ekalamarsyari11
Aug 18, 2016
Writing Feedback / It's debated whether an individual should always tell the truth at any time [4]
hallo Lansium
I find there is defects
you should put a singular noun or change is into are
... there is a defect ... or ... there are defects
a truth widely acknowledged
i think it should be it is widely an acknowledged truth
it should be better to put an adverb before or after noun phrase but do not put it in the middle of them
when engaging in social activities is harmful to relationshipbetween people
Only by this way can we be welcomed and
.... we can guarantee the security of our health and wealth.
hallo Lansium
I find there is defects
you should put a singular noun or change is into are
... there is a defect ... or ... there are defects
a truth widely acknowledged
i think it should be it is widely an acknowledged truth
it should be better to put an adverb before or after noun phrase but do not put it in the middle of them
when engaging in social activities is harmful to relationship
Only by this way can we be welcomed and
.... we can guarantee the security of our health and wealth.