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Essay about four major generations.

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FAMILY: "Sunshine essay" - Sunshine danced colorfully on the doorsteps

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Chivalry Essay, Advantages and Disadvantages

2 - Too much retelling of the story, not enough analysis. Also, what analysis there is tends to miss the mark....

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"The Candy store" essay - need help on editing and a maybe a conclusion

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Toefl: What is a very important skill a person should learn

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"differences in work" essay

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Plato, Aristotle, Dante (poetry v. philosophy essay)

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"Private Me" essay - need help on editing and a conclusion.

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"Future me" essay, need help with conclusion

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Stefanie Marie - need help on editing and a CONCLUSION.

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Contribution to diversity: I am a master at Pingpong

3 - I am a master atPingpong, and I have led my team to win "National Top Prize". I know...

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"table tennis" - common essay

2 - I am not the physically strongest table tennis player, but I work harder than every other team member. When...

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For advice: Account of my experience

4 - Oh, that is an interesting question! In common usage, "temperament" suggests emotion, and ability to control one's temper,...

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toefl:what kind of person makes a good roommate?

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how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented

3 - in the beginning, you stated off with a little background info, which was nice but you kind of lost...

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"born in the rural area of Chin" - pls. help revise: My background

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For revision or suggestions: The activity I like most

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'I am easy to communicate' - University Of XXX - essay

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TOEFL; I believe it is a good idea to build a large shopping center in our community

2 - Add some disadvantages in the middle like pollution,..etc and finally conclude with your points......

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Is christopher columbus a great historical figure?

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Toefl Essay - increasing the price of gasoline and electricity

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the awakening--Sometimes in literature the most important themes are develo

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foil essay on Wuthering Heights

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Studying in a particular field should be step by step. Research, knowledge and practice is enough

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It's Unfair: Why is bullying getting more and more common?

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many people learned a foreign language in their own country...

5 - I guess I am not qualified to guess about what score you would get. Are you preparing for the...

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Philosophy: Is Aristotle right in his definition of happiness ?

2 - Oh, there are a few counter-arguments! Theists: You can cite religious arguments that hold the highest good to...

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Essay about New Deal and the Role of Government

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European Union essay advice and corrections

2 - This essay will discuss the question whether the European Union should continue it enlargement process or intensify integration within...

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Culinary passion (an career investigation essay)

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This is an description essay about my bedroom

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toefl essay: study at home by using technology/study or traditional school

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"The insight of AIDS disease" - essay

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Feedback sought on an Economic Development Essay

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Essay about Zambia - feedback on information, flow, and format appreciated!

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Writing Feedbacknguyend - Dec 3, 2008 / nguyend - Dec 3, 2008
TOEFL: Why people visit museums? History/ Broaden Perspectives/ Place of Attraction

3 - As a lover of travel and art, I always enjoy visits to excellent museum when taking a tour of...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 3, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
'crowded, polluted, noisy place' - a new high school may be built in the neighborhood

5 - thank you very much!!!)))...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 24, 2008 / Asselya - Dec 3, 2008
Essay about selecting the course.

6 - However, this claim overlooks the potential advantages of students' own selected course, such as increasing students' motivation and their...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 28, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
toefl: overemphasizing on personal lives of famous people by media

3 - As a student majoring in mass media, I think that it is true that modern media is overemphasizing the...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
Narrative Ethnographic Essay - Needs help

2 - In 1995, a Minister, along with his wife and five children, emigrated from Guatemala City, Guatemala. Her youngest...

Writing Feedbacknguyend - Dec 2, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
Have there been any bumps in the road in your life.

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Poltical Science, Multiple Questions Essay on Political Issues

2 - Oh, you have to think of the words as if you have only so many to use! Try to...

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Datong District, the oldest district of Taipei City, is my hometown.

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Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 1, 2008 / camellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008
'it is the right thing to do' - Page 218 Autobiographical Essay

5 - Well, I would not call it a discrepancy... but the reason I mentioned it is that what it made...

Writing Feedbackrandomzm - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
MONOPOLY VS. PERFECT COMPETITION (research paper feedback)

3 - Thank you! I'll make some changes and will focus on MLA citation; it's not due until next week so...

Writing FeedbackAndrew - Dec 1, 2008 / Andrew - Dec 1, 2008
'Budget cuts' - the leading problem facing our eduactional system today?

2 - Budget cuts have been the leading problem facing our educational system today. When the state of California announced a...

Writing Feedbackmavictoria - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Passion for a subject or cause? UD Essay Help

2 - Over the past sixteen years of doctor visits, ... I was too young to understand why Sam was...

Writing Feedbackameretouch - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
US Space Project - English CLEP essay (space exploration!)

2 - Space exploration has made information available to us that previously unimaginable. Issues like hunger, disease, global warming ......

Writing FeedbackRacheli - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Research Paper (Argument)-Reflections of Society in Children's Literature

2 - I thought the opening paragraph was fine, and your intention clearly stated in the last sentence. Though still...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Dec 1, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Haitian immigrants and their choice to struggle for better life-essay check

2 - The lives of immigrants are very difficult and filled with many hardships. In "Brother I`m Dying" Edwidge Danticat...

Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Should teachers permit to teach if they don't have teacher's certification

2 - Teacher education has always played an important role in determining student outcomes. To be certified in Illinois, teachers must...

Writing Feedbackxiulyu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
The Watergate paper feedback

2 - Nice job. I did not find errors, but I guess it would be great to have a bit of...

Writing Feedbackop2607 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
TOEFL essay: Zoos have no useful purpose. Agree/disagree

4 - No, I only know about editing. However, I know some Native speakers of English who do not write as...

Writing Feedbackmaryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Describe a character in fiction: How the steel was tempered

3 - He once said: "Personal business must yield to collective interest." He respected his superiors and learned a lot...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
About an activity: the magazine Young

3 - After a whole day's efforts, which ranged from printing posters to blowing balloons, everyone was exhausted. However, because of...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
TOEFL ESSAY - serious or entertaining movies

4 - Instead of, "Here are my reasons," try: My reasons include the following: Oh, all the corrections that...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
'change must come from the top' - written for English CLEP

3 - Kevin, Thank you so much! This helped and I hope I'll pass the CLEP.. :)...

Writing FeedbackRacheli - Nov 27, 2008 / Racheli - Dec 1, 2008
Arumentative Essay(MLA Style) Is Spanking the Right Way to Discipline

3 - Thanks Kevin...

Writing Feedbacksunnyside - Nov 29, 2008 / sunnyside - Nov 30, 2008
Essay about "what I would do with some land"

2 - we should not decide their destinies for... capability to take care of them or of whether or not...

Writing Feedbackmaryna_lm - Nov 29, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Nov 29, 2008

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