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Construct stadium beneficial or not? IELTS Writting Task 2

2 - The essay is over written. It is not really a task 2 essay exercise at this point. It is...

Writing FeedbackOutsider_000 - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Video Game Essay for English 108

2 - There is a lack of clear thesis statement in this essay. What is the point you want to make...

Research Papersmikezahora - Oct 1, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
WRITE A SHORT PARAGRAPH (100-120 WORDS) ABOUT HOW TO KEEP FIT AND STAY HEALTHY.

2 - You have done a good job on writing this statement. It shows that you are becoming more comfortable writing...

Writing Feedbacktranhaithien2005 - Sep 29, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives.

2 - You are showing the reader why you partly agree with the given statement using a comparative discussion method. While...

Writing Feedbackmikey04 - Sep 29, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Dicussion between putting some strict controls about noise and making as much noise as possible

2 - Your prompt restatement became confusing to the reader. There is a lack of clarity and coherence in that presentation...

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Martial arts - supplemental essay on Jiu Jitsu - UNC

2 - This story of your even temperament is actually something unique in this type of application. I thoroughly enjoyed reading...

Undergraduateaviatorspings - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
My Father and the Gym - undergraduate admissions

2 - There is no connection between the gym and your presentation. That was a forced connection that came in at...

UndergraduateAryking - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
What is the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport?

2 - Seeing as this is a task 2 essay, you should not be coming to any conclusions or offering any...

Writing Feedbacknmint_tue07 - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Some people feel that advertising has negative effects on our society

2 - Make sur eyou follow the writing rudiments for the English language. Every first word of a new sentence is...

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"From Adversity to Aspiration: My Journey of Passion, Determination, and Cultural Bridging" - GKS

2 - You make a convincing case in this essay except for where your passion to study in Korea comes from....

Scholarshipyetung - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: LOOK AFTER ONE'S HEALTH FOR PERSONAL OR SOCIAL BENEFITS

2 - This is a single opinion essay. That is why you are being asked about the extent of your agreement...

Writing Feedbackhgzxz - Sep 27, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Week-long bursts of passion - my Questbridge personal essay

2 - The essay is scattered. The story telling is choppy. There are aspects that seem to hit the reader out...

UndergraduateHonda_civic - Sep 26, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Town in Sudan - How have the influences in your life shaped you?

2 - The essay lacks focus and becomes confusing to read at times. You should simply refer to the country as...

Graduatelokudu - Sep 26, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] GETTING OLD IN THE MODERN WORLD

2 - [quote=cangusocduaaa]This essay shall conduct a thorough assessment of both viewpoints so that a reasoned conclusion can be drawn.[/quoteWhile you...

Writing Feedbackcangusocduaaa - Sep 26, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
[WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of passing driving license of males and females in an Asian nation

2 - The summary overview is problematic and will not deliver a good preliminary score. There are several elements missing from...

Writing Feedbackwanderinuniverse - Sep 26, 2023Holt - Oct 8, 2023
AN ESSAY ABOUT THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN THE MODERN WORLD

3 - It is very important that whenever you write pros and cons, write them in 2 separate structured paragraphs. Your...

Writing FeedbackHAPPYLE - Sep 24, 2023Love478 - Oct 7, 2023
Some people think success in life comes from hard work and determination

2 - You are writing a comparison essay that should focus on 2 things: 1. An explanation of the public...

Writing FeedbackVanChungNguyen - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Teenagers should work unpaid, do you agree with the view? Write about 250 words

2 - You will already have failed the essay with your prompt restatement and writer's opinion alone. You are presenting a...

Writing FeedbackKhanhChi2009 - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
The different of weight in England

2 - You are not making any sense in this section. The sentences do not carry any thought references and...

Writing Feedbackbantraicuabe - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
[WRITING TASK 2] To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population

2 - The essay will receive a failing score. You have not properly developed the discussion presentation when it comes to...

Writing FeedbackDoggoZ - Sep 25, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - CINEMA ATTENDANCE BY AGE GROUP IN THE UK

2 - Wrong sentence structure. You cannot use the word "and" to start a sentence. Being a conjunction, that is...

Writing FeedbackHuongTran - Sep 24, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Clean water - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - The presentation is too selfish in focus. This is all about your leadership skills, but it is also wanting...

Scholarshipantonio1995 - Sep 23, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Common App main essay: Mother's Battle Changed my life

2 - I agree that you need to shorten the reference to your mother's cancer battle. You have too much of...

UndergraduateVgreene1659 - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
GKS-U Personal Statement Business Administration; time to complete my university education in Korea

2 - This response is actually more aligned with the Language Study Goals than the requirements for the personal statement. Have...

Scholarshiprosieloet - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
What is an ideal society? And how can we create it?

2 - Word use redundancy. If you are imagining it, then it is already an illusion. There is...

Writing FeedbackRizChow - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
WRITING TASK1: LINE GRAPH - GREEN TRANSPORTATION USAGE

2 - The summary overview is not well developed. You need to learn to enumerate the required information such as the...

Writing Feedbackpnpu07 - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Writing Task 2: Some people think that students should study the science of food and how to prepare

2 - I do not see an appropriate personal opinion provided in the discussion points. Based on the way you represented...

Writing FeedbackQuy Nguyen - Sep 22, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Some students want to learn additional subjects. Others think should focus on getting a degree.

2 - The essay is over written. You cannot complete 288 words within 40 minutes. The actual test does not allow...

Writing Feedbacklynnci - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income

2 - You did not clearly identify the type of chart presented in the task. The image identifier helps to increase...

Writing Feedbackhuyphamdz1902 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Governments should make universities free for everyone

2 - Did you review the response requirement for the essay prior to drafting it? If you did, then you would...

Writing Feedbackmayajuststart_0 - Sep 21, 2023Holt - Oct 7, 2023
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