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Essay about Deep Learning for Grad School Application

2 - There seems to be 2 thesis statement paragraphs in this essay when only one is needed. The first paragraph...

Research Papershoudini2518 - Oct 8, 2022Holt - Oct 9, 2022
Do you agree that music is a good way to bring people in different cultures and ages together?

2 - The topic is not a restatement but an opinion presentation of the writer which is not the expected interpretation...

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Is the Internet "Making Us Stupid"?

2 - The writer has shown that there was no double checking of the information written prior to the submission of...

Writing FeedbackIris HSIEH - Oct 8, 2022Holt - Oct 9, 2022
IELTS Task 2 - Online communication is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people

2 - The writer failed to keep track of his word count. There is a reason the words are capped at...

Writing FeedbackXuan Son - Oct 8, 2022Holt - Oct 8, 2022
IELTS writing task 1 with a line graph about carbon dioxide emission

3 - This essay can not see the clear analysis or outlines of the graph, maybe because it is too detailed...

Writing Feedbacklittlered990 - Oct 7, 2022Iris HSIEH - Oct 8, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: CHEAP TOURISM

2 - The writer has taken an incorrect approach to the discussion. This is actually a comparison essay based upon the...

Writing FeedbackAmerianna - Oct 7, 2022Holt - Oct 8, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: ONLINE COURSES NEVER BE AS GOOD AS IN-PERSON COURSES

3 - The first paragraph is not clear and misleading. To paraphrase the question as the topic sentence will be better....

Writing FeedbackAnnaDao - Oct 7, 2022Iris HSIEH - Oct 8, 2022
Study abroad - Language Plan for Global Korean Scholarship

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the directions I did feel like I missed some details and needed advice....

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The annual rice production of 4 countries

2 - While the essay can still be completed using lesser words, the writer did a pretty good job of completing...

Writing FeedbackDanielDang - Oct 6, 2022Holt - Oct 7, 2022
Ielts writing task 2 - Knowledge gained from personal experience and from classroom instruction

2 - The writer missed the point of the discussion. While his perspective tries to covers the general assessment or public...

Writing Feedbackanhvancao - Oct 6, 2022Holt - Oct 7, 2022
The line chart shows the amount of income from movie theatre ticket and DVD sales in The USA

2 - The essay is overwritten and does not follow the maximum 200 word compliance for the reporting essay. While it...

Writing Feedbacknmduc1276 - Oct 6, 2022Holt - Oct 7, 2022
The line graph illustrates the number of users of five (distinguish) distinguished communication

NEW - As the first sentence in th summary overview, I have to say that the writer did not do a...

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Wildlife conservation. Commonwealth Scholarship - Personal Statement

2 - Since the applicant already has a previous MS certification, his paper should be sounding more professional and more career...

ScholarshipSgogoi - Oct 6, 2022Holt - Oct 6, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: IS READING BETTER THAN WATCHING TV?

2 - The writer has not correctly represented the idea for discussion. A topic was presented as a discussion point, not...

Writing FeedbackGabriell - Oct 5, 2022Holt - Oct 7, 2022
Digitalization in Indonesia - Career Plan for Chevening Essay

2 - What does the visa policy for Chevening students have to do with the career plans? That is an irrelevant...

Scholarshipaulia - Oct 5, 2022Holt - Oct 6, 2022
Chevening Study Essay - Career Change to Arts and Illustration Field

2 - Unfortunately, the Chevening Scholarships are not meant for students who are looking to create a career change for themselves....

ScholarshipTanzeelaWasti - Oct 4, 2022Holt - Oct 5, 2022
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR A PHD PROGRAM (BIOLOGY) IN UNIVERSITY OF UTAH

2 - As far as a personal statement goes, this essay does its best to portray the Phd applicant in the...

GraduateTaylor X - Oct 4, 2022Holt - Oct 5, 2022
It is widely believed nowadays that social knowledge and the ability to adapt in a changing society

3 - I think your essay is divided into too many paragraph. To be more specific, each paragraph should contain at...

Writing Feedbackphongmai0301 - Oct 4, 2022Hoang Minh - Oct 4, 2022
Mental health policies. Motivation letter for EuroPubHealth+ Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

4 - Hello Gustavo, I think you should elaborate more on how your experiences with mental health issues has pushed you...

LettersKoiD - Oct 4, 2022Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
(IELTS WRITING TASK 2) Famous for being famous

5 - Lemme help you correct some of your mistakes: 1st paragraph: not for one's accomplishments but for publicity stunts: it...

Writing Feedbackcnc1996 - Oct 4, 2022Gabriell - Oct 5, 2022
I want to bring awareness of wildlife conservation. Commonwealth Scholarships - Personal Statement

4 - Well explained essay. Try to also include the reasons for applying to your university of choice...

Scholarshipshraddha1997 - Oct 4, 2022Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
Constant battle - umich supplement - community essay (294 words)

2 - The idea behind this essay is to show the way that the applicant positively views herself through her membership...

Undergraduaterimjhim - Oct 3, 2022Holt - Oct 4, 2022
The Interdisciplinary program. Motivation Letter For Master's In Norway

2 - The letter does not properly represet a motivation to study the course in Norway. Since this is a specialized...

LettersSamee Ullah - Oct 3, 2022Holt - Oct 3, 2022
Master's degree in Korean language and literature - Goal of study and study plan

2 - The goal of study and study plan for a graduate student must be approached based upon the career plan...

ScholarshipSubhratri - Oct 3, 2022Holt - Oct 3, 2022
UIUC Supplementary Essay_Explain your experience related to your first-choice major.

2 - Never opt to apply for a course that you are not experienced in. If you do not have even...

Undergraduateminiwinsle - Oct 3, 2022Holt - Oct 3, 2022
IElTS WRITTING TASK 2 - SUCCESS TOPIC. Do you think wealth the best measure of success?

3 - happiness are is a crucial factor a businessman who always lives in Recent marriage surveys conducted in America...

Writing FeedbackGozilla - Oct 2, 2022cnc1996 - Oct 5, 2022
Ielts Writing task 2: Factors when choosing a job; salary as the top priority?

5 - boost them to work harder -> (collocational problems) to be better versions of themself themselves My...

Writing FeedbackGiangGiang - Oct 1, 2022cnc1996 - Oct 5, 2022
Motivation letter to pursue a phd in Battery Management system in the University

2 - The admissions committee is not looking to learn about the applicant's work biography, which is what he summarized in...

LettersNishant1989 - Oct 1, 2022Holt - Oct 2, 2022
ENG102 draft review College students & insomnia

2 - The thesis statement in the first paragraph could be made clearer. There are 2 separate topics presented there; the...

Research Papersgloriaa - Oct 1, 2022Holt - Oct 2, 2022
Writing a summary on 2 news articles about obesity

4 - some of your minor mistakes: and I haven't written in years: there is a wrong preposition usage here. Replace...

Writing FeedbackDts007 - Sep 30, 2022Gabriell - Oct 5, 2022
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