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East meets West UC Prompt #2

3 - They contradict one another... that is a good observation. Can you also include a paragraph that gives the opposite...

UndergraduateSmH - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
"the person i am today" rutgers diversity prompt

3 - Don't switch verb tense: My weekend consisted of going to... this is supposed to be about how you...

Undergraduatereptar28 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
I loved fighting; Personal statement for University of Arizona

4 - I have to warn you... the admissions people might be prejudice against you if you include MMA and the...

Undergraduatejk17 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl- Do you think it is good for teenagers to work while schooling?

3 - Good corrections! But, you are wrong to think they can be corrected by reading aloud. People learning English...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
'Do not lean on your own past successes' - LSE application (business, economics)

8 - thnx u soo muchh ;)...

Graduatealibaba 1983 - Oct 21, 2009alibaba 1983 - Nov 18, 2009
Admissions Essay about my future career plans-feedback

3 - As a child, I was the member of my family who took interest in helping those who were in...

Undergraduatemonkey1992 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Footnote/endnote - citing internet source

4 - nd.edu/~sheridan/AmerAntiquitCitationStyle.pdf I wish I could help you more! Citation styles are hard to learn. I know MLA, APA...

Grammar, Usagebip - Nov 13, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl - "not everything in life is according to our wish"

2 - This is basic part of our life. There are many things in our lives which are forced to...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 17, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl essay which changed people's lives automobiles bicycles airplanes

3 - Although new invention will changed the world more or less, only a few inventions can take the significant change...

Writing Feedbackrmli - Nov 18, 2009Jin - Nov 18, 2009
"Rachel's Challenge" - Common App: significant experience, achievement, risk...

4 - One more sentence at the end of that first para could make it more meaningful... give one more sentence...

Undergraduateneil098 - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
What are the problems with English Education in Korea?

9 - Throughout my middle school and high school educational courses, I had a good grade in English. I earned good...

Writing Feedbackkimster79 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Dreams and Aspirations ( UC Prompt )

3 - ...news and being introduced to these depressing accounts of other people's experiences throughout the world. Infinitesimal means "small."...

Undergraduatepacers7ind - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Comparative Rhetorical Analysis my Topic " Good Hair- Bad Hair"

2 - The fascination with our First Lady 's hair has a lot of people scratching their heads, but not African...

Book Reportsjenniferdavis - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl essay"What are the qualities of the good coworker?"

4 - Throughout in my experience, I noticed that good co worker should have certain qualities. She or he should work...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Writing Music Reviews (Common App Short Response)

10 - It wasn't until sixth grade that when my English teacher ... Hey, maybe you should use some voice...

Undergraduateomarxcore - Nov 12, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
UCF Essay Prompt "Bumps in the Road"

3 - Thanks ;) I just wish I could write as well for the SAT, 25 minutes is not enough time...

Undergraduatekael92 - Nov 16, 2009kael92 - Nov 18, 2009
"Economics chose me" - UC Personal Statement Prompt #1 on Economics

5 - "I began purchasing bulks of high demand electronics for half of their retail price and selling them trough craigslist."...

Undergraduateagsabeh - Nov 13, 2009aleggz - Nov 17, 2009
MA College of pharamacy supplement - to be part of the 6 year Doctor of Pharmacy program

NEW - "Please submit a brief 250-word essay discussing your reasons for choosing the specific health care career you wish to...

Undergraduatenmp07 - Nov 17, 2009 -
"Can you not move?"; Video Production Essay

3 - from what I heard , is exactly what Allegheny provides. (i think its heard, not hear, dont take my...

Undergraduatealexakrivoniak - Nov 17, 2009evildanny2009 - Nov 17, 2009
A Future Doctor: 7 year BS-MD Program Essay

5 - Thank you everyone for editing this! I really appreciate the feedback. glorfs: Thanks for the in depth analysis!...

Undergraduatelahariv - Nov 15, 2009lahariv - Nov 17, 2009
Comparative Essay for ENG 1100... subject: Depression

3 - thanks for the help...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009Maethirion - Nov 17, 2009
Do I even need too use alot of Quotes in a essay?

8 - No too many quotes will make your essay without well supportin commentary...

Essaysgain - Nov 15, 2009mshalavadi - Nov 17, 2009
Open topic Supplement Essay about guitar-playing

9 - Thanks for all the feedback! I've revised the final two paragraphs and my conclusion is more explicit and...

Undergraduateglorfs - Nov 15, 2009glorfs - Nov 17, 2009
My career goals - need help getting started

4 - I always tell people they should be purposeful in writing admissions essays. you should have a strategy. your strategy...

Undergraduateamybelle1092 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Important teenage decisions should be taken by parents or elders

3 - Thanks, Arjun, I noticed some of the same things. The age of fifteen is a time of numerous...

Writing Feedbackhatung94 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
My DECA Story... UC prompt #2

2 - That 1st place trophy is a token that represents a tangible award, but it could mean less to me....

Undergraduateckseakayck - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
An experience through which i have gained respect for differences

10 - Excellent, thanks! I see that you did get established as a contributor. That's great, and I really appreciate the...

Undergraduatecissylewel - Nov 8, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
"born to immigrants from Japan and Croatia" - Common App Diversity Essay

3 - As the only first-generation daughter born to immigrants from Japan and Croatia, my upbringing was a strange blend of...

Undergraduatezomgyams - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
Are human needs for farmland, housing, industry more important than saving lands

3 - Nowadays, a growing number of people focus on an issue that which is the most important for human beings...

Writing Feedbacktiantianwenzi - Nov 16, 2009EF_Susan - Nov 17, 2009
Failed Descriptive Essay Subject Costa Rica

2 - No using cliches at EssayForum! :-) Just kidding... cliches are people, too. By the way, thanks so...

Writing FeedbackMaethirion - Nov 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 17, 2009
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