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The opinion that we are getting more changes of choices in every field of our life

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In at least 150 words, write an opinion paragraph about the topic below. Some parents teach their ch

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The pie chart compares the difference in expenditure of two countries Japan and Malaysia (2010)

2 - The essay is short of the minimum 150 word count by 9 words. Percentage points will be deducted from...

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Describe differences in an island which has undergone a lot of changes

2 - When used as a simple writing exercise, this piece of writing could be judged as a good effort. It...

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The layout of the city of Nelson in the past and its transformation to the present day

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People who used the Internet between 1999 and 2009 in 3 countries including USA, Canada, and Mexico

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More people for less traffic?

2 - This is not a totally acceptable writer's opinion. While the response would immediately be perceived as correct, you...

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The reasons people in Great Britain had for visiting art museums in the years 1990 and 2000

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Leveraging my networking skills to impact the health sectors - Chevening Networking Essay

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The use of social media and effects on individuals' mental health

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Skills and knowledge gained from study by an individual aspiring to become a healthcare professional

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IELTS - Unpaid community service as a part of schools compulsory section

2 - The task 2 essay is a mere 4 paragraph essay at any given time. You have written 6 paragraphs,...

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The transformation that Dubai has undergone over the time

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Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial

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Many people believe that, by taking risks, ones are much more likely to be successful in their lives

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Online games should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Justify your answer.

3 - Some of word-choice errors like excessive approach (should be over-exposure) + language learning (not studying) process. Besides, you're a...

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IELTS:In some places,young people find it difficult to communicate with older people? Why? Solution?

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The line graph depicts three companies in terms of tonnes of waste produced, over 15 years; TASK 1

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IELTS task 1 (The line graph reveals information on the waste output of three selected businesses)

2 - The presentation has an error in the final presentation. You should have separated the trending sentence from the actual...

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How individuals can contribute to environment protection.

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My Statement of Purpose for UT Austin for Electrical Engineering Program

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Prison privatizations - Maria

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How does it feel moving towards the twilight?

2 - Please note that you only have 40 minutes to write a simple discussion for this topic. You will not...

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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THIS SENTENCE IS CORRECT, ISN'T IT? ANOTHER WAY TO REWRITE?

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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem.

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Writing Feedbackthanhbui64 - Aug 17, 2023Holt - Aug 21, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] EDUCATION - vocational training

2 - This is not an extent essay. You need not over state your opinion. Just keep it simple. You...

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The chart below show reasons why Americans travelled and the pie chart what problems concerned them

2 - There is an immediate problem to be found in the summary overview presentation. The first, is that you wrote...

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SHOULD SCHOOL CHILDREN BE GIVEN HOMEWORK (OPINION)?

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Nowadays, mobile phones and internet have become increasingly important in people's social life

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