EF_Kevin
Dec 1, 2008
Undergraduate / Which Professor offers faculty and research opportunities? Essay... [6]
Nicely done, with this improved draft. Here is room for improvement:
To me, it showed that a Penn faculty like Professor O'Leary does more than teach the material; he also leaves campus to assist with real-world problems. I look forward to working with him, and I believe he will be an insightful adviser to help guide me in my studies at Penn.
Nicely done, with this improved draft. Here is room for improvement:
To me, it showed that a Penn faculty like Professor O'Leary does more than teach the material; he also leaves campus to assist with real-world problems. I look forward to working with him, and I believe he will be an insightful adviser to help guide me in my studies at Penn.