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The New School for AAS in Fashion Design

2 - The overall presentation is strong and well informed. You have a clear idea of how you see your future...

Undergraduatesweets9 - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
Ielts writing task 1 about a performance of a bus company

3 - If possible, can you give me an estimated band score for my writing? Thank you so much!...

Writing Feedbacklilikim - Jul 11, 2023lilikim - Jul 13, 2023
Writing IELTS task1: how elderly people in the United States spent their free time

4 - I suggest that the analysis is written based on the trends. You can analyze which experienced growths in one...

Writing Feedbackaye123456 - Jul 11, 2023danni5 - Jul 20, 2023
The provided maps illustrate how a city hospital changed over a 3-year period from 2007 to 2010

2 - How many maps were provided? You have to indicate the number and also,when referring to the trending difference,...

Writing Feedbacksarinenofine - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in different places in childhood

2 - This is an example of an essay that has a strong reasoning and logic basis. You can manage to...

Writing Feedbackhiagary - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
WRITING 2: There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher

2 - Unfortunately, the essay does not meet the minimum 250 word count. So there will be heavy deductions placed upon...

Writing Feedbackngocanhnguyen200 - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
Shopping habits depend most on age group. Agree/disagree

2 - This is a falsehood and misrepresentation of the given prompt. There is no reference to such experts in...

Writing Feedbackminhphuong2402 - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
Every year several languages die out. Many thinks life will be easier. Agree/Disagree?

2 - Wow! Overkill. Keep it simple. This is not an extent essay so there is no need to be...

Writing Feedbackdesukanani - Jul 11, 2023Holt - Jul 12, 2023
It is better for college students to live in schools than to live at home with their parents

3 - i am not so good at the idea so i will just point out some mistakes in your report...

Writing Feedbackmummim - Jul 10, 2023aye123456 - Jul 10, 2023
The chart below gives information about the revenue of a&v tech company from 2000 to 2004

3 - hi! I think your sentence "The cameras underwent marginal growth, finishing at nearly $4 million at the end of...

Writing Feedbackpthghg - Jul 10, 2023aye123456 - Jul 10, 2023
IELTS 2: I AM ABOUT TO HAVE IELTS EXAM - tell me my weakness and strength; Happiness

2 - The essay is only focused on discussing your personal point of view. You do not effectively represent individual discussion...

Writing Feedbackaties - Jul 10, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
IELTS TASK 2: From big companies to individuals, the power to create films has shift

2 - I am afraid that you are displaying a lack of control over the use of the English language. You...

Writing Feedbacktuananh45 - Jul 9, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: EDUCATION AND ECONOMY

2 - These references should have been made an integral part of your opinion sentence. That way you would have...

Writing FeedbackMyan - Jul 9, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
IELTS TASK 2: Finacial aid becoming the problem

2 - Incorrect. There was never any indication in the original prompt that the wealthy countries were using the wrong...

Writing FeedbackTran Hai Dung - Jul 8, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
An Evaluation of the Possibility of Extraterrestrial Life helped me find my disadvantages

2 - The topic you have chosen to discuss is quite timely and interesting. The presentation itself shows that you have...

Research Papersdchyydsg - Jul 8, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
Task 1: Line graph: the number of public transit passengers from 1989 to 2009 ..

3 - Thanks for your advices. I will note it....

Writing FeedbackAnn17 - Jul 8, 2023Ann17 - Jul 10, 2023
Writing Task 1: Line graph - The percentage of tourists to 4 attractions in Scotland for 30 years

2 - Were so what? What do you mean? That the measurements did not change? Then by all means say...

Writing Feedbackdangngoctung4 - Jul 8, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
What are the advantages and disadvantages of living a number of places during childhood years

2 - Why does this essay sound like it was translated from a foreign language by an untrained AI translator? It...

Writing Feedbacknguyendat6002109 - Jul 8, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing.

2 - While the essay meets the word count and the discussion does relate to family matters as indicated in the...

Writing Feedbackthaoly2007 - Jul 8, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
The two maps illustrate the changes of theater in the year 2010 and 2012.

2 - The reporting task might get an automatic failing score because of the word count. You did not meet the...

Writing Feedbackcavoixanh - Jul 7, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
Task 1: Line graph: the usage of oil in four different countries from 1966 to 2006

5 - I think you should replace the phrase At first glance into something else. However, I've learnt a lot from...

Writing FeedbackAnn17 - Jul 7, 2023lilikim - Jul 13, 2023
Line graph - percentage of visitors going to four different tourist attractions in Brighton

2 - The summary overview is not effective as it is a run on sentence. It fails to properly enumerate the...

Writing Feedbackandy241 - Jul 6, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: Bar graph - the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020

2 - You are making an assumption that the reader can actually see the bar graph. That is not the...

Writing Feedbackdangngoctung4 - Jul 6, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing

2 - Remember that you are being given a preliminary score for the clarity of your thought process. This includes...

Writing Feedbackhayley2601 - Jul 6, 2023Holt - Jul 10, 2023
Writing task 2: Nowadays, an increasing number of people are deciding to live on their own

2 - Okay. This essay is already proving to the examiner that you did not understand the question that was provided...

Writing Feedbackmeilan - Jul 4, 2023Holt - Jul 8, 2023
Writing IELTS Task 1 - Living alone in England - Mixed Charts (Bar Chart & Pie Chart)

4 - @Holt Thank you so much! Can you estimate the score for this article please? @dangngoctung4 Thanks a lot!...

Writing Feedbackyenlllle - Jul 4, 2023yenlllle - Jul 13, 2023
Writing IELTS Task 1: The bar chart shows the distribution of employment among agriculture

3 - You have some misspell words. For example, "contries" "accouting" "acounted". You also should change the percentage into words, such...

Writing FeedbackLinh Pham HA - Jul 3, 2023thaoly2007 - Jul 8, 2023
The chart delineates how many boys and girls played six kinds of sports in an English town in 2012

2 - There are several problems with the summary overview and trending statement. The summary overview does not give a precise...

Writing Feedbacktuahung248 - Jul 3, 2023Holt - Jul 8, 2023
Education is necesssary in the fight against overpopulation. What main reasons?

2 - Okay, the main problem here is the constant use of the term "edification" to refer to "education". You have...

Writing Feedbackmsue212 - Jul 3, 2023Holt - Jul 8, 2023
IELTS TASK 1: bar chart- percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts

4 - Make sure to post an image of a graph, chart, or pie based on the prompt for better assessment...

Writing Feedbacktrangdo26 - Jul 2, 2023dangngoctung4 - Jul 8, 2023
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