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Be friends with ex, agree or disagree

3 - I think you did not add in more ideas after the word "First" used to make a sequence, which...

Writing Feedbackthaiha20 - Jun 5, 2023anialee - Jun 6, 2023
Language translation platforms popularity - is learning foreign language still necessary?

2 - Do not explain things below. Your writer's opinion is incomplete as it does not provide the simple reason...

Writing Feedbackhyl - Jun 5, 2023Holt - Jun 6, 2023
The proportion of unemployed persons in England from 1993 to 2012

2 - The trending statement has 2 problems: 1. The writer used actual data for the presentation rather than an estimated...

Writing Feedbackkunnn_1 - Jun 4, 2023Holt - Jun 5, 2023
If old people are no longer physically, mentally, or financially able to see themselves..

2 - Is your personal opinion a part of this statement? There is no personal opinion and solution summary presented....

Writing FeedbackLani - Jun 4, 2023Holt - Jun 5, 2023
Essay about bar chart distances traveled per person per week in terms of 5 types of transport

2 - There is no way that this essay will get a passing score in the actual test. The most problematic...

Writing Feedbackhaodd - Jun 4, 2023Holt - Jun 5, 2023
Essay about contacting with intelligent life forms on the other planets

3 - I think you need to state your opinion in the introduction before getting into the body paragraphs. That would...

Writing FeedbackPhuongTrinh - Jun 4, 2023anialee - Jun 6, 2023
Should rich countries lend a helping hand to poorer nations when some catastrophic events occurr?

2 - You must use first person pronoun references in these types of opinion essays. The essay is not writing itself....

Writing Feedbackevelyn123 - Jun 3, 2023Holt - Jun 5, 2023
The propotions of the data of automoblie possession in Britain over a period of 36 years

2 - The summary overview should not only indicate the number of years but also the period of time from the...

Writing Feedbackcab - Jun 2, 2023Holt - Jun 3, 2023
The chart illustrates distances traveled per person per week (in kilometers) in terms of 5 types of

2 - As there are several types of bar graphs in use during this test, you need to be highly specific...

Writing Feedbackhichahee - Jun 1, 2023Holt - Jun 2, 2023
The diagram belows show the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on

2 - You have to familiarize yourself with the various images provided for the task 1 essay. An ordinary picture will...

Writing Feedbackdatngbn1226 - Jun 1, 2023Holt - Jun 2, 2023
The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling e train between 1970 and 2030

2 - The summary overview is not only lacking in information, it is also rude and shows a lack of proper...

Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - Jun 1, 2023Holt - Jun 2, 2023
Research Paper for ENG Class on Photography, Social Issues, and Public Awareness

2 - The first paragraph was an empty introduction. It did not contain any information of value that would have hooked...

Research PapersSrelatino - May 31, 2023Holt - Jun 1, 2023
Task 1: The table and chart below show the time spent at leisure and household activities on Britian

3 - @Dai Ngoc You should have 4 paragraphs for task 1. You also need to check your grammar and pay...

Writing FeedbackDai Ngoc - May 31, 2023ptthao0801 - Jun 1, 2023
Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career

2 - There is no wonderment present in the original prompt. The original sources are the opinions of people. 2...

Writing FeedbackAndrewCapaldi - May 31, 2023Holt - Jun 1, 2023
Essay about an industrial area in the town of Norbiton with maps

2 - The summary overview is a bit incomplete. You must identify the image as the present "layout" of the industrial...

Writing Feedbackaether - May 31, 2023Holt - May 31, 2023
Urban areas contain a handful of noticeable problems whose main victims are juveniles

3 - @titi88 Some expressions like "It is crystal clear that", "hottest affair" are quite informal and shouldn't be used in...

Writing Feedbacktiti88 - May 30, 2023chupchip - Jun 1, 2023
Some people think that when criminals are punished, they will not commit crimes

5 - Your essay quite hard to read due to punctuation and many wrong sentences structure. I think you should check...

Writing FeedbackElenaDiem - May 30, 2023chanhthi1506 - Jun 9, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ON equality for women in work

3 - the essay sadly quite short and may result in failing score, you should add 1,2 examples in 2 paragraph...

Writing Feedbackjudy65996 - May 29, 2023chanhthi1506 - Jun 9, 2023
IELTS TASK 2 ON LOCAL LANGUAGE LEARNING VS ENGLISH

2 - There are 2 questions being asked in the original presentation. However, you only responded to one of the two....

Writing Feedbackanialee - May 29, 2023Holt - May 30, 2023
The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994

2 - Since this is a 2 image graph, you should have maximized your presentation to 200 words. That way you...

Writing FeedbackMary Wynne - May 29, 2023Holt - May 29, 2023
Whether or not school children should be taught more about local or world history

3 - I could be wrong here but i think the 2nd and 3rd body paragraph aren't supposed to be connected...

Writing FeedbackTrangnguyenn - May 28, 2023anialee - May 29, 2023
Pros and cons of getting news from the Internet rather than read newspapers or watching TV.

3 - I don't think that you have stated whether the development is positive or negative?...

Writing FeedbackZacharyDang13 - May 28, 2023anialee - May 29, 2023
The impact of population growth on economic development

2 - This is a cause and solution essay. So you have indicated several causes of the problems related to the...

Writing Feedbackan_2812 - May 28, 2023Holt - May 29, 2023
In the graph figures for the consumption per capita of Beef, Pork, Broilers, and Turkey in the US

2 - One key element is missing from this presentation. These forecasts all end in December of 2012. These do not...

Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - May 28, 2023Holt - May 29, 2023
Personal Statement for Anesthesia Assistant Master's Program

2 - Thre is a key feature missing in the story of your sister. How did that operation lead to your...

Graduatedodrop867 - May 28, 2023Holt - May 29, 2023
Building specialised facilities to train top athletes or providing sports ones for everyone

2 - This is totally irrelevant to the discussion. There is no mention of this whatsoever in the original presentation....

Writing Feedbackthg080206 - May 27, 2023Holt - May 28, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1- Line Graph- shop closures and openings

3 - @rubinguyen For your opening, The number -> the numbers (the number of openings AND the number of closures) ...

Writing Feedbackrubinguyen - May 27, 2023ptthao0801 - May 28, 2023
How does Fitzgerald portray the "American Dream"? Is it something that is achievable?

2 - This statement has all the hallmark signs of an AI written paragraph. While the essay seems to check all...

Book Reportstran2909 - May 27, 2023Holt - May 28, 2023
The percentages of young unemployed people by age in London and in the rest of England, 1993 to 2012

2 - You only have 20 minutes to write this task. That leaves you with a chance to write no more...

Writing Feedbackptthao0801 - May 26, 2023Holt - May 27, 2023
The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise

2 - This is an exaggerate claim that in no way makes sense when compared to the information provided in...

Writing FeedbackChanggueb - May 25, 2023Holt - May 27, 2023
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