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After my mom's passing just two months after I started my academic coursework, I found myself in a proverbial "Twilight Zone."

My dad, in all of his stoicism and rigidity, emailed to tell me he was sick with pancreatic cancer.

I considered quitting academia so I could be with my dad in what I knew would most likely be his final days.

If someone asked me five years ago what I was going to do when I graduated, I would have simply stated, "work at a resort."

I was a few months shy of earning a BS in Business Administration with a concentration in Resort Tourism Management.

My Vision "Each pessimistic finds a problem in each opportunity and each optimistic finds an opportunity..

In conclusion I must say that I would regard my being admitted to the graduate program not only as a great honor but more as a high responsibility and obligation of hard work.

Specific grants and scholarships are available for Native American students who wish to attend college. Many colleges and universities across the country also offer free tuition and campus housing for Native American students.

, it also brings experts a great many new issues.

To a great extent, I agree that scientists fail to find all the proper approaches.

The main reason why experts cannot solve all the problems lies with the simple fact that the continuous technological improvements lead to the consistent emergence of new issues.

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Some people claim that livinglive conversation is the best way to communicate to people.

Personally, I think that there's no equivalent to face-to-face interaction

First of all, talking to a person in the reality you are able to perceive non-verbal information

My interest in Marketing start when I was at my high School, I insisted to work with my Grandfather in his Ice Cream Truck to earn money for my living standard ,

Many people believe that learning a foreign language also gives the best result because leaners' qualification is the most important factor, not the study conditions.

Old and youth exist in our society as a common appearance.

In some cultures, old people are more valued, but in other cultures, the youth are more valued.

What's under controversy is that whether old people or youth are more valued

some people think that imposing strict punishments for driving of offences can reduce road accidents. give your opinion.

Man learns from every single thing if it wishes to .

It is inevitable and undeniable that our environment has been seriously polluted in recent yearsdecades .

a simpler life

To start with, a simpler life can definitely help us a more environmentally living circumstance because of the less produced pollution and the less used resources.

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which leads to a better quality of life.

Take the film starsas for example, they can experience different types of life during acting which we may not able to try in our daily life.

It is an obvious phenomenon that every day huge number of people commit crimes over the world.

. For decreasing the risk of errors, British and Australian jurists waswere taken an offer not to review defendant's crimes in the past.

I sometimes wonder if there could be any rule in using "first of all\ firstly \ first".

Countries like USA and Australia are not saved from itthis situation

so children do not think it is necessary to get an education

With the development of modern transportation, man y people are likely to traveling during holidays.

the modern transportation technologies have remarkably reduce the costs oftourists travelling.

Therefore, in my country, it is possible to have a great vacation oversea without paying half an year of salary.

This race compels both parents of the modern families to work for fulfilling the needs of their children.

I believe that in order to fairly divide the burden and provide facilities to the children both parents must work.

The people who think that only one parent should be responsible for earning money to support the family give reason of emotional support from parents.

hey believe that children developinggrowing up in these families share a strong bond with the family members.

... the research programs that aim at developing and improving the technology ...

... programs aim at improving ...

whether or not money spendsshould be spent on space ...

ypically, each project lastedcontinue for many years ...

Several underdeveloped countries with ...

Standard of living is not the same in different parts of the world.

in other undeveloped countries human beings are trying to survive for their lives.

On the one hand, some people think that drug companies are not obliged to help anyone. They think that these companies may lose money.

I am writing this letter to invite you come to visit my new house.

My cousin is getting marrymarried this sunday and his family will move into my old house to start their marriage-life. Therefore, I have to move out.

I'm very happy with your help. I come from Viet Nam, where are you from? ^.^

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People needn't work hard 8eight hours a day

. However, others object that college years bring to individuals the experiences and worth remembered memorymemories

Subjects are required in the curriculum give us chances to get useful skills, also improve higher ability to add to our real life situations.

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thereTherewereare so many proverbstraditions and values which still we people are following from our descendants , but one fine day somebody try to break them the society get hurtedhurt or thet thrown stone towards that person but as time passes people feel comfort with this fact but sometime it always quenh for the existance in real world, the author said that truth are outrageous at beginning and uncomfortable and it affects on our beliefs,I am completely agree with this.

,I am completely agree with this.

Families do not tend to show interest in their children's education. As a result they start showing less interest in their studies and eventually stop it at a certain age.

Second of all,

I didn't be missing at home because I was doing so many new and exciting things.

and more than that it not only urges us to overcome our difficulties but alsotrain ourselves more.

. I was then really fascinated by the complexities of its different structures and their workings.

This interest has evolved into a determination to study about computers deeply and to do some valuable research in the field.

. I have nurtured a strong passion to become an engineer and engage in research

Friend isa most important companion in your life.

All friends have different characteristics, some are very frank and some are very intelligent.

So in my point of view, reliable friend is most important to me.

Firstly, friend must be reliable. They must trust each other, from that we gain respect and love. Whether your friend is poor or rich and educated or uneducated. We should respect your friend and give lots of love. Be companion your friend forever, whether they are in sorrow or enjoy life.

The system has operated as well as possible,

I also suggest some recommendations aimed at reaching better productivity.

These grooves lead plastic to moldsmold to sharpen their forms.

The progress of medical services is inevitable and necessary.

What's under controversy is that whether it should be run by the government or to profit-making companies.

From my point of view, running by the government maybe a better choice for the medical services.

What'sof the top priority is that government can give a better control of the medical services, like the medical price, quality and so on.

There is no doubt that education and the learning processhashave changed since the appearance of computers in class rooms.

We should understand that computers are rather justa tools making the learning process more convinentconvenient and efficient than a replacement of teachers.

To begin with, teachers arethe ones who directly guide students toin the right waydirection .

Advertising is the most common today that companies use as a powerful tool to get customer's attention for their goods.

Therefore, impacts that affect on advertising is always the thing which companies concentrate on. And the high sales is one of important elements.

To begin with, teenagers account for an enormous proportion of buyers in the sales market. They are young and a mordern generations. Thus, thing that guides them to buy something is just their hobbies and interests, not about what advertisement is.

For me, the purpose of schooling is not to make one more intelligent, but to give them the capability to make an impact.

These steps are only the means by which I will truly fulfill my goals.

The medical field h as been a topic of interest for me for a long time.

We worked on sight for upwards of eight hours a day, building a home for a family of eight who was currently living in a trailer that was missing a portion of the back side.

School uniforms are a better option for students to wear to school opposed to casual clothes. I

I believe this because wearing casual clothes to school causes distractions, makes students feel unequal or bad about themselves and can cause financial difficulties.

Nowadays, entertainments affect all young people's behavior in a strong way.

Many children's behavior have been influenced by television programs, movies and video games; sometimes positively and other times negatively.

Education is in need of everyone and is prevalent in every part of world.

Some people think that governments should put a number ofspend more money in early childhood education , while others contendargue that they should invest in higher education.

First and foremost reason is that the most effect of result can be seen in teenager.

Nowadays very few people are unknown to the word "stress"

Earlier people tend to eat the food without worrying about the contents of the products.

.What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

Recently, a Hispanic organization that I am in, hosted an "open mic" event where students could listen to inspirational stories from professors and other students in regards to the struggles that Latinos face in order to pursue a high education.

Several of us told our parents' stories, and I at first hesitated to tell the story of my mother, but I did not want people to assume that, because I was American-born, I did not know the struggles of an immigrant.

With the great privilege of enrolling in NYU-Poly,I will have a wide variety of opportunities; choosing from top-ranked majors,taught and challenged by World-renowned Professors.

If you could spend one day in New York City with a famous inventor, who would you like it to be, where would you go, and why?
I would like to take Karl Benz to New York International Auto show. Karl Benz, German mechanical Engineer, who designed and built the world's first practical automobile powered by an internal-combustion engine. I would like him to see that his great invention, after hundreds of years has been extraordinarily developed and improved to suit today's life with better performance, stability, design, and luxury by talented engineers and genius inventors who followed his lead to make life better.