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The use of social media and effects on individuals' mental health

3 - Your discussion has been well organized and there is also much clarity. However, to thoroughly discuss this, you will...

Research PapersEmryann423 - Aug 6, 2023FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
Task 1: The percentage for clothes, books, film, music and travel in online sales in New Zealand

4 - In my opinion, your essay is excellent! There is only one thing that could be improved to do better...

Writing Feedbacksemmast - Aug 5, 2023Tonynhan - Aug 14, 2023
The graph gives information about the percentage of the population if four different Asian countries

2 - Use at least 2 sentences for the summary overview. You will get an impressive summary score if you use...

Writing Feedbackmmmphugn - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
Financial support to poorer countries is not effective

2 - The summary overview does not need to be a social studies lesson. It should only be composed of 2-3...

Writing Feedbackurrachelbae - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
WRITING TASK 1: The graph below shows the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004

2 - ther eis a conflict in this reference between the singular and plural words. 4 indicates a plural number...

Writing Feedbacktp123 - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 13, 2023
Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other

2 - Do not over emphasize your opinion statement. It is not necessary in this case since you were not...

Writing FeedbackStellalightfairy - Aug 5, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
Writing Task 1: Statistics of people who passed their driving exam in an Asian country in four years

3 - Here my opinion: - "it is clear that higher percentage of women who passed the test than men who...

Writing Feedbackrosiiieee12345 - Aug 4, 2023eya123456 - Aug 14, 2023
Writing task 1: The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your review, I really appreciate it: This is the overview part I have...

Writing Feedbackeya123456 - Aug 4, 2023eya123456 - Aug 10, 2023
The pie charts show results of a survey of university about their part-time and full-time students.

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice, I will note it down....

Writing Feedbackmyhelianthus - Aug 4, 2023myhelianthus - Aug 9, 2023
Writing task 1: The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry's sectors contribution

2 - You incorrectly interpreted the image. When you say between, that means there are years mentioned that connect the...

Writing FeedbackVivian Gia Linh - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
Both views to indicate the impact of using phones by students in school

2 - It is fine that you told the reader what you will be discussing. However, you will not get...

Writing Feedbackmayanhshine1803 - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
My research paper on medical racism

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Research Paperslexikylee - Aug 4, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
The data about the volume of travelers who visited an island in the Caribbean between 2010 and 2017

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your evaluation. I will have some fixes and adjustments in my next test....

Writing FeedbackRTroMT - Aug 4, 2023RTroMT - Aug 11, 2023
Both view when using smartphones.

2 - You atr trying to convince the examiner that you have a valid opinion regarding the subject based on...

Writing FeedbackQngiua - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 9, 2023
It is argued that parents should educate their kids to become a good person in society, not school

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Writing FeedbackLehau - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Learning history in school

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Writing Feedbackhayeon1402 - Aug 3, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
In the charts: British pupils who were able to communicate different languages than English

NEW - proportions of British students speaking foreign languages The two pie charts illustrate the percentage of British pupils who...

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Children should do organized activities or be free in their free time.

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Convenient foods will replace traditional foods in the future... you agree or disagree?

2 - You showed that you understood the writing task. You also provided the correct response format for it. The word...

Writing FeedbackNgoc Ling - Aug 2, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
IE Academic WT2 - The use of mobile phones does as much harm to the society as smoking does

2 - Wrong. You are directly being asked for your measured response as the writer of the essay. You cannot...

Writing Feedbackgobidea - Aug 2, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Nowadays, more and more people want to travel to remote areas such as the South Pole.

2 - The question asks you to write the essay based upon a comparison discussion format. That means, you must use...

Writing Feedbackphuogntr - Aug 2, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
Nuclear Power: A Key Part of the Clean Energy Transition

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Research Papersjsullivan2193 - Aug 1, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
BEING A QUEER MUSLIM - COMMON APP ESSAY FOR UMICH!

2 - Somehow the presentation seems incomplete to me. I am looking for some reference as to how the Muslim community...

Undergraduateraindrops - Aug 1, 2023Holt - Aug 8, 2023
What brings more merits - getting an occupation or continuing studies after finishing school?

3 - @Holt that you mean those in body graph? sorry I dunno exactly what u mean to improve my writing...

Writing Feedbacknhim3607 - Aug 1, 2023nhim3607 - Aug 10, 2023
Countries should not replace their traditional culture with modern culture.

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Writing Feedbacktien_112 - Aug 1, 2023Holt - Aug 7, 2023
WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSSION - The main environmental problem of our time

2 - There is no need for a measured response in this essay. That is not a requirement for the...

Writing FeedbackJadewestboston - Aug 1, 2023Holt - Aug 7, 2023
The old and present look of Dubai

2 - I did not learn anything about the past and present look of Dubai from this paragraph. There was no...

Writing Feedbackaysnnn - Jul 31, 2023Holt - Aug 7, 2023
WRITING 1 the proportion of new teachers having English and French degrees in Ontario (2001-2007)

2 - Okay. You have a definite problem when it comes to singular v. plura word usage. You are using a...

Writing Feedbackthulhp09 - Jul 31, 2023Holt - Aug 7, 2023
Celebrities such as singers, actors or dancers can earn a significant amount of money

2 - This is an over discussed essay. You need to write only 4 paragraphs to explain your opinion in the...

Writing FeedbackNguynnn - Jul 31, 2023Holt - Aug 7, 2023
The graph shows the value in US dollars (in millions of dollars) of investment in funds of four cate

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