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TOEFL essay: Apartment Vs dormitories at university.

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help with essay for aboard

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Members of a group can learn from each other, and it will help compensate one's weaknesses.

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"the Tenth Man" - Simple Essay

2 - Good questions! Are you using APA or MLA? If it is MLA, you don't need to use commas... Just...

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Polar bear essay - I could really use on what i've written so far

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Personal Response -The Wars

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the crucible-how is John Proctor presented (paragraph about him&elizabeth)

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A four-paragraph essay about The True Meaning of Courage

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Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss

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Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"

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"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

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IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

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Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism

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Telling the truth is not a best option always

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Cumulative class essay about supervisor

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'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built

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Biology Creative Essay

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help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen

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ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?

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'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life

2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...

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Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

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Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

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What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange

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Realism Essay - the readers choice

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Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:

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Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty

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The Freedom to Choose Death

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Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me

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Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level

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Persuasive Essay Abu Graib Prison Camp-Need Help

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research essay on novel "monkey beach"

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'Gillian and Mum' - Creative Writing - help needs to be proof read

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Writing is the basis for all education and is too often overshadowed in schools today

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People have different job expectations for jobs - essay help

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Studying at traditional schools or via computer or TV

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Nurture has only limited impact on early human development compared to Nature

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Literature response- writing like a child, need reviews

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Essay about "Better communication types"

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(prepare for future job/increase knowledge) Why people attend college or university?

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How the internet has improved your academic experience.

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I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion

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Children should grow in big cities

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Travel is in a group led by a tour guide may be expensive

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Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not

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Invisible Children (sociology essay)

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Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help

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Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?

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Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article

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Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace

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Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure.

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Changing My Lifestyle - check my expressions and grammar in this essay

2 - This seems a bit disorganized. Try grouping your thoughts together. For instance, when you talk about the food you...

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Parents are the best teachers in terms of commitment and emotional support

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Let's make the world a better one! ;essay on compassion

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Research paper review :online gambling should be illegal

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Public smoking bans---Persuasive essay

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Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure."

2 - As the prompt for this essay was not included, I have made some general comments. First, my main...

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The expansion of higher education from 1970~2000; leadership of the Presidents

2 - Good afternoon. "With Louise's instruction, I analyzed the expansion of higher education in from 1970~2000, and discussed leadership...

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Personal Response (Ten Things the Chinese Do Much Better Than We Do)

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"women are solely responsible for bringing children up"; I completely disagree

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