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Yale Supplement -- Dancing to Latin Pop

2 - you are more apt to notice times - avoid the use of "you" amount of reading for lit...

Undergraduatepafablach - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 30, 2009
TOEFL; Public transportation keeps society from the depletion of natural resources

3 - people can usetake public ..., train, and subway, the oil and gasoline nonrenewable will run out quickly. Using...

Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009s011208 - Nov 30, 2009
Common App: Monkey Children.

2 - My palms gathered sweat and my heart raced to an uneven beat. - You really like doing that, don't...

Undergraduatejen50192 - Nov 29, 2009yang - Nov 30, 2009
SOP for doctorate admission in US universities - feedback

4 - Hi. p1: ... I will offer... p2: ... dates back to... p3: ... the problem was... ...

Graduatejohnywalker - Nov 28, 2009Samira S - Nov 30, 2009
Review on article of Corporate Farming

3 - I was trying to say it was a bias because the interview was done a few days after the...

Research Papersalex10 - Nov 29, 2009alex10 - Nov 30, 2009
'Nianna was a young girl' - Common App Essay: Influential Person

5 - Oh thank you for catching those lol! :D i shall go edit your right now!...

Undergraduatengocampo92 - Nov 29, 2009ngocampo92 - Nov 30, 2009
UC Prompt #1. scattered thoughts.The workd you come from

8 - Content Suggestions You have a great topic I think you just need to expand more on how other cultures...

UndergraduateFireTiger - Nov 29, 2009ngocampo92 - Nov 30, 2009
Every person's American Dream may be different in scope; the American Dream - UT

5 - It's better to write all people instead of all men. Don't perpetuate old, gender-oppressive language. Complete this...

Undergraduateut2010 - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
Reviewing LOR for my student in computer science

4 - ...where it was approved by the judges with A+ score. For these reasons, I strongly recommend him for...

Graduatemahdi1984 - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
"how I grow up"-review and specification is need for this essay--UC#

3 - I am sitting on a typical Boeing 747 which is heade d from China back to United States. ...

Undergraduatextyxty - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
Prompt #2 - The Misguided Martyr

3 - Wow, powerful! Don't let this kind of harsh memory keep you down; alcohol has caused lots of people to...

Undergraduatedarkzadez - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
"Experiences and involvements" - uc prompt1

5 - Well, it's okay to start it the way you did, but you need to answer the prompt question before...

Undergraduatebilibala - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
Short Answer------Rock Band

2 - shake - shaked It was never a thing that I have to treat with an attitude, but already a...

Undergraduatexugx29 - Nov 30, 2009yang - Nov 30, 2009
My Father, My Hero - Free Response for UC

3 - As I look back on my life, a figure continues to pop up in my reflection: my father. ...

UndergraduateParthew - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
personal essay. uc. a move changed everything or almost.

15 - It's a great one!!! I really like it... but just one more thing, I feel the ending is not...

Undergraduatemeisj0n - Oct 31, 2009Laurazhu - Nov 30, 2009
Chemistry Major-UC Prompt #1 Transfer Student

2 - For the first half of your essay, I was confused thinking Pharmacology was your intended major. I believe it...

Undergraduateashtene - Nov 29, 2009linmark - Nov 30, 2009
No matter where I would be placed, I would always be Persian. An experience of cultural difference

5 - Now carve out some paragraphs. The first paragraph should end with a sentence that tells the main idea of...

Undergraduatejsnaps - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
UC Prompt 1: Pursuing Field in Biotech

5 - Delighted because I assumed that she made another Malaysian delicacy to showcase to me, I answered the call, eager...

Undergraduatehoiboy79 - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"

13 - thanks a lot...

Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
University of Washington "Describe an experience of cultural difference" prompt

5 - Great first sentence! You capture the reader's attention by saying something they'll disagree with! That is smart and interesting....

Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
Princeton Quote Essay- If not us, who? If not now, when?

4 - To come up with an opening that is not so cliche, brainstorm phrases that capture the meaning of the...

Undergraduatebmachado - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
"Club Advertisement" UC Prompt 2

6 - How about enhancing this sentence a little: I head a cause about which I am passionate -- organizing...

UndergraduateScatterBrain - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
My friend became involved wiht local drug trafficking;TRANSFER - UC, psychology major

4 - My interest in the field of psychology began in my sophomore year of high school. I had always been...

UndergraduateKittenParade - Nov 30, 2009mars123456 - Nov 30, 2009
uc transfer #1 sociology major marine corp expereinces

2 - The boot camp helped me to understand how important is to know a role. The military is based on...

Undergraduateterios - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
Common App-- short activity! Photography

4 - No murder allowed! :-) I like this essay a lot, and I would not want to change...

Undergraduatenannna - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
USC Essay - Relfect on a Challenge: Surfing

3 - reassurance from the instructor... The first line of this is a little weak. Water is not the only...

Undergraduatebrngmchllthhrzn - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
"The choices you make" -UC essay prompt #1

3 - Don't keep telling yourself you are bad at grammar, or your subconscious mind might start to believe it! If...

Undergraduatebirdslapper - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
USC: What is important? (500-700 chars)

8 - Make a stronger connection between that first and last para. The first para ends with this: as hard as...

UndergraduateTimMill - Nov 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
my passion for wanting to help animals - UC essay #2 Prompt.

3 - It's very intimidating to look at a long paragraph like this. Okay, I'll muster some courage and read it,...

Undergraduatescbredall - Nov 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
The Fog Rolls Out - "Imagine you are looking out a window..."

4 - There is A wooden cabin with unfinished windows nestled in the mountains of Vermont. You write beautifully!...

Undergraduateamaryrose - Nov 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 30, 2009
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