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4 - War countries does not mean anything, perhaps using war torn countries would be better. Instead of providing more...

Writing Feedbackjenny0601 - May 29, 2022Matt1313 - Jun 2, 2022
E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program

2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...

Lettersjsadu - May 29, 2022Holt - May 29, 2022
Essay About Public Health And Increase In Sporting Facilities

2 - The first paragraph shows that the writer is unfamiliar with English word meaning. His misunderstanding of an arena representation...

Writing FeedbackAbby210 - May 28, 2022Holt - May 28, 2022
An achievement related to my future - the internship role at Amazon as a Security Engineering Intern

2 - You totally missed the point. The idea was to expound on the reasons why you consider your internship at...

ScholarshipSubi - May 28, 2022Holt - May 28, 2022
Describe three things others do not know about you

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! This is an application essay. The first point was mainly about hobby of...

Graduatefinik - May 28, 2022finik - May 28, 2022
Ielts task 1: The changes of incident number happened in three areas of crime in Newport city center

2 - An "incident" is too general a reference that does not accurately identify the basis of the analysis. The please...

Writing Feedbackmt30 - May 27, 2022Holt - May 27, 2022
Overpopulation in urban areas leads to a deficit of food, water, space for living and contamination

3 - Linking words are highly advised to be used in your essay since the coherence between your statement was not...

Writing FeedbackNhi Huynh - May 27, 2022aanh1009 - May 29, 2022
IELTS Task 1 : the diagram shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

2 - There are 9 steps indicated. There is only 1 major step involved. There is an error in the trending...

Writing Feedbackbhanushali - May 26, 2022Holt - May 27, 2022
Allowing youngsters to have their own decisions in daily life matters - ielts academic

2 - There can be no aspect of the paraphrasing that is used in a cut and paste manner. The writer...

Writing FeedbackPeter2608 - May 26, 2022Holt - May 27, 2022
With the enhancement of new technologies, there are a variety of choices available

2 - The writer should not have focused on technology as the basis of his topic restatement. This is because the...

Writing Feedbackleothebest - May 26, 2022Holt - May 26, 2022
task 1 general training Write an e-mail to the bookshop

2 - The letter cannot make a recommendation for a book speaker without indicating a theme for the event. Since the...

Writing Feedbackdohavy - May 26, 2022Holt - May 26, 2022
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE IN ACCOUNTING - admission at Jiangsu University

2 - The statement is quite long and chatty. It provides more generalizations rather than specifics. The reviewer will be most...

GraduateEben45 - May 25, 2022Holt - May 26, 2022
ielts task 1 : the diagram below shows the manufracturing process for making sugar from sugar cane

2 - The first paragraph sentence contains a redundant process reference. It also uses a conjunction that does not suit the...

Writing Feedbackbhanushali - May 25, 2022Holt - May 25, 2022
ielts writing task 1 pie charts showing export between The US and Vietnam

2 - The writer inappropriately identifies the comparison images. The inaccuracy lies in the number of images stated and its representative...

Writing Feedbackbhanushali - May 25, 2022Holt - May 25, 2022
Computer science - Reasons for choosing KAIST

2 - Fold in the reasons why your learning interests can be met only by KAIST. Discuss how the educational system...

Scholarshipzephyrantes - May 25, 2022Holt - May 25, 2022
WRITING TASK 2 IELTS: What can be done to prevent people from using their cars?

2 - This is just a simple opinion discussion that should be dealt with quickly but comprehensively.Think of it in terms...

Writing FeedbackTharug - May 25, 2022Holt - May 25, 2022
The rising rate of juvenile crimes has become an alarming practice for the public; TASK 2 IELTS

3 - Conclusion should include, thesis and main points from both the body paragraphs. it should also include your opinion at...

Writing FeedbackAnn0104 - May 24, 2022bhanushali - May 27, 2022
Freedom: The Biggest Lie Ever Told To Women/ Non-traditional Student College Personal Essay

3 - Hello! Thanks for the feedback. I think you misunderstood or maybe I was unsuccessful in conveying the...

Undergraduatek02o01m19a99l - May 24, 2022k02o01m19a99l - May 24, 2022
There is a school of thought believe that the entry of museums should be free for everyone

2 - The writer has over written this opinion paper. It may not be possible to complete an almost 400 word...

Writing FeedbackJenny3110 - May 24, 2022Holt - May 24, 2022
Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.

2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...

LettersLanita - May 23, 2022Holt - May 23, 2022
Statement of Purpose - Masters in Renewable energy

2 - The writer has provided a motivational letter rather than a statement of purpose. These 2 are often interchanged by...

Graduateeas333 - May 21, 2022Holt - May 21, 2022
Science Exhibition: the life changer

3 - @Holt Thanks for reviewing my essay.I am willing to apply for US top schools next november.And i am willing...

UndergraduateDibakar0207 - May 21, 2022Dibakar0207 - May 22, 2022
IELTS task 1: The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation.

2 - It will do the writer well to remember that this is an interpretative essay based on provided information from...

Writing Feedbackmoon21 - May 21, 2022Holt - May 21, 2022
The table and bar chart show how journey times in a city centre changed after improvement

7 - I'm also a student trying to get better at writing. I don't know as much as the professional writers...

Writing FeedbackHuongNg - May 21, 2022defy - Jun 8, 2022
IELTS Task 2 - Should governments control newly constructed buildings?

2 - The prompt restatement was off to an illogical opening sentence. It showed a lack of proper sentence formation on...

Writing Feedbackintothevrains - May 20, 2022Holt - May 21, 2022
Does punishment is necessary for children?

3 - Although you have written that you will outline the appropriate penalty at the introduction, I hardly see it on...

Writing Feedbackchouchou - May 20, 2022Jenny3110 - May 27, 2022
Statement of purpose for Masters degree in Dental Technology

2 - The essay is difficult to understand for the most part because of the applicant's lack of control over English...

ScholarshipHassan bulus - May 20, 2022Holt - May 20, 2022
IELTS. The table below shows information about travelling to work in one US city.

3 - use thoughtly their commute=> commute is a verb but you need a noun here. The word "thoughtly" may be...

Writing FeedbackHuongNg - May 20, 2022moon21 - May 21, 2022
Write about a famous person you like. Who is this person? What is this person's job? Why do you like

2 - The writer did write about admiration and the reasons for it in the essay. While his basis for writing...

Writing Feedbacktrankhanhlinh - May 20, 2022Holt - May 20, 2022
Spending too much time in shopping centres could be detrimental for young adults

2 - Though this is an extent essay, it does not allow the writer to both agree anddisagree with the topic...

Writing FeedbackNhu Gia Vu - May 20, 2022Holt - May 20, 2022
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