Pahan
Oct 9, 2013
Undergraduate / Med-O-lark/grades do not reflect me; Environment/Ability & Potential [4]
I don't get the first part of this sentence, specially the phrase " and anyone is going to criticize no matter what" :( If others are going to criticize then you cannot be yourself. So I guess what you try to mean is it's a place people mind their own business and abstain from criticizing others. I think you should rephrase this line.
It's the place that shaped me into the person who I am today through many lessons it taught me throughout all those years.
It's a place where you can be yourself and anyone is going to criticize no matter what, It's a place where through the years I have learn so much things about me and it have made me the person that I am today.
I don't get the first part of this sentence, specially the phrase " and anyone is going to criticize no matter what" :( If others are going to criticize then you cannot be yourself. So I guess what you try to mean is it's a place people mind their own business and abstain from criticizing others. I think you should rephrase this line.
It's a place where through the years I have learn so much things about me and it have made me the person that I am today.
It's the place that shaped me into the person who I am today through many lessons it taught me throughout all those years.