lcturn87
Aug 24, 2015
Essays / Discuss the development of myocardial infarction; an opening line [6]
I can help you with your essay.
I took an anatomy and physiology course a long time ago. Here is a tip: Try to read your paper and ask yourself: Am I writing about a structure of the body and how it functions?
I think you are being very specific in describing the heart, what happens to the blood vessels, and what happens if there is a disturbance. You are doing good so far.
I believe you want suggestions to correct you paper too. I think the first sentence you should separate into three sentences. "The process of a heart attack... our heart for normal heart functions. (I am only giving you parts of the sentence that need correction which is the beginning and ending.).
The next two sentences you can correct these errors to the beginning and end of the sentences: "The disturbance.... one developing myocardial infarction." "This condition results from a complete blockage of an artery that supplies blood to an area of the heart."
I can help you with your essay.
I took an anatomy and physiology course a long time ago. Here is a tip: Try to read your paper and ask yourself: Am I writing about a structure of the body and how it functions?
I think you are being very specific in describing the heart, what happens to the blood vessels, and what happens if there is a disturbance. You are doing good so far.
I believe you want suggestions to correct you paper too. I think the first sentence you should separate into three sentences. "The process of a heart attack... our heart for normal heart functions. (I am only giving you parts of the sentence that need correction which is the beginning and ending.).
The next two sentences you can correct these errors to the beginning and end of the sentences: "The disturbance.... one developing myocardial infarction." "This condition results from a complete blockage of an artery that supplies blood to an area of the heart."