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'My first instrument' - Common App Essay, Topic of my Choice, Music

3 - Maybe it is better to write Rhythm & Blues instead of RnB. Growing up in my home, I...

UndergraduateBlessedHands23 - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 25, 2009
UPenn Teacher's Autobiography '...with a loud bang, I toppled a pile of books'

5 - Thanks guys, all of these comments are invaluable. I just started editing my essay again and will make sure...

Undergraduatepbhat - Dec 22, 2009pbhat - Dec 23, 2009
COMMON APP ESSAY FOR DARTMOUTH, UPENN, NORTHWESTERN AND OTHER SCHOOLS

37 - thanks, did you get a chance to take a look at my updated essay, it was on the bottom,...

Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 22, 2009srandhawa - Dec 27, 2009
my participation in football - Elaborate on one of your extracurricular activies

3 - My four years playing this brutal sport has have left memorable moments that I will continue to think...

Undergraduatejadam101 - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 25, 2009
Common App. - Person who has influenced me, describe influence [Steven]

4 - As I walked into the room, all I could hear was a loud, painful cough. Lying in the hospital...

Undergraduatexaznxfunkx - Dec 22, 2009bardown13 - Jan 7, 2010
INSPIRE & SURE - Emory Univeristy Supplemental

7 - Instead of stating that it is one of the best research universities you should comment on one of Emory's...

UndergraduateTictac8 - Dec 22, 2009zain12qa - Dec 24, 2009
"Carnegie Mellon? What? Mellon like a watermelon?"; MAJOR & WHY CMU?

6 - imo, i think it is a bit too generic. You need to elaborate and give specific examples on how...

UndergraduateMpx - Dec 22, 2009darkwaffle - Dec 29, 2009
Something you pretend to hate but secretly like, or vice versa.

4 - Well, I am also dealing with this question for UVa painfully but have no results yet. I think u...

Undergraduatetimtebow - Dec 22, 2009Josephine0411 - Dec 23, 2009
Essay on making observations -Common app essay (just looking for a quick review)

4 - THANKS a bunches fellow applicants. i revised my essay quickly based on what you said and this is my...

Undergraduatejabbsdht - Dec 22, 2009jabbsdht - Dec 23, 2009
Eassy about how other people can change us.

2 - When I became a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints, my life seemed to be...

UndergraduateEpilane - Dec 22, 2009tchonis05 - Dec 23, 2009
Dickinson students shall become globally engaged citizen leaders

5 - This is a great essay! I love how you center you topic around the Israeli-Palestinian peace process. That...

Undergraduatejacob5642 - Dec 22, 2009pbhat - Dec 22, 2009
Common App Essay: Fictional Character... Dreams Are My Nuts and Bolts!!

15 - I'm applying to Yale, Brown, Duke and some others...so we do have 3 universities in common!...

UndergraduateAkshat - Dec 22, 2009poisonivy - Dec 27, 2009
Global Warming "I-search" research paper --- High School Freshman Honors English

4 - Thanks so much! I need the A, because I am at like 90% in the class. I guess she...

Research Papersrockrgirl01 - Dec 22, 2009rockrgirl01 - Dec 26, 2009
"my school's Pom squad" - Common App Short Answer - Activity

4 - thank you so much! your advice really helps out a lot. i'll definitely try to read over some of...

Undergraduatehlk5065 - Dec 22, 2009hlk5065 - Dec 23, 2009
Marist Supplement- why is marist 4 u?

3 - Still pretty generic. This could have been written by anyone. Why YOU, Naveena?...

Undergraduatenkhattri - Dec 22, 2009linmark - Jan 27, 2010
Tufts self identity - Ke$ha and Bushido!

8 - Thanks for the in depth response. Can you point out some spots where it seems unnatural? I didn't use...

Undergraduatemmmargarita - Dec 22, 2009mmmargarita - Dec 22, 2009
Why Chicago? Supplement - how does UChic satisfy desire for learning =)

4 - Look at how much nicer it is if you omit the first 2 words: To me, c College should...

Undergraduatetimeturner36 - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
Cornell College of Human Ecology Supplement--

4 - Yes, it is tough to give the 2 different responses and still have one memorable "main idea" that will...

Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
Common App: Evaluate a significant experience -getting lost in an airport

3 - As we made our farewells to the city and walked into the San Francisco Airport, I reluctantly thought (choose...

Undergraduatemissioncontrol - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
Research Plans at UNC

2 - When my mother had told me what was happening,... "Hi pumpkin!" she would say as I stepped through...

Undergraduateseivert9 - Dec 22, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 23, 2009
Pratt Personal Statement - Design

3 - This is an essay that seems like it could be improved by switching the first and last paragraphs. Try...

Undergraduatelaurel_ltt - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
Brown essay; why drawn to the academic fields you indicated

3 - obviously this is a very hard essay to do w/ 1000 characters(by the way im applying to brown also,...

Undergraduatesportybluei - Dec 22, 2009srandhawa - Dec 22, 2009
Unlimited learning - stanford supplement essay (why stanford?)

5 - be more specific when you say "improve my weaknesses and expand my strengths". you want to stay away from...

Undergraduatedaisyx3 - Dec 22, 2009anhammond - Dec 25, 2009
A Quantum Amateur-MIT World Essay

2 - Most kind kindest You have not really written about him here. You said he influenced you, but then...

UndergraduateNeoGeo - Dec 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 24, 2009
"life is not promised" - FAMU essay . no longer than 500 words. prompt below

2 - Without family, many people seem to make simple blunders in life that could have been easily avoided through the...

Undergraduateshaniquajene - Dec 22, 2009EF_Susan - Dec 23, 2009
the Pacific Ocean, Describe a personal event- common app

5 - I'm still bad at English therefore I couldn't help you improve vocabulary. But through the paragraph, I feel you...

Undergraduatejeovanshadow - Dec 22, 2009autumnwave - Dec 25, 2009
My New "Job" / Odyssey of the Mind - Being A Big Sister, common apps essay (own topic)

5 - thanks so much for your feedback :D i had been editting them in the mean time and trying very...

Undergraduateamyhr0311 - Dec 22, 2009amyhr0311 - Dec 24, 2009
Preparing for IELTS exam, need help in writing essays

10 - I think you should read the guidence for the ITELS test.. It will help you alot. best of luck.....

Essaysreebok - Dec 22, 2009Hthmn - Aug 19, 2016
AP Biology book. I am caught in life, utterly inescapable life - "How did you get Caught"

9 - btw I just found your fatal flaw, so to speak. you say you are caught, but then you talk...

Undergraduateeffovex - Dec 22, 2009keshwa01 - Dec 30, 2009
"to explore the field of my dream in R&D" - Journey towards a PhD

4 - Hi, Thanks for your inputs! Ive just made some changes to the opening paragraph to make it more...

GraduateNLP - Dec 22, 2009NLP - Jan 4, 2010
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