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Feb 27, 2024
Undergraduate / GKS essay - biology/bioengineering [2]
Which type of GKS application did you write this for? Undergraduate? Masters? Doctoral? It will be difficult for me to advise you regarding improvements without knowing the exact educational level you want a scholarship for. Regardless of the type of scholarship you want to receive, it appears that the essay you wrote is hugely irrelevant to the scholarship information need.
The GKS scholarship follows a particular information reference pattern. It is included in the application packet when you download it from the website. Specific information is required for each educational level. What is written here does not meet any of the learning level requirements. This is a typical high school personal statement for a college application. It is not GKS level writing. Write an essay based on the application guide questions instead.
Which type of GKS application did you write this for? Undergraduate? Masters? Doctoral? It will be difficult for me to advise you regarding improvements without knowing the exact educational level you want a scholarship for. Regardless of the type of scholarship you want to receive, it appears that the essay you wrote is hugely irrelevant to the scholarship information need.
The GKS scholarship follows a particular information reference pattern. It is included in the application packet when you download it from the website. Specific information is required for each educational level. What is written here does not meet any of the learning level requirements. This is a typical high school personal statement for a college application. It is not GKS level writing. Write an essay based on the application guide questions instead.