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TOEFL:Decision can be made quickly

2 - We have to take make decisions. "make" Almost all people have to make some decisions in their daily...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2010
TOEFL:Some people trust their first impression about a person character

3 - "Lot" is a singular noun, so you have to write: There are many people who believe that the... ...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2010
"What is love?" - It's the beauty of a rose, yet often vile as her thorns

7 - Did she tell you what she took points off for? If she gives great feedback, you'll know what...

Writing Feedbacktrevor5249 - Mar 18, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 19, 2010
Private car ownership has grown dramatically in recent years.

7 - There are two small points : (1) two "there be " sentence patterns It is no doubt...

Writing Feedbacksaruul2004 - Mar 2, 2010 / cathyliu - Mar 18, 2010
'Getting what is different' - TOEFL:People are never satisfied with what they have.

2 - Great intro paragraph! The first factor is the jealousy. The jealousy ... Jealousy also makes people to...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 16, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 17, 2010
TOEFL: Most of secondary schools include the art and music course in their annual program

4 - but it will be tedious to have them as a mandatory courses at secondary school. he or she...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 14, 2010 / mocixuan - Mar 17, 2010
GRE argument: sales prediction

2 - In sum, the author wants to make a prediction about the future sales whereas his deduction contains several facets...

Writing Feedbackmocixuan - Mar 16, 2010 / r43ew - Mar 17, 2010
insufficient respect towards old members of society

3 - thanks kevin i'll try my best to overcome my mistakes in future...

Writing Feedbackvikasp - Mar 15, 2010 / vikasp - Mar 16, 2010
Report Help - Reflection on choice of education.

2 - I think the answer is to take it one sentence at a time. You know what it is...

Writing Feedbackspecwarop - Mar 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
living in one place or always moving for a good job ,house,or even climate.

3 - This is very thoughtful, but you will need to practice English a lot. It's hard to learn, but you...

Writing Feedbackmuxuan - Mar 14, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 15, 2010
Words effect (Cause and Effect essay - Power of words)

5 - Thanks Kevin and djanat.....

Writing Feedbackbilal ABUZENAH - Mar 12, 2010 / bilal ABUZENAH - Mar 15, 2010
Technical Article: How GNU/Linux differs from Unix

4 - Thanks a lot trevor5249 and EF_Kevin....

Writing Feedbackvinaytp - Mar 12, 2010 / vinaytp - Mar 15, 2010
American Government "Paper" Concerning the Constitution...

3 - During the drafting of the United States Constitution, the legislating delegates were faced with solving several dilemmas, including... In...

Writing FeedbackMarkTwain90Angl - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 14, 2010
"It is the artist, not the critic," GRE ISSUE144

4 - We human beings always feel our oats when talking about arts. --- What does "feel our oats" mean? I...

Writing Feedbackflydreams - Mar 12, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2010
TOEFL:reading fiction or watching movies

2 - Reading fiction is more advantageous than watching movies. First of all, reading fiction such as novels or short stories...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 13, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2010
comparing myself now to myself in the past

2 - your essay seem clear to understand. the bad thing is you have mentioned a lot of details i suggest...

Writing Feedbackangel 91 - Mar 11, 2010 / djanat - Mar 13, 2010
TOEFL: Schools should allot some hours a day to the physical exercises for their students.

2 - i think that you have little problem with grammar i'm pointing out some of your mistakes hope it will...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 12, 2010 / vikasp - Mar 12, 2010
TOEFL:a university plans to devlop a new research centre in your country.

2 - Most of the universities in the world seek to develop some research in some various countries. These research...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 11, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 12, 2010
IELTS Writing: opinions on children's part-time job

5 - Thanks for your help,Kevin~...

Writing Feedbackzebraessay - Mar 10, 2010 / zebraessay - Mar 12, 2010
What difficulties will face your country in the next ten years?

4 - Thank you Kevin, Your comments everytime help me much indeed, I really appreciate your responsiveness....

Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Mar 10, 2010 / plotophyte - Mar 12, 2010
Hunger - it's difficult to fully grasp the plight of it; Causes, Concerns and Symptoms

3 - Thanks!!...

Writing Feedbacksperkie - Feb 28, 2010 / sperkie - Mar 12, 2010
"people wanting to be important" - Definition essay: Pride

4 - Although it's a little bit late now, but thanks to both of you for your help :)...

Writing Feedbackmaryam_mah - Mar 10, 2010 / maryam_mah - Mar 11, 2010
SAT prep essay about materialism

3 - While countries like America and England enjoy ... Because of low production costs, and because of American and...

Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
TOEFL:Sport may be dangerous if we will become possessed by it too much.

3 - You didn't capitalize the first letter of the essay. Whatever the reasons for the sport practiced by young...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
Photographs/ Reminisce about the past ; Classification Essay

6 - Sounds like a tough class, but it will make you a good writer! I think you should google dianna...

Writing FeedbackGYG17 - Feb 24, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
History & Literature Vs Science & Mathematics; Every subject is important

2 - Taylor, that's really nice of you to spend so much time with it. The argument over... Some people may...

Writing Feedbacketaewoo - Mar 10, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
Sharuk Khan! He is my favorite hero.

6 - Sorry!! I can't give an accurate grade, because I don't know how these are scored. But if it's...

Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 11, 2010
GRE issue 153 skepticism in studying

5 - Ha ha, it's in the lower right corner of every post, and you can click on member names...

Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 8, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
TOEFL:A person' childhood years are the most important years of a person's life

3 - Great job, Sabuhi, thanks!!! I think this correction is great, but it might be a misundersanding of...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 9, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 10, 2010
should or should not schools create single sex education

3 - yea for a single sex school i forgot to type not and so as the would not benefit part...

Writing FeedbackSpitFires - Mar 8, 2010 / SpitFires - Mar 10, 2010
IELTS Essay -250words - Technology Progression has a negative impact on us?

2 - You write almost perfectly. I want to tell you, though that your first paragraph seems incomplete. It should have...

Writing Feedbackvictorp_sv - Mar 7, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
GRE issue 48 History is like a puzzle

4 - Yeah, your sentences seem complex, like sentences used in formal writing. I notice that you are good at varying...

Writing Feedbackclaire echo - Mar 6, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 9, 2010
SAT practice essay about the possibility of knowing oneself

3 - Thank you for your time! Your critique was extremely helpful....

Writing Feedbackjordansearches - Mar 9, 2010 / jordansearches - Mar 9, 2010
TOEFL topic: wheter or not to build a school in your hometown

6 - i didn't check well for the errors but i do like your essay me too i will take the...

Writing Feedbackpeter007 - Feb 24, 2010 / djanat - Mar 9, 2010
Life in symmetry - Essay.

2 - You have a verb tense problem at the beginning. You can do this: Today, I spent almost two hours...

Writing FeedbackWanderer_x - Mar 5, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 6, 2010
Email and text messaging threats written language

5 - thank you so much.......

Writing Feedbackmalek1406 - Mar 3, 2010 / malek1406 - Mar 6, 2010
University education is mandatory to get a good career. Discuss opinion. IELTS

4 - Thank you all for your thoughtful observation....

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 4, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 5, 2010
the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activty.

2 - People believe that the earth is being harmed by human activity. According to me me "Earth is better place...

Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 4, 2010 / Ariel - Mar 5, 2010
Toefl:Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking)

3 - Thanks Azamat! Please check out the contributor page! My preference is based on several reasons. --- this is...

Writing Feedbackdjanat - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
"great feeling of cooking" - Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.

3 - That's what we're here for! Sometimes maybe you just want to correct a few of the mistakes, and...

Writing Feedbacksaruul2004 - Mar 4, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
gre issue7 video camera provides an accurate and convincing record.

NEW - TOPIC: ISSUE7 - "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has...

Writing Feedbackflora - Mar 5, 2010 / — -
Leave the land in its natural condition? 'harmony with modern cities'

4 - Nowadays, people tend to concentrate more on economic growth and leave the environmental problems behind by constructing more buildings...

Writing Feedbackbinhdt101 - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
Proof/edit my cause & effect paragraph about unemployment- collegeEnglish

3 - Some of the common causes of unemployment are due to getting fired, getting laid off, the market economy,...

Writing Feedbackxoqtpie609xo - Mar 3, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 5, 2010
Illustrative Essay, The Dairy Farmers Life

3 - Thanks Kevin! You're always a big help!...

Writing Feedbackmsdenna - Mar 3, 2010 / msdenna - Mar 5, 2010
5. mixed --21st century=opportunity,you agree/disagree, changes you hope--

3 - Thanks, Soccer16, I'll pick up where you left off!! However, at in the mean time, there will...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
Commitment,Intellectual ability & Enthusiasm; Recommendation by academic advisor

8 - What a great idea! Yes, that happens to be my weakness, too. I am good at writing but...

Writing FeedbackHanna - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
Compulsive buying disorder (CBD): Conceptualization and classification

6 - Thanks. And yes I did use italics for the journal names...

Writing FeedbackMcGregor10 - Feb 21, 2010 / McGregor10 - Mar 4, 2010
Explain why you like (or do not like) to work in a team.

5 - i have some corrections i hope that help you - never begin a sentence by because/ the sentence must...

Writing FeedbackN2N - Mar 1, 2010 / djanat - Mar 4, 2010
"Make all you can, save all you can, give all you can" it's better to save money

4 - Otherwise is one word. Also, this is a run on sentence: For basic needs, we should have money; otherwise...

Writing Feedbackmegha - Mar 2, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 4, 2010
Essay on describing MY REGULAR WALK

7 - Thank you EF_Kevin, I got several inspirations on the expression about my writing. Anyway, I will try more times...

Writing Feedbackwinwin - Feb 20, 2010 / winwin - Mar 4, 2010
business and cultural contact + development - views and your opinion

NEW - 1 .Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contact between countries is a positive development, while others...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Mar 4, 2010 / — -
sedating music - There are many different types of music in the world today.

3 - hi, I'm not good. I will share my experience. "For conclusion" - everybody uses this word. If you choose...

Writing Feedbackplotophyte - Mar 2, 2010 / saruul2004 - Mar 4, 2010
desirable lifestyle: as a celebrity or common people. argument IELTS

5 - thank you all for your co-operation....

Writing Feedbackusalma2002 - Mar 1, 2010 / usalma2002 - Mar 2, 2010
Comparison and Contrast : Differences between two lives

2 - or Countless people better than... otherwise, different compared with it used to be. ===you...

Writing Feedbackpurplespongy22 - Mar 2, 2010 / cathyliu - Mar 2, 2010
Do you like to eat at home or hotel?

6 - thank you...

Writing Feedbackmegha - Feb 23, 2010 / megha - Mar 2, 2010
essay about studying abroad in spain

2 - I enjoyed reading your essay, it was very well thought out and interesting. Here are a few small mistakes...

Writing Feedbackdefnite - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Susan - Mar 1, 2010
Informational and persuasive essay on travel

3 - Thank you very much! I truly appreciate your insight. As times passes and my writing skills improve I hope...

Writing FeedbackJ Carpenter - Feb 27, 2010 / J Carpenter - Mar 1, 2010
the town of Garlsdon: Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1

2 - Capitalize the first word: The central part is the town centre and surrounding it is the housing district with...

Writing Feedbackcathyliu - Feb 28, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Mar 1, 2010
"That birthday card" - Besides the Point? A Re-thread

2 - Ah, well... I was an idiot when I was college age, so I am happy to retain the...

Writing FeedbackChenalaska - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010
Maps, roads - IELTS cambridge 5 writting task1 check out the grammar

5 - Thanks everyone! You are all making this forum a great place by helping each other so much. In...

Writing Feedbackmerchant - Feb 27, 2010 / EF_Kevin - Feb 28, 2010

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