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BU- What expiriences have led you to choose your field of major

6 - This is a great essay. I enjoyed the opening paragraph and great organization. There are very minimal mistakes. Good...

UndergraduateAndrewquartey - Jan 2, 2009ichid99 - Jan 3, 2009
CORNELL CALS ESSAY ("we must take care of the world we live in")

4 - Thanks falconchick for the good work you did! Check out the EF Contributor page!! Unicorn, that is great...

Undergraduatecbm2891 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
"First Impressions are Everything"; NYU Short Answers- grammar errors?

5 - Your short answer about the song was cute! It is very personal and it makes the reader feel like...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 1, 2009jennc09 - Jan 3, 2009
Rice Supplement (something unique about my view upon communism?)

4 - Yes!! If you post it, I'll give my ideas about whether or not it seems right... Communism is...

Essaysxelloslast - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
UIUC essay 2 (Illuminati- the Physics Club)

6 - Illuminati- the Physics Club of our school is one of the facadesaspects of school life that I will remember...

Undergraduatesumantneo - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
'Dancing is close to my heart' - MIT essay... how the world shaped your dreams essay

5 - This second one is better, I think, but I really like the second half of the dance essay. ...

Undergraduatepmadhini - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Cornell CALS essay - "the significance of ingredients and nutrition"

3 - One of the activities of the trip was to differentiate between freshly squeezed fruit juice an d artificially flavored...

UndergraduateA346 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Short answers to Hendrix College

4 - Oh, hav I been making my smiley backwards? :) I thought it was this way, :) but I see...

UndergraduateAmyRemus - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
for IELST...." sports or physical course is importmant "essay

5 - Is that true? Wow, schools should not drop phys. ed... it is so important! I is even important for...

Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Bucknell optional essay.. the culture of the U.S.

4 - thank you for sparing time to read this and Happy new year.....

Undergraduateakashnegi - Dec 30, 2008akashnegi - Jan 3, 2009
Uva favorite word - Uncertainty

3 - "Uncertainty" is a word that acts as a gargantuan, dark cloud whose only purpose is to obscure the sun,...

Undergraduatemad3na90 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common App Essay- ("I was an extremely snoopy child")

5 - I'm so sorry I could not comment in time!! It does look great, though, as the others said. I...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
is this topic "my world" worthy?

3 - Good advice from Sean! Also, break this up into 2 or 3 paragraphs for clarity. Most importantly, start and...

Undergraduatemjsuh90 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common App supplement (Sentence structure and grammar problems)

4 - "As Santana strums his guitar to the hip-hop beat, infusing it with Spanish sounds, I step up to the...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Emory Supplement - ("I first heard of Emory through a friend")

4 - Imagine Emory University as a great rock band. There I am in the crowd; just one of the thousands...

Undergraduateyokang - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common App and Artist's Statement.

4 - In August 2008 I found myself venturing onto an old, near-decrepit ship docked in a harbor on the Hudson...

Undergraduateavelo - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Brown Supplement Essay Siddhartha

4 - Use italics for titles. Sidhartha is a great book!!!! However, when you refer to the person, do...

UndergraduateJoe112 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
I was born to sell; Influential Person - Dad

9 - Just like in sales, do not waste any words: I was born to sell. More importantly, I am...

Undergraduateneonalchemy - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Last Minute Common App Essay - "my band"

2 - USe a comma: To say the least, I used to be very shy and lacked the self-confidence required...

UndergraduateJustin37 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
NYU Short Answer supplements - "a shopping trip with my father"

5 - Usually when you shorten essays they become better. It is a matter of filtering out the weak parts. On...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
UPenn essay - The aspiration of attending the University of Pennsylvania

2 - I have told lots of people that I liked their user names, but I think you get the award...

UndergraduateLife is Cool - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Rice Supplement Why this school ("Bill Nye the Science Guy show")

4 - Yes, and take out all unnecessary words: In order to betterexplain why I am applying to the Wiess...

UndergraduateCzerwona - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
NYU Short answers ("a politically incorrect statement" and other answers)

3 - I agree, this is great stuff. However, for this first part (above) you give a mixed message. Is it...

UndergraduateHiroShima11 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Bowdoin Short Essay

3 - We can improve this first sentence, too: For all students, college will be an unfamiliar environment that involves...

Undergraduateohreally - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
CMC essay ("the world's economic theory and philosophy")

3 - Excellent, Chelsea! Your ending sentence, especially! Please check out the EF Contributor page (link at the bottom of the...

Undergraduatecbm2891 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Essay on Interpersonal Skils and experience - Law school

4 - Separate two or more adjectives with commas: Apart from studying law during my graduation years, I have had...

GraduateRai - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
NYU short answers - Patience, perseverance / Drama, Theater clubs / "Breakaway" / Management

4 - arghuman82, your username is cool!! But your feedback is lacking. Part of your job as a member is to...

UndergraduateEric - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Being counselor for friends - CMU App Essay Why you chose CMU/Major

5 - Oh, I see what you mean by "in!" I think maybe the admissions person will understand, too....

UndergraduateJSnyder726 - Dec 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
'With great power comes...' - Common App- Spiderman

4 - Keep it all in the present tense, if you can: After witnessing the death of his Uncle Ben,...

Undergraduatefalconchick - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Brown essay - "The Pickup"

4 - Hellomoto, you impress me again!!! Have you ever wondered if you are walking on the right path of...

Undergraduatehopefull - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
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