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Essay on Why are you an ideal candidate for MSc in Business Analytics and how program will help?

2 - Do not use this reference. It is too vague for you to be believed by the reviewer. The...

GraduateLove478 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - TEACHING SITUATION / DISAGREE OR AGREE ESSAYS.

2 - Your overall response to the original prompt is incorrect. There are 2 reasons for this mistake: 1. There...

Writing Feedbackvieta06 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter

2 - The word count of this essay could prove to be a huge problem for you during the actual test....

Writing FeedbackTramy245 - Sep 17, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
"gks-u 2024 "media and communication:my interests and motivations" personal statement" @holt

2 - Try to provide more of a backgrounder on your family as required by the prompt. You are not mentioning...

ScholarshipHITZYBITZYTYTY - Sep 16, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
COMMON APP ESSAY REVIEW (essay on personal growth)

2 - The essay tends to be a bit confusing as you move from the plant experience to your personal experience....

Undergraduateyurii06xx - Sep 16, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Uganda's economy - Common wealth scholarship

2 - The essay lacks a clear focus on Uganda and how you plan to develop the local and national interests...

ScholarshipDianish kiconco - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Mobile and technology essay paper

2 - The essay is too long. It is so long that it has created a clear image in the examiner's...

Writing Feedbackminhtuan2006 - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Task 1: The chart shows the percentage of males and females with higher education qualification

2 - This is not a specific image identifier. It does not help the reader get a mental picture of...

Writing Feedbackhongtham2002 - Sep 15, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Master in advertising and communication - Self-Introduction

NEW - I am passionate about marketing My name is Kaylin and I am from Vietnam. I graduated from Finance...

Graduatengocdiep199 - Sep 26, 2023 -
New country arrival - QuestBridge-Personal Essay

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you for your feedback!...

UndergraduateNguyebui - Sep 25, 2023Nguyebui - Sep 26, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] UNPAID COMMUNITY SERVICE - obligation for students to make a better society

2 - The explanation is incomplete. They joined in without payment and then? What happened? Do they continue to maintain...

Writing FeedbackDuy Dang - Sep 13, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Common App / "Why did I take a gap year" essay / international student / early decision in november

2 - You spent too much time explaining the concept of the gap year. The focus should be on why you...

Undergraduategigibsz - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
The fluctuation in monthly prices for copper, nickel and zinc throughout the year 2014

2 - The report is well developed and contains all of the necessary information. However, the paragraph presentations are uneven in...

Writing FeedbackNguyenChuc - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Writing task 1 essay about US annual income

2 - Do not use a numerical ordinal if you are not going to proceed with such usage in the later...

Writing Feedbacktdnkevin - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Doing away with old buildings and building modern ones or restoring old buildings?

2 - This is incorrect. Not all people really care about architecture and the preservation of old buildings. The reference...

Writing FeedbackThyn1103 - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Holiday at home or abroad - ielts writting task 2

2 - The first paragraph concerning the difficulties of international travel is well written to a certain point. The way that...

Writing FeedbackDeverX - Sep 12, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Too much money on repairing old buildings instead of pulling them down and constructing the new ones

2 - Avoid exaggerating your reference to the discussion topic as the examiner will definitely lower your score in that aspect....

Writing Feedbackellie1912 - Sep 11, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
The low productivity of agriculture land - IELTS Cambridge 8 Test 1 Task 1

2 - There is no such thing as a circle graph. I believe that you are trying to reference a...

Writing Feedbackhtnlinh - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Write an essay how adults can influence younger people's behaviour

3 - Your information feels accurate. The structure of the paragraphs could use some work and there are some spelling mistakes...

Writing FeedbackOrangEnglish - Sep 10, 2023GracefulRoseThor - Sep 25, 2023
Benefits and drawbacks of sharing information

3 - @TryToWrite I think you could potentially cut the two body paragraphs in half and combine that to make a...

Writing FeedbackTryToWrite - Sep 10, 2023GracefulRoseThor - Sep 25, 2023
CRITICAL ANALYSIS PAPER ON JUVENILE GANGS

2 - You appear to have a special connection with the word "also", using it with every chance that you get....

Research Papersmelarchie - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Statement Of Intent for School of Visual Arts BFA Fine Arts

NEW - Summary: Hello! I am trying to transfer to the School of Visual arts in New York and we are...

UndergraduateGracefulRoseThor - Sep 25, 2023 -
The graph shows oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010.

2 - The presentation is good. You did your best to present the information properly and coherently to the examiner. However,...

Writing FeedbackThang113 - Sep 10, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Explains the effects of music and music therapy on those with anxiety and ADHD.

2 - The section marked as number 2 in this presentation should be brought up to the top of the research...

Research Paperselliecaroline05 - Sep 9, 2023Holt - Sep 25, 2023
Personal Statement for MSc in Energy Systems at Oxford University

2 - I am wondering if you were given a specific set of writing guides before you wrote the personal statement....

GraduateAJaya - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates the income of households in the US

2 - The last paragraph of this essay is not structured as a mere report, which affected the overall presentation of...

Writing FeedbackDennis Dawl - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
The graph describes the changes in medical funding in four countries from 2010-2018

2 - Familiarize yourself with time references based on numerical gaps. There is a 4 year gap between information presentations,...

Writing Feedbackkaibao - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
GAP YEAR ESSAY FOR COMMONAPP

2 - It is definitely an explanation of why you had to take a gap year. However, it is not the...

UndergraduateNaveed123 - Sep 8, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
My journey of independence and family bonds Essay (Personal statement)

2 - The essay does not really show how you overcame an obstacle. It comes across more as you just complaining...

Undergraduateccbubblegirl - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : Young population outnumbers the old in various countries

2 - This is an incorrect interpretation of the original presentation. There is no dispute presented since only one public...

Writing Feedbackthanhthao22552 - Sep 7, 2023Holt - Sep 24, 2023
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