworking...

.... is this just one sentence? I cannot find any full stop anywhere :( You need to have several sentences to express all these ideas.
First, you need to be clear about what you are going to write. Then you need to put them in sentences very clearly that your reader would not get confused. Clarity is very important in writing. It's much more important than using advance vocabulary and constructing sentences with complex ideas.

You have to pay lots of attention to this aspect!
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / [TOEFL] Telephones and emails have made personal communication less required [5]

To begin with, telephones and email help people, who live far away from other people, to connect each other.

To begin with, telephones and emails help people to stay connected despite of the fact that they live far apart from one anothrer

Unlike email, send message by using mail service could be lost and could be sent to wrong address.

Emails are more efficient and reliable in terms of delivery where the normal letters may get lost in transit due to wrong address or postal delays.

I can using telephones

I can use

For example, right now, I am in the U.S. It is not possible to have conversation in person with my parents, who live in my country.

.... good example :)
Pahan   
Oct 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / Some parents have many obvious similarities and differences; Compare and contrast essay [4]

My dad was thesuperstar swimmer and water polo player in high school and college. He is very involved with me and my brothers swimming and helps out at all of the swim meets.

]My dad was a star class swimmer and water polo player in high school and college.He is very much involved with me and my brother's swimming activities too.

I believe he thinks that, that keeps him cool and hip

.... I think this sounds a bit slang in an essay.

My dad is more of the strict parent about schoolwork and making sure we are getting good grades. On the other hand, my mom is more of the strict parent when it comes to getting stuff done around the house and making sure me and my brother are getting everything done.

While my dad is strict about our schoolwork and grades, my mom is more strict about our involvement with daily chores.
Pahan   
Oct 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Control Over use of Water by Government [3]

Water is considered as one of the most precious things that is required for the survival of the mankind on this planet.

. .... If it is survival, then it is not one of the most prescious things, but one of most essential things... Hope you got my point;

Water is considered as one of the most essential components for human survival on this planet.

Though 75% of the earth is covered inwith water only 1% of it is fresh water with rest being saline in nature.

Many people feel that governments should impose restrictions on the use of fresh water and some people refute this.

.... before this you need to say why it is necessary.
You said there is only 1% and then say that's why we need to take actions to manage it prudently.
Pahan   
Oct 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / ielts; examination of education system should be emphasised and implemented in each country [3]

Test or exam means study and study before holding it.

Tests or examinations require students to prepare for them before taking them and this makes students to study seriously to maintain their subject knowledge updated.

Moreover, it makes pupils ambitious and inspirationinspired enough and increases consciousness to education.

... I feel it is the competitive environment these tests and examinations create that also make students more ambitious and get them to form their own personal goals.

Also they make students ambitious and competitive that make students to pay greater attention to their studies in order to achieve their personal goals.

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