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GKS-U 2022 essay; language study plan

3 - Thank you so much for reviewing my essay and giving me some nice tips. I will immediately get back...

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Gaining knowledge of history of house and building

2 - This is one of the most confusing essays ever to be posted at this forum. The obvious transliteration of...

Writing Feedbackimxuan - Aug 10, 2021Holt - Aug 11, 2021
Employers should focus on personal qualities instead of qualifications and experience when hiring

2 - It is not the response of the writer is incorrect because, it is not. The writer understood the question...

Writing FeedbackBadieee - Aug 10, 2021Holt - Aug 11, 2021
How to write a Statement of Purpose for Transportation Engineering

2 - Your geomatic studies will need to show an interest in remote sensing, satellite-based global positioning, geographic information systems, drone...

EssaysJosgyeg - Aug 10, 2021Holt - Aug 11, 2021
In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because they have more children.

3 - leads to people experiencing differences in lifestyle Being a member of a large family from other individuals as...

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I am struggling with this essay : Agree or disagree "Watching TV is a waste of time for children" ?

3 - drawbacks that we do not know. After watching television for a long time , of course, children so they...

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Technology leads to the unavoidable shifting of the interactions between people - writing task 2

2 - The writer has taken a wrong and failing score discussion approach.The writer cannot use a "safe" answer by agreeing...

Writing FeedbackAnh Cao - Aug 9, 2021Holt - Aug 10, 2021
GKS U 2022, RUNN FOR A BETTER LIFE, MY BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION'S ESSAY

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The column chart gives information about the places visited by people living in Australia

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Is the extinction of individual plant and animal species the main environmental problem today?

4 - You makes some mistakes with grammar like "human health deteriorate"-"deteriorates" or one species die out -dies out...

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Many consider that history subject cannot bring any practical use - Ielts 2

2 - Where did the reference to employability come from? The original prompt does not include such a mention. Do not...

Writing Feedbackchaungan1714 - Aug 9, 2021Holt - Aug 10, 2021
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others...

2 - The writers opinion in response to the question lacks a basis and therefore, has no merit for consideration. Without...

Writing Feedbackngominhkhoa - Aug 9, 2021Holt - Aug 10, 2021
United States Decrease in Population Growth

2 - The essay does not have a proper topic introduction and thesis statement. The first paragraph is directly informative and...

Research Paperspeanut04 - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 10, 2021
[writing task 1] The graph below shows the polulation of Chile by age group between 1975 and 2035.

2 - The writer will recieve a preliminary failing GRA score for the summary overview. It is confusing and represents a...

Writing Feedbackhlinh1555 - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
IELTS Writing Task 2 Online meetings or offline meetings for teenagers?

2 - Social media interaction is a passive activity.The writer was in evor when referring to this as "encourage activeness of...

Writing Feedbackphamtran - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel

2 - The writer needs to provide a more specific image identification to help fulfill the summary requirement. The type and...

Writing FeedbackElysnguyen - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
Ambition and Persistence. Motivational Letter for MSc in AI & Machine Learning for ERASMUS MUNDUS

2 - A motivational letter is just that, a 5 paragraph summary of why you are interested in applying for the...

LettersShisuiUzumaki - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
Task 2: outdoor activities benefit more than computer games

3 - leading to higher risk of... ->a higher risk/ higher risks exposure to screen may ->screen.. have...

Writing FeedbackCaroline23vk - Aug 8, 2021heyima - Aug 10, 2021
The bar chart shows the proportion of British people who give money to charity in five age groups

2 - The writer wrote the report based on active timeline presentation. This means the activities are ongoing. However, the image...

Writing Feedbacklynrd - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
IELTS TASK 2 - SHORTER WORKING HOURS

2 - The prompt paraphrase is incomplete. It must reference the original 35 hours work week consideration as originally mentioned in...

Writing Feedbackmingyingggg - Aug 8, 2021Holt - Aug 9, 2021
Topic: outdoor activites and children

2 - The writer did a good job of offering a prompt restatement and question response. The reasoning is also based...

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IELTS Writing task 2 | Topic: Culture and cultural identity | Words: 275

2 - The writer provided general discussion points in each paragraph. The assumption will now be that the writer did not...

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Thee days the communication between people has been revolutionised by technology

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W task 1: The graph below shows average yearly rainfall in Moscow and San Francisco

2 - The writer has done a good job of comparing rainfall data and comparing the figures. The information is concise...

Writing FeedbackThnggg - Aug 7, 2021Holt - Aug 10, 2021
Writing task 2: students have the right to university education

2 - The prompt paraphrase was near perfect but, the question response was incorrect. The student altered the discussion concept and...

Writing FeedbackMinhminh777 - Aug 7, 2021Holt - Aug 8, 2021
The proportion of male and female in an Asian country who got the driver license from 1980 to 2010

2 - The trending statement would have been more / completely informative if it had "included the measurement trend as well:...

Writing FeedbackChau Anh Hoang - Aug 7, 2021Holt - Aug 8, 2021
Consumption of 6 different kinds of energy in USA

2 - Writing the summary report is not a marathon. A summary is defined as," a comprehensive and usually brief abstract,...

Writing FeedbackJunilina - Aug 6, 2021Holt - Aug 7, 2021
Italy student visa cover letter

2 - Visa cover letter requirements vary from country to country. The specifics are part of the student visa application packets....

Student Talkra1yyan - Aug 6, 2021Holt - Aug 6, 2021
The given map illustrate the redevelopment process of the island and their facilities.

2 - Let me start by saying that the with does not do a very good job of explaining himself in...

Writing FeedbackRocky_Learn - Aug 5, 2021Holt - Aug 6, 2021
The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years.

2 - The summary overview does not present a clear restatement. Since the writer did not upload the image , I...

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