justivy03
May 15, 2016
Scholarship / Objectives upon completion of degree / Contribution to the home country as an effect of scholarship. [8]
Hi Sawsana, it's indeed a pity that you were not able to send out your essay, it could've been a good one.
Well, not to grieve on things that has passed already, look forward to an even brighter future and never hesitate to continue writing and better yourself in this craft.
Now, when it comes to your writing, I believe you still need a lot of practice on sentence construction, you tend to pour all your ideas in one sentence that you forget to elaborate them, input details and more importantly, add the essence of the idea you are trying to incorporate in your sentences. This can definitely improve with the help of practice, a day to day practice writing will let you see how you progress in your sentence assembly and the overall grammar and flow of the essay.
Lastly, as you are practicing, compile your drafts in a folder or a notebook, this way you will be able to notice which part of your practice needs help, improvement and you will be able to do the necessary changes. This will also greatly help in coming up with better approacg in the essays to come.
Hi Sawsana, it's indeed a pity that you were not able to send out your essay, it could've been a good one.
Well, not to grieve on things that has passed already, look forward to an even brighter future and never hesitate to continue writing and better yourself in this craft.
Now, when it comes to your writing, I believe you still need a lot of practice on sentence construction, you tend to pour all your ideas in one sentence that you forget to elaborate them, input details and more importantly, add the essence of the idea you are trying to incorporate in your sentences. This can definitely improve with the help of practice, a day to day practice writing will let you see how you progress in your sentence assembly and the overall grammar and flow of the essay.
Lastly, as you are practicing, compile your drafts in a folder or a notebook, this way you will be able to notice which part of your practice needs help, improvement and you will be able to do the necessary changes. This will also greatly help in coming up with better approacg in the essays to come.