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Key Club international; Extracurricular Short Essay (COMMON APP)

2 - "As an officer of Key Club international, I learned integrity and compromise . Integrity is always with me, except...

Undergraduateshc4ever - Oct 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Do these sentences make sense? Can I change the wording?

2 - Let's see: 1. Fine as it is. 2. Nurses ...fine from there out. 3. Fine. ...

Grammar, Usagehunnybun39 - Oct 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay

3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...

Writing Feedbacklilveni - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
my first two years of high school - Another UF Essay

2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay. Mechanically it is clean; it is well organized, with tightly structured...

UndergraduateLiist - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
I was ranked 1,569 in Maharashtra; Personal Statement - Physics&Math

6 - Good afternoon. I hope, as Sarah suggested, that you have read the terms of service for the site,...

Undergraduatemerocksjigar - Feb 11, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?

6 - ThuyChi, You are a very good judge of character, as I have been a teacher and am currently...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Undergraduate dissertation about the Scottish Oil Industry

2 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...

DissertationsSergioGB - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Without academic excellence, most students nowadays are squeezed out of the competition

3 - I think your paragraphs are appropriate lengths; if you divide the essay further you risk making the flow too...

Writing FeedbackshatterX - Oct 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
"realistic or optimistic" + "hardship and misfortune" -- essays edit help

NEW - Assignment: Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? As an old saying in my hometown goes,"Adversities are...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 23, 2008 -
What is a good title for an analysis essay?

5 - Thank you for your help! It's much aprpeciated!...

Essaystouma00 - Jan 1, 2007cutebunny181 - Oct 23, 2008
Sunflower-yellow rice,green peas,red peppfood&black shells of mussels; Culture UC

2 - Good afternoon. I really like your essay, but it is somewhat disconnected. I am not sure what the...

Undergraduatevivalamariani51 - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
One Character (C. Jefferson) from 'The Body In The Library' by A. Christie

2 - Good afternoon. Your post is quite confusing. If you are looking for information on the character of Conway...

Essayshayaletinizi - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Do you think policemen should be paid more or less money in Turkey?

4 - Congratulations! Good work! See, you can do it, no problem! Keep up your hard work. Regards, Gloria Moderator,...

Essayshayaletinizi - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
PS for Common App: Breaking Out. or cont. father's influence on me

2 - Good afternoon. I think your first essay is a good one. It's a good story that illustrates your...

Undergraduatejamieex - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
I wish to pursue my graduate studies at your esteemed university; my draft of SoP (Computer science)

2 - ... excelled in programming-related subjects like System Programming, Computer Theory, Information Systems and Programming Languages.None of these should be...

Graduatenickee_th - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?

5 - Thank you for your help. Now i have more words to work with so i can elaborate more on...

Writing Feedbacknikokoskinas - Oct 22, 2008nikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
Encounter with myself; Florida State University - "Vires, Artes, Mores"

NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...

Undergraduateroger chavez - Oct 23, 2008 -
Essay to gain sponsorship for Honours degree in Business Studies

3 - Thank you so much Gloria. I hope I get them to pay for it ;)...

UndergraduateTizzy - Oct 23, 2008Tizzy - Oct 23, 2008
Magazine's periodicity - the correct term?

4 - It doesn't matter what type of periodical it is (magazine, journal, etc.); they are still referred to as "serials"...

Grammar, Usagesaragrunhagen - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
It is better to have one long school vacation than to have a few short one?

6 - I think your organization is fine. You start off with a good introduction followed by a body that explains...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Short Essay Answers: Books, Interests, Why Occidental

2 - Good morning. Just a couple of mechanical corrections, all to do with capitalization. Remember to only capitalize proper...

Undergraduatedocument1 - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Responsibility- through example or behavior of others?

3 - Thank you very much. I will remember to stay in one tense in my essay!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 20, 2008helenalqy - Oct 23, 2008
Fall of Rome - history essay

2 - Good evening. I think you're off to a great start. Because you state in your thesis that the...

Essaysjhg - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
Essay: What will you bring along to Sahara + unforgettable experience

5 - Thank you, Glolia! You don't know how helpful you are to me!!!^_^...

Writing Feedbacksweetbitterrose - Oct 21, 2008sweetbitterrose - Oct 22, 2008
Check for my essay about my holiday trip to Singapore

2 - Good afternoon. OK, let's see: It is the smallest nation in SoutheastAs this is neither a proper...

Writing Feedbackwindcloud232 - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
"DEATH PENALTY" ; Essay on a controversial issue.

4 - :) Research is funny like that, isn't it? Just so you know, I'm not up on my religious texts,...

Essayssol - Oct 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
situations that were extremely challenging to overcome - UF admission

NEW - Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or...

UndergraduateIgnacio1407 - Oct 22, 2008 -
Working for My Family's Business - UF application essay

3 - Good morning :) Mechanically, I do have a few suggestions. First, make sure you are capitalizing only proper...

Undergraduatenicolle18 - Oct 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
Extracurricular activities; MECD organization in Nicaragua

4 - thank u very much youve been really helpful...

Undergraduatermdc25 - Oct 21, 2008rmdc25 - Oct 22, 2008
Our families have a major influence on who we are as a person - UCF essay!

5 - Thank you :) Let's see: "For instance, if someone criticizes me on something that I know I...

Undergraduatexoxoheartx3 - Oct 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
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