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To study mechatronics engineering - sop for stipendium hungaricum

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Strong Healthcare Foundations: Statement of Intent Review

2 - You have read the course description very well. You have noted the courses in the study list showing that...

Undergraduatejetta - Jan 3, 2023Holt - Jan 4, 2023
Doubts about the study plan; what should be addressed in that part of the application?

3 - I'm applying for the GKS-U. In last year's application, they described three topics to be answered in three pages;...

Essayscrlian - Jan 3, 2023crlian - Jan 3, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Biology in University of Debrecen

3 - I believe that the letter is too long and does not really show your motivation is the mentioned program....

ScholarshipHoangTranDuc - Jan 3, 2023bsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023
Growing my technical roots genuinely - Statement of purpose for Materials Science Master MaMaSELF

2 - We recommend including complete information in your essay when you ask for advice. That includes your name orat least...

Graduateliliquestions - Jan 3, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
My grad essay for Molecular Biology

5 - Also, I wrote it in the medical context because I am fascinated with clinical biochemistry and genetics. The hint...

GraduateAgyshine16 - Jan 3, 2023Agyshine16 - Jan 4, 2023
Personal Statement - Warwick Business School, Msc Management Information System & Digital Innovation

3 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you so much for your input. I was told that if you are still a...

Graduatewitjaksonostuden - Jan 2, 2023witjaksonostuden - Jan 3, 2023
Ielts 2: Government supervised and handled by the authority rather than by private companies

3 - There are some grammatical mistakes in your paper: 1.the article before the noun cannot be omitted, so it is...

Writing FeedbackHuynguyen123232 - Jan 2, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 6, 2023
Ielts task 2 _ using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor

3 - I didn't find any grammatical mistakes in your paper. Great! Your section structure is reasonable, but it should be...

Writing Feedbackhoaflth - Jan 2, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023; Cultural Anthropology major

2 - Provide a backgrounder on your father. Where did he work? What was his position? Was he passionate about his...

Scholarshipnidnoi_kuma - Jan 2, 2023Holt - Jan 2, 2023
The recycling depot - UBC Sauder Application: Personal Profile

2 - You seem to have had an assistant leadership position at the recycling plant. It is important that you acknowledge...

Undergraduatemlkm - Jan 2, 2023Holt - Jan 2, 2023
Anesthesiologist Assistant Personal Statement. How my background suits this profession.

3 - When it comes to a vacancy in a health course, any argument you use to boost you needs to...

UndergraduateAbian - Jan 1, 2023crlian - Jan 4, 2023
Passion for physics and chemistry. Motivational Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum, Chemical Engineering

2 - Why do you not trust us with the complete copy of this essay? Your juvenile writing and clear lack...

Scholarshipvokazar - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Personal Statement: Global Markets, Local Creativities; Industrial Dynamics and Sustainability

2 - The reasons you have chosen to study in specific countries should also indicate the university choices and how you...

Graduatearoojawan - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 2, 2023
We age and decay. MIT : Describe the world you come from essay

3 - Thanks for the feedback, what I was trying to get at with my essay was I live on a...

UndergraduateTheDoctor2035 - Jan 1, 2023TheDoctor2035 - Jan 1, 2023
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - More Men Dying of Covid-19 Than Women

2 - While the word count was properly met in the presentation, the correct page formatting was not applied so formatting...

Writing Feedbackzeed22 - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 1, 2023
TASK II IELTS regarding of the world becoming popular to research the history of owns family

3 - I'm not going to judge your performance in TA, LR and CC. Holt has already made a comprehensive assessment,...

Writing FeedbackYETI YUNIARSIH - Jan 1, 2023Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
How Travel Nursing has changed Healthcare

2 - The first paragraph is an incomplete introduction as it does not present the thesis statement / purpose of...

Research PapersShannajones39 - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 1, 2023
Guitar Makes a Comeback to Pop Music

2 - The essay would also benefit from more popular song mentions in relation to guitar use a rhythm basis. You...

Writing FeedbackEddward - Jan 1, 2023Holt - Jan 1, 2023
UBC Sauder School of Business - Personal Profile - RESPONSE TO A PROBLEM SITUATION: The Referee

3 - Your essay seems to be broken. It needs to be worked on. Suggestions- You can tell how your...

Undergraduatecatlover420 - Dec 31, 2022SunilPal - Jan 5, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter BSc on ChemEng

2 - The first paragraph would be more impressive if it does not refer to any age aspect. Use the first...

Undergraduateiudex - Dec 31, 2022Holt - Jan 1, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Computer Science

3 - Hi, I'm also a newbie in writing a motivation letter or even any letters. I guess try to point...

Scholarshiptuanb2610 - Dec 31, 2022franklywritten - Jan 2, 2023
My SOP for a PhD in Data Science and Scientific Computing at the Institute of Science and Technology

2 - PhD studies of the research kind requires the student to portray a sense of continuing research that may have...

Scholarshipewaoluwa26 - Dec 31, 2022Holt - Jan 1, 2023
IETLS Writing Task 2: encouraging studying overseas?

3 - The structure of your writing is good. You have an argument and example in both paragraphs. However, you put...

Writing Feedbackchlyee - Dec 31, 2022tuanb2610 - Dec 31, 2022
The Introvert - SEAYLP Application: Why is participation in this program important to you?

2 - This is a personal reason that definitely helps add a different touch to the application. However, this cannot be...

Scholarshipnotngoc - Dec 31, 2022Holt - Dec 31, 2022
A goal-driven person - academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your goals.

3 - The educator expects to see in your answer:" academic objectives". But in your first sentence, you do not mention...

UndergraduateAksh2005 - Dec 30, 2022hanablaaaa - Dec 30, 2022
The Craft - Using your volunteer/work experiences, describe the topics or issues that you

2 - The essay is too wordy for a supplemental essay. The situations take too long to get to the point...

Undergraduatenataliely - Dec 29, 2022Holt - Dec 30, 2022
Role of a mother in our lives

2 - The first problem this presentation has is the writing format. It is too compressed on the page, making it...

Research Paperstabinda78 - Dec 29, 2022Holt - Dec 30, 2022
Geoinformation and spatial science - statement of Purpose for Graduate studies

2 - One of the reasons that the forum members are required to provide unredacted essays is that complete information is...

Graduatenep1234 - Dec 29, 2022Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Double Degree Motivational Letter; My interest in business management

2 - Nobody will be able to offer a solid review of this motivational letter because of the redacted information. This...

Letterstttiiiaaa - Dec 27, 2022Holt - Dec 27, 2022
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