Writing Feedback / The proportion of Bulgarian residents who chosen to live abroad at the level of 8 percent - IELTS [4]

The bar chart illustrates changes the number of emigration from Bulgaria aged 15 to 60 years old in 2001 and 2006. And is measured in percentage. At first glance, it is evidence that the number of people who have no intention to move or prefer to stay are highest tan other categories.

With regards 100% Bulgarians according to data, 75 percent of individuals preferred to stay in their country in 2001. Over following five years, there was a slight decrease by 3 percent. While, the number of citizens who lived abroad for a short time also diminish virtually a half from 9% to 5%.

Turning to the level of inhabitants who became tourists or visitors solely 6 percent and it rose to 10 percent in the last year. Then, another has a similar pattern, the proportion of Bulgarian who worked abroad then return stood at 4% and this increased roughly double to 7%. The proportion of residents who chosen to live abroad permanently still same in 5 years at 8 percent.

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Writing Feedback / Secondary education has been dominated among Bulgarians who wanted to live abroad in 2000s [4]

Level of education of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria

The graph chart reveals comparison three the percentage of Bulgarian education who wanted to live in another country in 2002,2006, and 2008. Overall, it can be seen that the number of secondary education has been in the top position which the most Bulgarian prefer to choose that.

Based on data, there are three categories of education and the proportion of secondary education became the highest in all of the years which stood at 65% in 2002 and slightly decrease to 59% in the six years later. Then, there was a fluctuation in the number of higher education of Bulgarians planning started at 17 percent and it increased by 3 percent in 2006, also it fell down more than double to 9 percent in the last year.

Interestingly, still there was an increasing trend in the percentage of primary and lower education category which stood at 18% and it improved by 1% in four years, a significant improvement was shown to 32% in 2008.

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Writing Feedback / Academic writing task 2 - The influence of modern world to a healthy lifestyle [3]

Question :
Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others,however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.

Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

At present, having a healthy lifestyle is prominent to prevent from critical diseases. Several individuals argue that it is hard to become healthy. Moreover, some assume that is false, they can be fit since they live in the advance century. I firmly believe that there are two views on this issue which people debate.

In huge cities have found many consumers preferred to alter a fast-food menu, because they do not have much time for cooking their food. A study, which was done by the Health Education Authority, aged 15 to 34 years are the most consumers who choose fast-food. For example, they tend to grab McDonald's food at hurry time. In several circles, it has been a citizen's lifestyle. With this habit, it can make people become addiction. It is caused that food contains high-fat and flavouring. The effect, inhabitants would gain illness likes obesity and cancer.

However, in this modern era, people can obtain everything easily, they may not ignore their healthy condition. That is because preventing is better than cured. For instance, residents who ill sure spent more much cost in their life. Furthermore, they try to keep their hygiene with several activities like sport which it has benefit for metabolism and regenerate bodies' cell, taking a quality rest also influence to the health with improvement of anti-bodies. Evidence of this can be seen with several exercises and have better relax can affect great life.

In conclusion, although some people argue there are difficult problems especially in health case, I would argue this can be solved by various activities.

Writing Feedback / Children face up unhealthy lifestyle - youngers tend to do severe modus vivendi [5]

Question :
Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problems.
To what extent do you agree with this statement ?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

At present, youngers tend to do severe modus vivendi which it is a must from guardians and college institutions for finding solutions for this issue. Although both of them have an obligation to protect their children. I strongly believe that environment is the main factors influence, so the older have to practice better habit to them.

The main cause of this problem is a poor habit like littering rubbish everywhere, children do not brush the teeth, and they do not wash hands with soap. For example, youngsters know there is a bin front of their class, yet they prefer to litter inside one or they are lazy to clean their teeth before sleeping and their hands before eating. Furthermore, they will have a bad attitude if they do that. As parents, they must confer an excellent behaviour to theirs.

As an education institute, it has to provide hygiene canteens which the food uncontain additive substance than can be dangerous for students. But they prefer to choose unhealthy food than natural ones, they tend to gain illness if eat that. For instance, these days there are many peddlers hawking outside the school area which sell many kinds of instant foodstuff which pupil do not know where they process their products. In result, schoolchild eats unknown content of meal which can affect stomachache and feel dizzy after consuming it. Actually, this can be solved with side of schools suggest the peddlers to sell up nutrition diet.

In conclusion, it must be there is a responsibility from all aspects particularly from parents as the prime someone's responsible and that is supported by better circumstance in school. I also believe if schoolchildren will obtain nourishment, they will be more healthy and focus on their study.

Writing Feedback / Task 1 - Total words spoken to child compare with Children's total Vocabulary size [4]

The graphs compare the quantity of words, what children spoken in three different categories which is measured in millions and the aggregate of vocabularies well posted by them in range a year. Overall, both occurred a significant increase in using language with toddlers aged 12 to 48 months.

Aged 12 months, the number of words children stood at approximately 10 million for their speaking although, they still do not have any vocabulary size until they are 16 months. Then over following a half year, they gained improvement for their vocabs which is followed by the amount of a slight rise in talking at approach 20 million words for higher-talking families. At the same time, the sum of words of baby's chatting in the lowest-talking families around 7 million and category lower-talking family between both of them.

Aged 24 months, there is a large difference in the number of toddlers' vocabularies for higher-talking families collate with others which groups of lower and lowest-talking families. Both have similar patterns until the end of the period. In the last, the improvement of acquiring vocabularies are proved rising total words spoken by the child.

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Writing Feedback / Task 1 - two sorts of communication skills between 1997 and 2006 [2]

The tables reveal the two types of communication skills which are important for citizen's occupation in the survey that held between 1997 and 2006, the measurement is percentage as well. Overall, it is immediately apparent that all of aspect values both years increased exception in selling a product or service.

Based on the data, there were external and internal correspondence. For external communication, the proportion of dealing with people stood at 60%, which rose by 5% in 2006. Others categories have a similar pattern, namely the amount of knowledge of particular products or services gained improvement to 41% and the quantity of advising or caring for customers or clients solely grew 3 per cent which before in 36 per cent. This is opposite, which the number of selling a product or service diminished 3% to 21%.

Whereas there was an extreme climbing in the number of listening carefully to colleagues for internal factor from 38 to 47 per cent, this trend were followed by others like instruction, persuading, presentations, analyzing problems and planning which each has improved no more than 6 per cent over a nine year-period.

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Writing Feedback / Parents should control their children to avoid severity of developing technology. IELTS [3]

Task 2 IELTS - The usage of electronic media has negative effect on personal relationship

The development of technology cannot be separated from the social life. At present, some individuals argue that there are some severe effects which are appeared by digital media to citizen's relationship. There are therefore several reasons why I believe not just demerit, but merit factors as well. The purpose of older also prominent in this case.

The main cause of personality is electronic apparatus. This is because electronic media has altered people's opinion to each others which is extremely influenced them. For example, a television when children enjoy their watching, they tend to be lazy even forget their assignments from school. This is very harm for them because they gain nothing for their ambition in their life. Further the parents have to guide their children, this aim of controlling what they watch and guardians can ask them for studying.

Nevertheless, there is a potential way to solve this problem, or at least reduce the effect. Firstly, appearing of mass media particularly electronic ones as the source knowledge and education. For instance, the Internet and school computer laboratory. With that, people especially students can learn or discuss together with their friends who this is able to be more chummy the relationship because there is active communication. As teachers, they have to manage their schoolchild in order to protect their students from worse website like gambling or porn web.

To sum up, it is clear to me that although there are drawbacks to the residents who are caused by electronic press, there is also the advantage. As parents, they have to control their children to avoid severe of developing technology.

Writing Feedback / The diagrams describe how a turbine can produce electricity from renewable energy [2]

Task 1 IELTS - Design for a wind turbine and determining the location

The diagrams describe how a turbine can produce electricity from renewable energy, namely wind and where the most potential places to install the turbine. Uniquely, there are four main-parts can support that. Overall, it can be seen that the great places to put the machine is in the highest location.

To begin, turbine consists of steel tower, blades, generator and wind sensor. Steel tower has function to shore up all of the above equipment while the three blades which is made from fibreglass or wood. If there is wind, it can spin that. The next tool is wind sensor which aims to manage speed and direction. If the minimum limit of speed is fulfilled, the generator will gain output of electricity, but the amount of value depends on the wind velocity.

Regarding to the best position for installing a wind turbine, it can be spotted in the landscape, yet it is not optimal because of low wind flowing. This just generates 100 kilowatts of electricity, and another option is placed in the level of the sea. Meanwhile the height of the turbine is expected higher than in unspoiled terrain, the result still not optimum. However, the most fitting area to produce maximum electricity is in the plateau zone, where this is a place can be passed by maximum wind strengths and resulting 1.5 megawatts.

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Writing Feedback / The figure describes how the air leaks can circulate into the house and goes out [2]

Task 1 - Air leaks and heat loss in houses

The figure describes how the air leaks can circulate into the house and goes out which cause loss heat and waste the energy. On the other hand, there is much air leaking occurred in every room and a significant amount of heat energy become useless.

Regarding to the air enter the house, there are many spaces like windows and doors as places air comes to the home. They spread into most of the scopes. In the basement, air passes crawl area and dryer vent. Outside air enters the bathroom and kitchen also window in the middle room.

Air leaking out the cottage from several rooms like the bathroom and other rooms. The air throughout two recessed lights and it is followed to the attic hatch. Then, the air turning around and it passes roof top. Main point, it happens changing of input and output air particularly in the first floor.

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Writing Feedback / Task 2 IELTS - The purpose of businesses is to make money and they should concentrate only on this [4]

Having a concern is one of everyone's dreams. The majority of people guesses the aim of creating a business for gaining cash and they just focus on how to get it. Although money has prominent functions, there are other factors have more importance, like passion and enjoying to do that activity. Further, I strongly believe that a business person will disagree if money is the main basis.

Money is everything. That is the natural answer for most individuals, they just reckon how to earn money as much as possible. As exemplify, residents compete to be accepted in large company, with a hope, they can earn cash. If the purpose of making a business for obtaining cash, there another way such become an employee in the company. In result, they will acquire and enjoying it.

Creating a business is talking about what passion's people. They think becoming an entrepreneur as their hobby, not as their burden and they do not think about money as the fundamental factor. For instance, Steve Jobs, a founder of Apple corporation, argued that he did not do his job about money. He loved what he was doing at that time. A lesson from him if the people have an interest in something and concentrate to make a business, they will do that without compulsion.

In conclusion, according some of people, money is an important thing. Yet, others say that it is contrast because the main point is individuals have to relish what they do although a small business.

Writing Feedback / How having an offspring of different ages affects the parents' level of happiness? [3]

Task 1 IELTS - the level of happiness of parents with children of different ages

The pie charts compare the percentage of parents' happiness with having children in different ages. Overall, what stands out from the charts reveal that the total of parents with toddlers are higher than the number of parents with teenage children and it can be seen that the percentage of elders who dissatisfied with their children virtually same in a low score.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, the most significant data are in the number of parents who have very young children indicated very happy at 47 per cent which this is different by 10 per cent of the percentage of people who have teenage children. Other categories, the value of the parents who are fairly happy gained considerable improvement as 11% from transient time toddler to juvenile. The last, the amount of citizens who unhappy with their children almost stagnant in the few numbers below 5%. In conclusion, the level of parent's happiness has fallen when their toddlers become teenagers.

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Writing Feedback / Task 1 IELTS - the results of surveys in 2005 and 2009 asking workers about their relationships [3]

The charts reveal a comparison the number of two surveys employees' relationship with supervisor and Co-workers in 2005 and 2009, is measured in percentage. Overall, the most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that very good has dominated over all time.

According to the data, there was a few different numbers in very good categories which with the supervisor there was improvement as 4 per cent over following a four-year period. This is opposite with the number of affiliation with Co-workers who were occurred a decline from 70 to 63 per cent. In addition, the second biggest groups were in the good relationship although there was a slightly decrease at the percentage relations with supervisor by 4% and with Co-workers solely 3%.

While other classifications, for instance fair partnership both have variety declines as 2 per cent in linking with supervisor and as 4 per cent with Co-workers. Interestingly, the number of contacts with them at workers who do not have boss has increased even so in the short percentages, yet the number of people who do not answer just in 2005 and others years has no again. Furthermore, the affiliation with supervisor and Co-workers had been in well condition.

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Writing Feedback / Task 2 - The clothes people wear are the most indication of what they are like [6]

Question :
Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Clothes are the essential thing than attributed to the body. Several people think that garments can reflect who they are, yet others have an opposite statement which they cannot appraise citizen just from the clothing what they dress on. I firmly believe that clothes have role sector in the individual's life although there is a difference argument about this issue.

These days, clothes are not only become covered body from the heats of sun rays or the coldness of the night. In this era, half of citizens reckon with becoming stylish or fashionable is important for them. For instance, celebrities always have up to date lifestyle on their performance which is followed by fans. Furthermore, the fans try to imitate what popular idol wears like their clothes, skirt, hat or even accessories. Evidence of this can be seen that clothing gives a huge impact to socialize.

However, there are some people argue that do not need to put impressive clothes on. Main point, it can make them comfortable when they do their jobs or activities. For example, in the work concerning, a farmer always wears casual apparel which this is very different with an employee, he or she always take clothing neatly. Indirectly, this show that clothes can describe who they are based on what they gain on.

In conclusion, it is evident that although several inhabitants think they cannot judge people from the cover, but they can distinguish the workers by the uniform what they obtain on their body and it is imperative that the apparels have variety functions in the socialize.

Writing Feedback / Task 2 IELTS - Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. [4]

Topic
Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others, value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Appearance is a mirror of someone's personality. Several companies or institutions recommend their workers to wear clothes impressively. Although half of people argue that looking of employees is not important, main point they can show their ability in the work business. I utterly believe that the skills of workers are prominent in the organization, while presentation from staff members are able to support them to gain a successful in their career.

First, getting dressed in the working appearance has not to be luxurious or exaggerate, but it has to be suited with the environment where the employees work. This makes them become convenient and enjoy their job also they have a fashionable style. For example, particularly the employees who face to face with customers or clients like receptionist, customer service or cashier. Certainly they prioritize their appearance in front of their clients. This aim to order to they are able to interlace communication well.

Nevertheless, some member of staff reckon different way which they just think how to goal the target from their organization. This is not wrong, yet it is unsuitable when they work in the tidy circumstance. For instance, a chef who wears untidy uniform, sure some guests will guess that he is going to same matter to his dish. However, this cannot be trusted full that a look in the in work area give an effect directly to his career.

In conclusion, an appearance of the employees is prominent for their job-career while other people state that skills are the most useful to boost the performance.

Writing Feedback / Buying things online is very convenient. Simple trade brings some demerits though. [5]

Topic
Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

The improvement by using the internet has affected people's behaviour. Particularly, in shopping which they prefer to buy what they need like clothes, groceries even air ticket via online. In this case, I strongly believe that even though there are several advantages like citizens can gain product easily, yet some drawbacks still give impacts to the shopping activities.

These days, a great deal of inhabitants can access the internet everywhere and every time, which is no distance and unlimited time to do many activities via online. Without exception in the looking for products which is every person can open the trade website. There, they can gain what they need by typing in, then they can compare the prices and discounts among many shops in the selling sites. For example, individual wants to obtain information regarding how to buy a smartphone; he just opens the Lazada.com which he can find a wide range of seller of mobile phone. With this, so the people can obtain what they need effortlessly.

Although there are several merits in the online shopping, this does not rule out the possibility that some demerits still include in. The citizens usually just take their order after several days since they have to wait until theirs arrive. For instance, after they order some stuff on the internet and pay it, they cannot receive what they order directly, usually it takes until for a day even a week depends on the distance where they buy it. Another case like internet fraud which has become a popular issue at present, a great deal of people lost their cash because they bought on the unverified websites. So, they have to make it clear and verified the trade sites before buying goods.

To sum up, in the modern era, people cannot get rid of the internet which it can make them simply particularly in the trading. Furthermore, they have to be aware of what they do, thanks to some criminals.