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NYU Sups. Why Business, Jackie CHEN!, and summer.

4 - Hi, I think they are all great. But I think education is neccessary. I think you should change...

Undergraduateqomoco - Dec 31, 2009tsungyuwu - Jan 1, 2010
Rice Perspective Essay - elderly tennis stars.

6 - Wow... and I'm suppose to be competing with you to get into Rice......

UndergraduateKatsch - Dec 18, 2009belinda_lang - Jan 1, 2010
Innuendo in "Ode to Billy Joe". Check my grammar!

3 - garfunkel129 Garfunkel129, Thank you so much for your comments. I will definitely look into these changes....

Writing Feedbackkayyao - Dec 30, 2009kayyao - Jan 1, 2010
"don't set off a fire extinguisher" - What would you tell your Future Roommate?

4 - ok, ur original point makes you seem adventurous and troublesome, while your main body paragraph makes you seem shy...

UndergraduateZel - Jan 1, 2010obeyandre13 - Jan 1, 2010
Three characteristics best describe me, how can they contribute to the college

4 - your essay is great, 5 para really does the wonder here. and I like your ending, it sounds...

Undergraduatetsungyuwu - Dec 31, 2009qomoco - Jan 1, 2010
"Concept of a new idea, and its Execution " ; Why Choose Carnegie Mellon?

6 - Apart from the mentioned above, I think your essay is well off grammatically. I also really like your ideas....

UndergraduateDeusEx - Jan 1, 2010achen92 - Jan 1, 2010
Common Application Essay--I'm Writing a New Goal List

4 - Nice beginning. "By the time I wrote my fourth unsuccessful essay I told myself that before I would...

Undergraduatelexmonti - Dec 30, 2009kldini - Jan 1, 2010
"Animal lovers" - how your interests and related experiences influenced major

2 - It has been about 9 year's since the death... Spike taught me some of the greatest lessons in...

UndergraduateKatpicado2 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Susan - Jan 1, 2010
Life experiences and contributing vitality - another Bates supplement

3 - I'm impressed; it is difficult to list achievements like that in an essay and still do such a well-done...

Undergraduatedinochar - Jan 1, 2010laurliza - Jan 1, 2010
"Into the Light" -- Significant Risk Essay

7 - I have already submitted this essay. Thank you for your help....

UndergraduateFrydafly - Dec 28, 2009Frydafly - Jan 1, 2010
NYU Supplement - Poem, Summer, Famous New Yorker, and movie

3 - The first one is pretty good; short, precise, and to the point. =) The second one: "The Color...

Undergraduatetwizzlestraw - Jan 1, 2010kldini - Jan 1, 2010
Stanford essay: I am...I like...

4 - What were your favorite events (e.g., performances, exhibits, sporting events, etc.) this past year? This is the exact question....

Undergraduatekldini - Dec 28, 2009kldini - Jan 1, 2010
NYU Supplement - Spending a day with Michelangelo of the ninja turtles!

11 - Oh yeah, I didn't notice that. Thanks!...

Undergraduatehelpinghand - Jan 1, 2010helpinghand - Jan 1, 2010
UPenn page 217 of my autobiography: Strength of Stature

8 - AWE this is good! I really like it. The only thing is - it sounds more like a personal...

UndergraduateMjtorain - Jan 1, 2010twizzlestraw - Jan 1, 2010
"a self-proclaimed mutt." - Stanford Roommate Essay

3 - I was born ofto an Asian mother I was raised in various countries of Europe for more than...

UndergraduateCultureChic - Jan 1, 2010dinochar - Jan 1, 2010
"The Path Begins at Pitzer" Personal Statement to Pitzer College

7 - Revision: "I want to be a doctor." Such a general, common statement must sound simple enough, right? Well...

UndergraduateScatterBrain - Dec 31, 2009ScatterBrain - Jan 1, 2010
Stanford essay: Don Quixote... HELP

2 - was fourteen years old when I first read "The Ingenious Hidalgo Don Quixote de la Mancha" by Miguel de...

Undergraduatekldini - Jan 1, 2010tsungyuwu - Jan 1, 2010
Brown-Best advice: "Be sexy, confident"

6 - This is a sexy essay. I am not sure that that can actually be said, but I really enjoyed...

Undergraduatewhitepolarbear - Jan 1, 2010lauren1212 - Jan 1, 2010
"apply it to society" - Stanford Essay Questions

11 - I go with the second one. Better in all aspects. GOOD LUCK! Can you check mines please??...

Undergraduatehope_21 - Dec 29, 2009kldini - Jan 1, 2010
UVa Supplement on Challenging Piece of Work- Need Critique Desperately!

2 - this is really great! i enjoyed reading it. you do an excellent job of describing why the film...

Undergraduatems_jahangiri - Jan 1, 2010shreeek - Jan 1, 2010
"help guide me to where I can be" - why is stanford a great place for me?

7 - I think that would still be praising it for its prestigious education. You can try cutting it out and...

Undergraduatecherrilyn - Jan 1, 2010jamie2010 - Jan 1, 2010
*NYU Supplements- My Summer, Day with Celeb, Limerick, 2050 Movie, Why Pre-Med*

5 - I added the puncutation within the poem. The sentence, however, was limited in how much I could change it...

Undergraduatenadine83 - Dec 27, 2009nadine83 - Jan 1, 2010
Democracy Camp - Stanford Intellectual Vitality essay

3 - apart from the errors which autogunny has corrected, i think your essay is really good....

Undergraduatevincentcanlas - Jan 1, 2010ginny2345 - Jan 1, 2010
CommonApp Essay - Putting Back What I've Been Given

9 - hey man, it helps to read and criticize other people's essays and ask them to read yours. Works for...

Undergraduatejyu104 - Dec 31, 2009ScatterBrain - Jan 1, 2010
Rice supplement--perspective

7 - thansk a lot roma91! that helps a lot. I've been trying to think of a certain moment in my...

Undergraduateebby2010 - Dec 30, 2009ebby2010 - Jan 1, 2010
What makes Stanford a good place-scientific research and strength in humanities

3 - agh blah I think my essay needs more... But the word limit is kind of restrictive. And yea...

Undergraduatewhitepolarbear - Jan 1, 2010whitepolarbear - Jan 1, 2010
CommonApp Activities Essay - Humanitarian Group

5 - well it might help to talk about why this issue was so important to you. Why would you care...

Undergraduatejyu104 - Jan 1, 2010whitepolarbear - Jan 1, 2010
"Every war has an end" - Brown inspiration and influence essay

2 - In any United States history class, students learn about the 1960s, and how protest... to express their anti-war...

UndergraduateJo11 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Susan - Jan 1, 2010
Colby Supplemental Essay - "The ultimate measure of man"

4 - It means you should explain the quote with your experience as an example, or explain your experience using the...

Undergraduate0512MB - Dec 27, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 1, 2010
why vassar essay - "My canvas"

16 - thanks for your opinions. I just submitted this :)...

Undergraduatepoisonivy - Dec 29, 2009poisonivy - Jan 1, 2010
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