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Nigeria - Educational resources and opportunities - My personal essay for common application

3 - I am not really clear on the point of this essay. Since you did not provide the common app...

UndergraduateReinabel - Sep 28, 2020Holt - Sep 30, 2020
Task 2 ielts - Many countries nowaday have population with more young people than old people

6 - I think you should consider carefully about template of each type of ielts essay, task response and avoiding translating...

Writing FeedbackYolo120308 - Sep 28, 2020studyingabroad - Sep 30, 2020
"How I quit avoiding my family's issue" - Questbridge Biographical essay

3 - Thanks for your long feedbacks! I will incorporate those tips for my future scholarships!...

Scholarshipkuro - Sep 28, 2020kuro - Sep 30, 2020
Number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University

4 - I see. Thanks!...

Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Sep 28, 2020LadyOfClockwork - Sep 30, 2020
Solutions to address traffic and environmental issues

2 - Do not leave your opening paraphrase hanging. You already said that you disagree with the point of view, so...

Writing FeedbackTuanHarry - Sep 28, 2020Holt - Sep 30, 2020
Struggled to find the purpose of life - Essay for KGSP Undergraduate 2021

3 - @Holt, Hi thank you for you feedback. I also think that I lacked motivation in my Business field too....

ScholarshipKethya - Sep 28, 2020Kethya - Sep 28, 2020
Internet technology means we don't need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live

2 - There is an error in your task accuracy rendition within the prompt restatement. The question is: To what extent...

Writing Feedbackquadau123 - Sep 28, 2020Holt - Sep 28, 2020
College Essay about meeting my dad

2 - Well this story really gets the reviewer into a part of your life that the other prompts may not...

Undergraduatetolbertk - Sep 28, 2020Holt - Sep 28, 2020
Hard-working, analytical, intellectual - Application essay from an international student.

5 - @Holt Thank you very much for your response! I applied the first part, however, I can't seem to find...

Undergraduateddejud - Sep 27, 2020ddejud - Sep 28, 2020
Autoimmune Disease has shaped my relationship with Medicine - Perfusion school essay

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for taking the time to provide your feedback! I will definitely be revising and...

Graduatecxw67 - Sep 27, 2020cxw67 - Sep 28, 2020
Sports centres and social health - IELTS task 2

3 - Thank you so much. I recognize myself still have many mistakes about grammar, collocation, idea. Can you show...

Writing FeedbackPeterpen - Sep 27, 2020Peterpen - Sep 28, 2020
Thoughts about my MS Data Science Statement of Purpose

3 - For the statement of purpose, you need to go beyond your childhood interests and undergraduate training. Since you are...

Graduateksssh - Sep 27, 2020Holt - Sep 28, 2020
Nowadays students have more opportunities to study abroad - whats your view on this?

3 - @Holt thanks for your help...

Writing Feedbackhang32 - Sep 27, 2020hang32 - Sep 28, 2020
Future of dreams - Personal statment for GKS 2020

2 - This would have been a truly useful personal statement or motivational essay had you been applying for a different...

Scholarshipibrahimtamer - Sep 27, 2020Holt - Sep 28, 2020
"My family's influence on my outlook on life" - Questbridge Prompt

3 - Do not focus on the individual life stories in your presentation. The reviewer doesn't care for that. However, he...

Scholarshiphappyboy123 - Sep 27, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
Early technological developments helped people and changed their lives more than recent development

2 - I cannot say that this essay will get a passing score. You see, the minimum word requirement for the...

Writing Feedbackheyiin - Sep 27, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
Scholarship essay to highlight socio-economic development of Nigeria, leadership initiatives and com

2 - Rather than simply saying this is URGENT, you should have taken steps to mark this as URGENT in our...

ScholarshipDictbennie - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
What inspires me / education - QuestBridge Scholarship Essay

2 - I think you should not focus so much on the backstory. Setting up the scene at home after you...

Scholarshiparia281 - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
"Nothing can beat Experience" Intl. Relations/Media & Com. Personal Statement for GKS-U Scholarship

2 - This is not marked as URGENT in our system, no matter how many times you say it is URGENT....

Scholarshipapollo_nia - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
I am going to beat fantasy with science in GKS 2020 Chemistry

2 - Are you writing a study plan for the GKS scholarship? If you are, then you have not written a...

ScholarshipFidleisAldo - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
IELTS 2: Learning everything by remembering related facts to achieve a success in studying

3 - @Holt Thank you so muchh...

Writing Feedbackjasonpham - Sep 26, 2020jasonpham - Sep 29, 2020
IELTS TASK 2 The obligation to respect older people is a norm that needs to be maintained and taught

2 - You need to provide a direct representation of the original prompt in the paraphrase section. It would also help...

Writing Feedbackdarwin25 - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 27, 2020
IELTS TASK 1 - The diagram illustrate immigration into the United States from 1850 to 1930

4 - @LadyOfClockwork @Holt thank you yours feedback it is very helpful:)...

Writing Feedbackliliaeat - Sep 26, 2020liliaeat - Sep 29, 2020
The weekly expenditure of fast food on 3 categories in the UK in the period from 1970 to 1990

2 - You should attach the line graph so that others can help you. I did this topic before and as...

Writing FeedbackTrinhdieuhong - Sep 26, 2020todoroki - Sep 26, 2020
Studying at university or get a job straight after school? Discuss both views

2 - With 266 words written, one would say that you should have written a pretty good essay. The problem, is...

Writing Feedbackthu741999 - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 26, 2020
Various reasons why people travel - Writing task 1

2 - Your first paragraph, the summary overview, is a marathon to read. There was not a single punctuation mark used...

Writing Feedbackphamngocnhan - Sep 26, 2020Holt - Sep 26, 2020
I told them I wanted to be a doctor - my 800 word biographical essay

2 - I was a bit confused by your sudden claim of "I was born American" in paragraph 4. Since you...

Scholarshipeldomady - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 26, 2020
GKS-U Personal Statement BIOTECHNOLOGY

2 - Your motivation to study in Korea is not making sense. You just said the same thing 3 different ways....

UndergraduateJPM21 - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 26, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 2: family members have less communications with each other compared to the past

2 - The question is asking you a question that deals with the present time. Therefore, it is improper for you...

Writing Feedbackf_mohamadi - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
Ordinary people unlike huge organizations, are said to have no impacts on environmental improvements

2 - You are discussing your non support of the statement in direct opposition to the discussion instruction provided. You have...

Writing Feedbackchanbinh - Sep 25, 2020Holt - Sep 25, 2020
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