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(business sense, role model, MBA degree) -Statement Of Goals

8 - An MBA degree can help develop your career in a lot of ways, depending on what career you are...

Graduateambitious1 - Oct 15, 2008Leah_Writer - Nov 5, 2012
Doctor of Pharmacy Degree in less than three years; Why University of the Pacific?

2 - Why is this program better than all of the others? What is it specifically about this institution that is...

Undergraduatewendywu - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
'the beauty of mathematics' - California exchange student

4 - Thank you very much for your suggestions!~...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008mickeygirl - Oct 15, 2008
Essay: "There's no place like home."

3 - Thanks a lot Gloria!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
FSU Resume; 'letterman on my high school football team'

4 - Thanks both. that helped alot...

LettersSportjag - Oct 15, 2008Sportjag - Oct 15, 2008
An unexpected act of kindness

4 - Good afternoon. Putting this piece at the beginning would be a great idea; it's a "hook" and sets...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 16, 2008
Need advice on essay question- "Unique characteristics and experiences"

3 - Hey, thanks alot. I think you are doing a great job on this boarding helping everyone out. I think...

UndergraduateGuruKid - Oct 15, 2008GuruKid - Oct 17, 2008
Super Powers Hero - FSU Essay

NEW - "Vires represents strength in its many forms. Whether it is physical, emotional, or intellectual, it is something that can...

UndergraduateLimaEm - Oct 15, 2008 -
UF Essay - "Ready for My Unpredictable Future"

4 - And... I want to delete this thread. How do I do that? I am going to post up another...

Undergraduateesthie_ - Oct 14, 2008esthie_ - Oct 16, 2008
'Teachers and student relations' - Common App - elaborate on one of your activity

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to flow, at the end of the first section you could put in a...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
"my strong moral and intellectual ability" - Last Minute Essay. (FSU)

NEW - Throughout my entire life the Latin word Vires has been my guiding philosophy. Vires embodies my moral and intellectual...

UndergraduateAnthony - Oct 14, 2008 -
Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help

NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....

Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Oct 14, 2008 -
'difficulty learning' - UCF ESSAY - BUMPS IN THE ROAD

2 - Good evening. You've got a fine piece here, but I'm not sure how it fulfills the prompt. The...

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
"I am well prepared and primed" - FSU essay

3 - I like the new addition. I suggest changing the middle of the first sentence to be a little less...

Undergraduatecnwilliams - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
FSU admissions essay- worthy enough to attend Florida State University?

4 - Good evening. Opening with a question here is fine; you kind of just have to take the tone...

Undergraduatebethany_shphrd - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
teleporting mentally to a different world

4 - That would work as well. Generally, whatever tense is more natural and comes easier to you will reflect itself...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Obstacles or 'bumps in the road in your academic or personal life

4 - Sure! "...and I'm confident that..." "...economical crisis don't help..." "...center and I've noticed..." I...

Undergraduatefernaj13 - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
COMMON APP - the importance of diversity to you

3 - Good evening. Your response does answer the prompt, with well thought out examples and good description. It flows...

Undergraduatecalend4r - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
I am passionate about each activity which I am apart of - Elaborate on one of your activities...

2 - Good afternoon. I am not involved in every club, b ut I am passionate about each ... As...

Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'Better grades' - Common Application - Significant Achievement

3 - I agree with calend4r's comments about the last paragraph; it is important to make sure that you are relating...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'giving up my time to help my uncle' - personal statement

NEW - TELL US A PERSONAL QUALITY,TALENT,ACCOMPLISHMENT, CONTRIBUTION OR EXPERIENCE THAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. WHAT ABOUT THSI QUALITY OR ACCOMPLISHMENT...

Undergraduatenickymicky - Oct 14, 2008 -
Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people

3 - Thank you very much! I will try my best to avoid these usage errors in my later essays!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...

Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
how does Penn make a perfect match for you?

4 - I don't think so; you've done a very thorough job as it is. I think you've covered all of...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
Name a professor with whom you would like to study or conduct research with

5 - Good evening. Let's see... I suggest taking out some of the ex tenuous detail and condensing your...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 17, 2008
About my youth and my first visit to the USA - some suggestion pls

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 13, 2008 -
a multitude of unforgettable memories - common application essay

NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...

Undergraduatethebobert - Oct 13, 2008 -
UF ESSAY: "meaningful event" - Upward Bound

3 - thank you For your much needed corrections....

Undergraduatecollegeicntwait - Oct 13, 2008collegeicntwait - Oct 18, 2008
'I have no body, I'm stuck' - Why do you want to attend Pratt?

3 - I agree that the pieces definitely need more expansion. "Intro I have been interested in all sorts of arts...

Undergraduatekobedatnext - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
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