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May 21, 2014
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IELTS Task 1 : Intended instruction hours in public institution (re-write - ITALY)
The chart compares the number of intended instruction hours on children aged 7 to 14 in 29 major countries during a particular period in 2005.
Overall, the trough of instruction hours recorded by children in Finland, while the Italian children aged 7-14 outperformed the figure remaining other 28 province during the course.
Italy broke a record as the nation having the highest number of instruction hours among its children with more than 8000 hours. It followed by Netherlands and Australia as the second as third highest of the overall nations. While stood at the eleventh from the overall number, children aged 7-8 in Ireland had a similar number of instruction hour as children in Italy. Likewise the figures in Slovenia and Norway as well as Korea and Hungary experienced approximately 3500 hours in the figures of children aged 9-11.
Obviously, the number of instruction hours in Turkey and Portugal showed the similarity in the overall aged group under review ended up 7000 in the overall amount of hours. It was slightly different with the trend of Mexico and Greece. While the amount was similar in the amount of hours, children aged 9-11 in Greece showing a rapid improvement accounted 4500 hours.
IELTS Task 1 : Intended instruction hours in public institution (re-write - ITALY)
The chart compares the number of intended instruction hours on children aged 7 to 14 in 29 major countries during a particular period in 2005.
Overall, the trough of instruction hours recorded by children in Finland, while the Italian children aged 7-14 outperformed the figure remaining other 28 province during the course.
Italy broke a record as the nation having the highest number of instruction hours among its children with more than 8000 hours. It followed by Netherlands and Australia as the second as third highest of the overall nations. While stood at the eleventh from the overall number, children aged 7-8 in Ireland had a similar number of instruction hour as children in Italy. Likewise the figures in Slovenia and Norway as well as Korea and Hungary experienced approximately 3500 hours in the figures of children aged 9-11.
Obviously, the number of instruction hours in Turkey and Portugal showed the similarity in the overall aged group under review ended up 7000 in the overall amount of hours. It was slightly different with the trend of Mexico and Greece. While the amount was similar in the amount of hours, children aged 9-11 in Greece showing a rapid improvement accounted 4500 hours.