WasishaSisha
Oct 10, 2016
Writing Feedback / TED Summary : Let's Teach for Mastery by Sal Khan [11]
Hi Yonathan,
I have some notes to your first paragraph. Hopefully can help you.
... homework to students andteacher(it's still in one sentence, you don't need to write "teacher" again. It cause too many repetition) judge the student based on the score they get.
For example(I suggest you to utilize advance grammar: For Instance) , when a contractor gives ...
......and he said(,) "do it as you can" .... (you have to use comma before quotation mark for quoting speech)
Hi Yonathan,
I have some notes to your first paragraph. Hopefully can help you.
... homework to students and
For example(I suggest you to utilize advance grammar: For Instance) , when a contractor gives ...
......and he said(,) "do it as you can" .... (you have to use comma before quotation mark for quoting speech)