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Essay about banning mobile phone during schoolday

3 - @hglingg I think that you should not use word 'whatever' because it is informal. Also, you can write off...

Writing Feedbackhglingg - Feb 21, 2021vannn - Feb 25, 2021
Is it true that the vegetarian diet is more beneficial for health than eating meat?

2 - The subject proposed for this prompt is not being presented in an argumentative form. It is presented as an...

Writing Feedbackella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021Holt - Feb 22, 2021
MULTIPLE ASPECTS OF SPACE EXPLORATION AND THE PREDICTION OF ITS CHANGE IN THE FUTURE

3 - There are some position and spelling mistakes in your essay. Using 'occurred' instead of 'occured'. The 'obviously' stands in...

Writing Feedbackgingin3001 - Feb 21, 2021ella_lyly - Feb 21, 2021
Global Korea Scholarship Personal Statement for Graduate Study in Electrical Engineering.

3 - @Dam2019 Hello, I would definitely just summarize with the first paragraph the most important key factors of the others!...

ScholarshipDam2019 - Feb 21, 2021mariana_2314 - Feb 27, 2021
SCHOLARSHIP GKS - PERSONAL STATEMENT GRADUATE DEGREE 2021 - Public Administration.

6 - @grant_Oliver Thanks for the recommendation :) I'm working on it....

ScholarshipAnyellaa - Feb 21, 2021Anyellaa - Feb 23, 2021
Tell about the most interesting film you have seen recently

2 - The problem is your lack of familiarity with the English language. Specifically, how to write a movie review. You...

Writing FeedbackAlya_TS - Feb 20, 2021Holt - Feb 21, 2021
Digital pandemic - Writing an outstanding Essay for AAS

6 - I didn't see you put the course name and the institution you choose. According to your essay, I also...

ScholarshipLovelyshaa - Feb 20, 2021Umbu Richy - Mar 9, 2021
Motivation, small & medium - sized enterprises - GKS Personal Statement Business Administration

4 - Hello, I suggest you to elaborate the more specific area that you are mastered in to show your academic...

Scholarshipqwepoi - Feb 19, 2021fiannyfia - Feb 24, 2021
IETLS Writing Task 2 | Effects of negative reporting on individuals and society

3 - I think the explanations and opinions are not enough clearly. And also I think by reporting problems, governments can...

Writing Feedbackejohn - Feb 19, 2021hglingg - Feb 20, 2021
Many claim that the important factor in sport is physical strength; however, the opponents disagree

2 - The essay instructions requires a 4 paragraph comparison discussion with your personal opinion presented. Your approach to the writing...

Writing FeedbackAurora27 - Feb 19, 2021Holt - Feb 20, 2021
Writing 1: The line shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland who visited Edinburgh attractions

2 - You have several spelling errors in the presentation that show a lack of proof reading for this paper. You...

Writing FeedbackVanVan Nguyen - Feb 19, 2021Holt - Feb 20, 2021
IELTS"Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet"

3 - @DinhHuong In my opinion, your conclusion is quite short, so that you should expand more...

Writing FeedbackDinhHuong - Feb 19, 2021vannn - Feb 25, 2021
Canadian entrepreneurs - Waterloo AIF, first question of Part A

3 - When you're talking about future goals, you need to provide a more solid educational and working experience background to...

UndergraduateOlaMercedes - Feb 19, 2021Pradausa - Feb 22, 2021
Ielts1 - The quantity of pineapple exports in three different countries and the cost of pineapple

2 - Avoid using long sentences in your presentations that require 2 different sets of information. In the first paragraph, you...

Writing Feedbackthang1305 - Feb 18, 2021Holt - Feb 19, 2021
REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO - AIF form math (data science) essay

NEW - feel free to give any advices! Question 1: REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED) Please tell...

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Students choosing subjects - writing introduction for some essay

2 - One topic per thread There are direct questions being asked in the topic. What is the reason? What...

Writing Feedbackchucnguyenthi - Feb 18, 2021Holt - Feb 18, 2021
AAS - Accountant/Auditor - plans when you finish your studies?[500 characters]

4 - i think you should categorize your plan into shorterm and longterm, better if you add information of your continuation...

ScholarshipRebu - Feb 18, 2021sucianggraini - Mar 4, 2021
The major environmental problem is the loss of specific species of plants and animals

NEW - Some people say that the main environmental problem off our time is the loss of particular species of plants...

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IELTS: world pineapple exports and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019

2 - Incorrect vocabulary was used in the summary overview. The word "Otherwise" cannot be used in this presentation because you...

Writing Feedbackantinhsg - Feb 17, 2021Holt - Feb 18, 2021
Essay about the effect of technology using from home

3 - In the conclusion, the phrase "All in all" is quite informal, so I suggest you use "In conclusion" or...

Writing Feedbackhglingg - Feb 17, 2021Pham Bien - Feb 18, 2021
GKS SCHOLARSHIP LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN BEFORE AND AFTER

3 - Hello! There are some things that you do not need to put in this part of the Statement of...

Scholarshipsruthi1998 - Feb 17, 2021TraiaU - Feb 24, 2021
DRL model - [KGSP] MASTER IN ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE - Goal of study and detailed study plan

3 - Hi Holt, Thank you for the suggestions! Since master applicants do not need to submit Research Proposal, we...

Scholarshipgrant_Oliver - Feb 17, 2021grant_Oliver - Feb 26, 2021
Math, coop system - AIF-Reasons for Choosing The Programs

2 - You have to allot 300 characters per program. Revise the essay to clearly present your educational goal and Waterloo...

Undergraduateiwillbeaccepted - Feb 17, 2021Holt - Feb 17, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: the science and preparation of food should be taught in school time

4 - @nvsthao Hi! I think your body paragraph 1 is quite undeveloped as paragraph 2. Because it is a discussion...

Writing Feedbacknvsthao - Feb 17, 2021ilikesnow - Feb 17, 2021
GOVERNMENT OF IRELAND INTERNATIONAL EDUCATION SCHOLARSHIP

4 - I think you should look into the specific courses available under the program, mention those in the essay to...

Scholarshiptomtomiwa - Feb 16, 2021Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
Reasons to choose Waterloo and mechanical engineering- Help with AIF

2 - Summarize your educational goals. It is too long. You should be able to better explain that within 2 sentences...

Undergraduatetroyswack - Feb 16, 2021Holt - Feb 17, 2021
[Motivation letter] RWTH Aachen Summer School Scholarship-Supply Chain Program

3 - @Holt Thank you in advance for your feedback. I would like to attach the writing instructions below. It...

Lettersirfanmadani - Feb 16, 2021irfanmadani - Feb 17, 2021
Applying the knowledge and experience essay. Sustainable Transportation SISGP

4 - "As someone who experience working ..." Would be better framed as: As my core profession has involved mainly...

Scholarshipndhnif - Feb 16, 2021Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
The foundation for sportsmen's success. PHYSICAL STRENGTH AND MENTAL STRENGTH IN SPORT

3 - Hi @Pham Blen, For your essay, it is valid that you backed up both claims with evidence to...

Writing FeedbackPham Bien - Feb 16, 2021coolbaby - Feb 17, 2021
Evaluate the applicant's leadership capacity and potential to play a role in development

3 - @tyanna I think instead of mentioning the currency, try focusing on growth/changes from last term. Furthermore, it would be...

Scholarshiptyanna - Feb 16, 2021Ishaqur - Feb 20, 2021
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