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Barnard Government Repersentative

2 - AHH OMG WE PICKED THE SAME PERSON! :) Thats actually so weird cuz I thought I was being...

Undergraduatehehalter - Dec 29, 2009medelman2010 - Dec 29, 2009
Experiences that made you leave your comfort zone - University of Richmond

2 - When I was seven-years-old I had to leave Japan and move to Chesapeake, Virginia, because my father was stationed...

UndergraduateJustineee - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
NYU SUPP- 2050 MOVIE(Indian School)// SYRACUSE SUPP- Diversity of Options

5 - I liked the way you ended by saying "Syracuse is a port opened to many different boats."...

UndergraduateJackieC - Dec 29, 2009badromance - Jan 7, 2010
Princeton Supplement Essay: Some questions cannot be answered...

5 - Hi, I'm new here... I agree with Calico, I think it flows really nicely. Here are a few...

Undergraduatelapsi95 - Dec 29, 2009nathane - Dec 31, 2009
'Catch. Pass. Catch' - Common Application Short Answer- Lacrosse

4 - This is a very special way to answer the prompt. Not only is it original, but it is also...

Undergraduatecaligirl23 - Dec 29, 2009poisonivy - Dec 29, 2009
CMU SUPPLEMENT- CMU for Econ (why you've chosen the major)

3 - Thank you so much for your feedback =) Best of luck on your Rice apps...

UndergraduateJackieC - Dec 29, 2009rosschang - Dec 29, 2009
MS in Industrial Engineering, statement of purpose

8 - Thanks so much EF_Kevin, will make all the changes you suggested. You and your team are doing a great...

Graduatemenon_ranjit - Dec 29, 2009menon_ranjit - Jan 24, 2010
the Universe: Stanford Supplement: Intellectual Vitality Short Essay

5 - Finally, if the Universe has just the critical mass necessary to slow the expansion to a constant-size, space is...

Undergraduatelapsi95 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
Medical Program Essay for Stony Brook

2 - This is such a powerful paragraph... but this last line is a little unclear. I think the word...

UndergraduateG Dragon - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 30, 2009
Academic interests that all started with books- Cornell CAS

2 - When I arrived in the States as a six year-old, my parents believed that assimilation was my top priority....

Undergraduatexjohnx92 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
"S.T.O.P." - Brown University - Best piece of advice you've ever been given?

8 - At this tender age, we te enagers think less with our brains and more with our hearts. This...

Undergraduatezahras93 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Susan - Jan 13, 2010
Why Brown short answer- Neuroscience department and freedom!

6 - Shorten it and cut the rest after medical futures. Maybe combine it with another sentence. You could...

Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 29, 2009Foreigner - Dec 30, 2009
My conservative, Asian MOTHER; Tufts Supplement: Let your life speak

5 - Ok, I revised the essay a lot and decided to focus on another aspect. What do you think? ...

Undergraduatekrazzikittie - Dec 29, 2009krazzikittie - Dec 31, 2009
Whitman supplement :my understanding of diversity gained from Chinese history

2 - Hey there, I know it's tough trying to write essays in a language that's not your own, but you...

Undergraduateqianmeimei - Dec 29, 2009paranormale - Dec 29, 2009
'color strikes' - COMMON APP SHORT ANSWER- PAINTING

6 - This is a well-written short answer. The emotion and feelings that are displayed through your figurative language is remarkable....

UndergraduateJackieC - Dec 29, 2009dsspann23 - Dec 29, 2009
Common App Essay: A Dream with all my Dreams

8 - I am lying on my bed, exhausted after completing my homework and am glad to finally have a chance...

Undergraduateobituary - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
IWU-Illinois Wesleyan University Supplement

6 - What do you think? Please have a look on my essay: Good Luck!...

UndergraduateNatMeng - Dec 29, 2009zahras93 - Dec 30, 2009
tutoring children this year, Common Application Short Answer

2 - What you can do to really show the importance of the activity is provide what inspired you to tutor...

UndergraduateG Dragon - Dec 29, 2009emorris - Dec 29, 2009
"I love rugby" and sport - Common App Personal Essay

8 - OMG! You used my sentence! Haha I am flattered. However, I'm not certain if it's grammatically correct (since English...

Undergraduatesnailmonster - Dec 29, 2009JamesLe - Dec 29, 2009
why vassar essay - "My canvas"

16 - thanks for your opinions. I just submitted this :)...

Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 29, 2009poisonivy - Jan 1, 2010
'a diary in English' - TOEFL optional essay - English ability

3 - thank you very much:)...

Writing Feedbackmafia - Dec 29, 2009mafia - Dec 30, 2009
COMMON APP ESSAY-- VOLUNTEER TRIP TO INDIA

5 - I think it would make more sense to use the prompt "Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have...

Undergraduatechanj - Dec 29, 2009garfunkel129 - Dec 31, 2009
Leadership, knowledge, creativity - Brandeis University Supplement

13 - oh sorry but i was trying to answer Wanderer_x whose posted one prompt in your thread...

Undergraduatemmwhatchusay - Dec 29, 2009umulbaneen - Jan 8, 2010
Trinity College Supp - What's your Integrity Contract?

2 - Together, they have constructed the integrity plan I have adhered to in my everyday word and action. <-...

Undergraduatehbrad8002 - Dec 29, 2009Frydafly - Dec 29, 2009
STANFORD INTELLECTUALLY ENGAGED ESSAY

5 - thanxs! but do you mean to say that i should show how i've reached my conclusion?...

Undergraduateroal - Dec 29, 2009roal - Dec 29, 2009
Colby college admission essay: comment and relate to the following quote !

4 - Yeah, sorry about that. I think a lot of people are feeling that way, because we are still trying...

Undergraduateikkim12 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
Common App option 1) My volunteer trip to the Philippines

3 - I take off the gloves and find.. Long sentence, tone it down. I worked...

Undergraduatekiwi90 - Dec 29, 2009autogunny - Dec 30, 2009
Talk about how the poets show their respect to animals.

4 - This confused me... Agamemnon is ancient mythology, and it has been told many times, but when I google...

Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 6, 2010
Williams Supplement (300 words) ~ look through window at signif enviro. to you

3 - As snowflakes fall outside the fog-stained glass, I look inside the window---> Do you mean you are on the...

Undergraduatekakashi1992 - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
Talk about the metaphor of a movie "The PaintedVeil".

2 - Hi Kelly, try "lift up" instead of "unveil"...

Writing FeedbackKellyli - Dec 29, 2009KAJAL - Dec 30, 2009
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