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Apr 28, 2014
Writing Feedback / The number of television sales annually from 1996 to 1999 [4]
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The bar graph describes the fluctuation of the number of television sales among in 1996 and 1999
There was an increase significantly a significant increase in 1997 to 1998 started from 8 million going to 11 million units
However, reducing had happened in 1998 to 1999 by the difference of valuable sales was 1 million televisions.
this sentence is double verbs, you should put conjunction between those two verbs
where did you get this approach?introduction
body
overview
conclusion
in IELTS TASK 1 you can follow this approach
introduction
body
body
conclusion
or
introduction
overview
body
body
