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'I can read / write / fight / look / talk' - UC tranfer essay prompt #2 overcame

7 - Yes, that is for sure! My mind must have played a trick on me; I think I imagined...

UndergraduateZonum85 - Nov 18, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
UC 1) My passion for the english language

3 - ...and philosophical searching, one constant has remained in my life: my love of reading and writing. My frustration...

Undergraduatejefftwomey - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
Moving from Chinatown to So Cal - prompt #1.

6 - I agree with Jeff just write until you see something that you liked I wrote about 6 drafts of...

UndergraduateFireTiger - Nov 26, 2009anjello - Nov 27, 2009
UC Prompt #1: Family First

5 - Fix this sentence: Coincidentally, the expression placed at the center of the refrigerator for my family members to read...

Undergraduatestephbust - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
uc prompt:i am proud of Being Tri lingual

4 - Moreover , I strongly believe that it would be to my advantage to learn as many languages as I...

Undergraduatenergua - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
"Tears of Life" - UC Essay #2

8 - thank you for the input, Kevin. :) and thank you for your sympathies. Yeah, I am always grateful...

Undergraduateshanemrys - Nov 25, 2009shanemrys - Nov 27, 2009
Princeton essay: fear of death

3 - Its up to you, but I just wanted to mention that in this book I read about writing college...

Undergraduatejennyz - Nov 27, 2009rohi92 - Nov 27, 2009
Prompt #1-- What my school has done to me!

4 - Hey! Thanks so much for reading through my essay, much appreciated. I like where you are going in...

Undergraduatecache189 - Nov 26, 2009silligrl555 - Nov 27, 2009
"Studying Spanish" - U of M Diversity Essay Question

12 - purl81 is right. You have 2 different essays going on. Focus on the second half; it discusses a specific...

Undergraduateaguafria22 - Nov 13, 2009rohi92 - Nov 27, 2009
"a typical Hispanic family from Mexican descent" -UC Prompt #1 were I came from?

11 - Thank you Nikhurs!...

Undergraduatedcarreno1 - Nov 25, 2009dcarreno1 - Nov 27, 2009
essay question for ST. Mary's University

4 - thank You so very much! The strange part though is that I had my teacher edit it..I guess he...

Undergraduatet1292 - Nov 27, 2009t1292 - Nov 27, 2009
"a family of well educated people" - UC essay #1

3 - Thanks, that does sound better. What do you think of the rest?...

Undergraduatecda4eb - Nov 27, 2009cda4eb - Nov 27, 2009
Volunteering at the hospital program made me proud and led to the person that I am today.

9 - do you guys think its ok?...

Undergraduateihurdleyou - Nov 22, 2009ihurdleyou - Nov 27, 2009
Christian private school - Requesting Critique for UC Prompt 1

2 - first sentence grammar is off. that paragraph is somewhat strange too. aside from...I studied the Bible...by yourself? in class?...

Undergraduatenachichi - Nov 27, 2009meisj0n - Nov 27, 2009
I knew before leaving high school, I had to fill a void that just wouldn't leave. Personal Challenge

NEW - Hello! I've just finished my draft on UC prompt 2. I will really appreciate any critiques, suggestions or corrections...

Undergraduatetwifan07 - Nov 27, 2009 -
Devotion to Volunteering at Senior Center - UC Prompt 2

6 - Guess what, you're referring to her as grandmother still in the opening line. So get it together on that...

UndergraduateReach - Nov 27, 2009Mustafa1991 - Nov 27, 2009
'professors do their job' - Why Ohio State University?

5 - Thank you everyone for all of your input....

UndergraduateMichelle - Nov 24, 2009Michelle - Nov 27, 2009
'seventy-eight years old' has had a significant influence on you...my grandmother

3 - Ack, the first thing that came to mind after I read your essay was an info session I attended...

UndergraduateJduran9 - Nov 27, 2009mmmargarita - Nov 27, 2009
BU and Yale essay: 3 characteristics (assertiveness, creativeness, and charisma)

3 - I am actually working on this essay for BU as well. I think your adjectives are great, but your...

Undergraduatekldini - Nov 23, 2009cowoverthemoon - Nov 27, 2009
what makes me a unique individual and how these qualities can benefit the Uni.

3 - Thank you very much for your comment! Now I can spot many errors that do not make sense at...

Undergraduatealexvictor117 - Nov 27, 2009alexvictor117 - Nov 27, 2009
my stay in africa and my dad.

14 - make sure you keep commas and periods and other punctuation at the right place in a sentence. no need...

UndergraduateGodizgood - Nov 22, 2009meisj0n - Nov 27, 2009
VCU: page 87 of your autobiography; Land of the Free and Math

7 - I jumped at the sudden noise down the stairs. My hands immediately wrapped around my head to block the...

Undergraduatevananhdo - Nov 27, 2009Mustafa1991 - Nov 27, 2009
our legal justice system is faulty!!

13 - I think you are asking if this essay works for a prompt that asks you to write about something...

Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Oct 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
UC Prompt #2 - Listening to chinese music and how it's inspired me

13 - I like this one! Write: ...because it was in the appreciation of music that my curiosity about Chinese......

Undergraduatetonythetiger - Nov 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
Motivation Essay - Software Engineering - Master Course

4 - Well, yes, but then add one more sentence that says something like: I choose [name of program] as the...

Graduatezchowdhury - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
Beloit, the place that has raised me, Northwestern Supplement Essay- Third Draft

5 - I like i that you use "confess," a good word. Commas and a dash: I confess that going...

Undergraduatedanieljluebke - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
UW Essay. Cultural history to educational goals

2 - That first sentence is a statement of the obvious... not very exciting. The last sentence of the first...

Undergraduatextine324 - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
Which of these four topics to choose for UC prompt #1

5 - If number 2 truly shows you off as a person, choose that. Save the uniqueness for the CommonApp....

Undergraduatejampamz - Nov 27, 2009Reach - Nov 27, 2009
UC Prompt #1: Thou art General!

10 - "Check," my grandfather shouted, moving his brutal queen into position, threatening my trembling king hiding behind a pawn in...

UndergraduateMonsieurWise - Nov 25, 2009Nandra - Nov 27, 2009
UC transfer personal statement -- Art major

2 - A good strategy is to help a lot of other people by giving your ideas about their essays,...

Undergraduatemimi410 - Nov 25, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 27, 2009
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