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common app "Topic of your choice" - "Perseverance", from Nepal

2 - Great essay, a lot of strong imagery. I not only managed to learn business skills in the cyber...

Undergraduateincognito_leo - Dec 15, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2008
Health Care; UM / Issue of Importance(personal, national, international)

4 - "Util just recently, health care had never even been an tangible option for my parents" A before a...

Undergraduatejane6272 - Dec 15, 2008timothyerdei - Dec 29, 2008
'hard work is rewarded' - common app short answer, cross country.

5 - My most meaningful commitment over the past four years has been running on the cross country team . ...

Undergraduatefastracker91 - Dec 15, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 23, 2008
"My dream remains" an extra special essay for applyiing to the university

2 - The content and structure of this essay is very good. The diction and grammar are decent, but could use...

Undergraduateapramone - Dec 14, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 15, 2008
"photographs" & their benefits / Significant Experience

9 - Is it really worth the effort of all of us standing side-by-side, forcing superficial smiles until she is satisfied...

Undergraduatezowzow - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2008
"Scientific Creativolution: Are Evolution and Creation Sciences?"

10 - Would anyone else like to aid in my endeavor? I'd be much obliged to get multiple perspectives....

Writing FeedbackVaune - Dec 14, 2008Vaune - Dec 16, 2008
Northwestern supplement short answer (atmosphere / location)

2 - You might want to tone down on the obvious hyperbole in your sycophantic praise of Northwestern. Not that you...

Undergraduatebully - Dec 14, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 14, 2008
Tennis: On and Off the Court (an extracurricular activity essay)

8 - Thanks, I will change the tense....

UndergraduateCTToner1123 - Dec 14, 2008CTToner1123 - Dec 16, 2008
Writing terminology

3 - In your coursework, you will probably study the discourse community called the "public sphere," which is the biggest discourse...

Grammar, Usagemileybiley - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2008
THINK BIG; "Dr. Ben Carson, a world-renowned neurosurgeon " - Character in fiction

3 - You're getting there. Some more advice: "From that page on, I decided that for any task I have...

Undergraduatenbarley - Dec 14, 2008EF_Sean - Dec 29, 2008
Essay for princeton, "The profound thinker" - I'd like your opinion!

3 - I liked it too, and could find no errors. The last sentence was fine! Actually, though, you could...

Undergraduatevectoraj - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2008
"an English major" - Bowdoin Supplemental Essay

4 - As a perspective Bowdoin student it should be prospective :)...

Undergraduatejessmel - Dec 14, 2008iddqd - Dec 19, 2008
"That Were both Good and Bad" - my writing experience, Spokane college

2 - In conclusion, writing has been difficult for me at times. But, writing 115 has helped me in many ways....

Undergraduateannedoherty - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 15, 2008
"Pressure Makes Diamonds" - Apply Texas Prompt A... what do you think?

4 - Thanks for all the help! I'm applying tomorrow :)...

Undergraduatealcxz - Dec 14, 2008alcxz - Dec 15, 2008
"Food for Thought"-Common App Essay

7 - Sorry, I know I posted a few times on my own thread but I just had some questions: ...

UndergraduateCTToner1123 - Dec 14, 2008CTToner1123 - Dec 15, 2008
NJIT application: My ambition for success is motored by the ability to logically control my future

3 - Thanks Kevin!...

Undergraduatejohn404 - Dec 14, 2008john404 - Dec 15, 2008
Studying Mathematics - My personal statement

3 - In Religious Studies I am able to argue my point across, proving that there is more than one solution...

Undergraduatealia - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
Common App Essay - a situation with my Mom

3 - "I did not need to look for any excruciating facial remarks for her overall condition was at its worst."...

Undergraduatesushibun - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
A Wake-up Call- Common App essay

6 - Thanks for the correction and comment Kevin! :)...

Undergraduatetiffanyh5849 - Dec 14, 2008tiffanyh5849 - Dec 17, 2008
Short answer essay questions (yoga, tennis)

5 - Most of the sentences are pretty good. You might want to make the following change, though: "On a...

Undergraduatevolleyball09 - Dec 14, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 20, 2009
"Can I get a packet of cigarettes?" - common apps short answer

5 - Wow, sounds like it was much more exciting than a paper route!! Good essay! :) Kevin...

Undergraduatezowzow - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
common application essay (agreed to follow my father to the United States)

2 - Not many people get a chance to live outside of their native country, and to a certain extent, I...

Undergraduatetaeok64 - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
"A Unity of Worlds" - MIT/Common APP essay? ACL tear+

2 - It was not that I gave up on football, but rather that I came to terms with my injury....

UndergraduatePanda1688 - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
Difficulty need not foreshadow despair or defeat; Amherst supplement

2 - What if the whole game is to be decided by that runner scoring a point? I hope that...

Undergraduatejphwang - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
Common Application Short Answer (Color Guard)

3 - Thank you very much....

UndergraduateMimiroselilly25 - Dec 14, 2008Mimiroselilly25 - Dec 14, 2008
"Some questions cannot be answered." - Princeton Supplemental Essay

2 - Wow, this is one of the best essays I've read here. It really made me think about my life...

Undergraduatejessmel - Dec 14, 2008JustGlaze - Dec 14, 2008
"moved from New York to Bangalore" - Rutgers Undergraduate Admission Essay

5 - I moved from New York to Bangalore, India during the summer of 2004. The reasons included personal familial issues,...

Undergraduatekarishma_100 - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 16, 2008
Admission Essay about tearing my ACL

5 - thanks, any suggestions for my activity statement thing....

Undergraduatectoy - Dec 14, 2008ctoy - Dec 14, 2008
person's childhood are the the most important years of a person's lives.

NEW - Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years (the time from birth to...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 14, 2008 -
Conflicts between dream and reality; SOP

2 - "How can education reform be achieved through policy change reform?" The question has stayed in my mind for years,...

Undergraduateirenecc - Dec 14, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2008
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