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GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR MS IN ARTIFICIAL

2 - The essay lacks in required substance overall. It does not provide information as required by the list of writing...

Graduatefxkimji - Feb 11, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Where can I find thesis written by Erasmus Mundus joint master's degree programs students?

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The power of teaching others - Networking Essay for Chevening Scholarship

2 - Your networking essay is too busy. It is without a clear and accurate direction that would show how your...

Scholarshipommar - Feb 10, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Motivation letter on why I should be given the AXEL ADLER SCHOLARSHIP.

2 - Do not waste the time of the admissions officers with petty information such as how to address you. That...

Lettersbenadine30 - Feb 10, 2024Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Personal Statement for GKS-Graduate Scholarship for MBA

3 - Thank you for your guidance. I understand your feedback and will make the necessary changes. Your feedback has provided...

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Turkey Scholarship-Biotechnology, biology

2 - Remove the reference to your academic background. That should not be included in a motivational letter. The story about...

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Fluency in Korean - Global MBA STUDY PLAN

2 - Your language study plan is incomplete. You have introduced your pre arrival preparations but not your post arrival language...

Graduatekrishna26 - Jan 31, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Women like shopping, some are even shopping addicted. State your points of view

2 - I am not sure why you are using an unrelated historical viewpoint for this discussion. You are expected to...

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A noticeable lack of students opting for science subjects at universities

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Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus program in Applied Ecohydrology

2 - There are so many things wrong with this letter that I do not know where to begin. I guess...

LettersOkpokwu - Feb 6, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
The bar chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates for regions and by gender in the past

2 - While you have written more than the required word count to get major scoring points for your presentation, the...

Writing FeedbackMayrie - Feb 6, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS IN PROSTHODONTICS (DENTISTRY)

2 - Your essay is very wordy but not really very informative. The reviewer does not have the time to read...

Scholarshipdanidanj04 - Feb 5, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
transfer statement essay on econ/math passion USC - improvements

2 - A college transfer is usually based upon the student's intent to learn above the scale that is currently offered...

Undergraduatepengster - Feb 5, 2024Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Writing task 1 (The process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products)

3 - I suppose that if the task doesn't explicit clearly the number of stages, you should not infer them yourself...

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Letter Of Intent For Turkey Burslari Scholarship - Human Behavior

2 - Your intent to study Human Behavior in Turkey, through this scholarship is not one that will impress the reviewer....

LettersSibgha - Feb 4, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
As countries progress, there is a trend towards living alone or in smaller family units

2 - A clear question was asked as a part of the writing guide. You are expected to provide a...

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Personal statement for Erasmus mundus IMSISS programme (self-founded)

2 - Consider finding a connection between your interest in Pathway A and your thesis research. You will do well...

LettersMartssm - Feb 2, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Personal Statement | GKS-G Scholarship 2024 | International Relations

2 - Your paragraphs tend to overwhelm the reader due to the volume of information you try to cram into each...

Scholarshiphyoon - Feb 2, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Gothic story - dont get off the train

2 - A gothic story should engage the senses of the reader from the start. The sense of dread, terror, fear,...

Writing Feedbacksmichalo - Feb 2, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
UF statement of intent - physical therapist

2 - You are spending too much time on introducing your background when you should be focused on the core intent...

Undergraduateldiaz069 - Feb 1, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Waterloo AIF, computational and financial management

2 - Focus on the coop program. Show that you are familiar with the opportunities the program provides the students, which...

Undergraduatekaashifnaseer - Feb 1, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today more people are overweight than ever before...

2 - Do not ever give an attestation to the truthfulness or falsity of the given opinion. That is never...

Writing Feedbackcaohuyen93 - Feb 1, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty.

2 - One of the major deductions that will be applied to this essay is your lack of proper sentence writing....

Writing Feedbacklunaforthej - Jan 31, 2024Holt - Feb 7, 2024
The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

2 - You are well within the word count to receive maximum scoring consideration for each section. Your explanations are coherent...

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Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school

2 - Please follow the expected paragraph formatting for the task 2 essay. The proper formatting has 5 sentences in each...

Writing FeedbackGbao1212 - Jan 30, 2024Holt - Feb 6, 2024
[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Average content of sodium, saturated fats and sugar

2 - Indicate the number of pie charts and what each pie chart records as information for the presentation. It...

Writing FeedbackWilliam0809202 - Jan 30, 2024Holt - Feb 6, 2024
Ielts writing task 2 - The Antarctic ozone hole

2 - This compressed statement will automatically earn this essay a failing score. You have not correctly identified the number...

Writing Feedbackritazhang - Jan 30, 2024Holt - Feb 6, 2024
NTU Scholarship Essay- Everything happens for a reason

4 - @molly1303 @Holt Always be open to change Must be in a new thread. Useless comments = BAN....

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Statement of Purpose Master Data Science EPFL

2 - Start your essay at paragraph 3. You are already a seasoned professional those foundational courses that you studied are...

Graduatedavidedalce - Jan 29, 2024Holt - Jan 30, 2024
'I have a dream' - Why this major and university (scholarship essay)

3 - @Holt I really appreciate your precious feedbacks. Again, I sincerely thank you for your time. I wish you have...

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