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It's better for students to gain real experience than to spend their time in classroom. Agree or not

3 - First, I think you should be more cautious when using punctuation marks and upper-case letters in your essay to...

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EPOG Scholarship sustainability consultant motivation letter.

2 - You have chosen 2 areas of study here. A major and a minor, both related somehow to your...

LettersJulyffff - Jan 30, 2022Holt - Jan 31, 2022
Fashion School in NYC Essay - AMC (Advertising, Marketing Communications Major)

3 - @Holt Hey, I think we got off on the wrong foot! I know my writings not good, that...

Undergraduateleohespanha - Jan 29, 2022leohespanha - Jan 30, 2022
The essay is about the causes and solutions of food waste.

2 - Do not provide a direct opinion in the first sentence of the prompt paraphrase. There are only 3...

Writing Feedbackngoctram2684 - Jan 29, 2022Holt - Jan 30, 2022
It is believed that daredevil sports, such as skydiving or skiing, should be restricted

4 - @Holt Anyway, this is a re-edited version, is it better than the original one? It is believed that...

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Motivation letter for the erasmus mundus program in green networking and cloud computing

2 - The applicant lacks the required professional experience to be admitted into the EM program. The consortium will have to...

Lettersaminebdj - Jan 29, 2022Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Vietnamese society has changed significantly in the past decades

2 - I am not sure why you are focused on Vietnam for this discussion. The original prompt references a general...

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Essay about the lesson children can learn from TV and it may be good or not for them -

3 - First, in the introduction, you start with a sentence that is meaningless. You tried to add linking words as...

Writing Feedbackminhqqq - Jan 29, 2022Abby210 - Jan 29, 2022
Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

2 - So what? Every student has an ambition to pursue their studies in their field of work. There is...

LettersSanketnawale101 - Jan 28, 2022Holt - Jan 29, 2022
Food shortage is still prevalent, despite of using modern technologies in the agricultural industry

3 - You did a good job of paraphrasing the topic sentence, but your next two ones are faulty and would...

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Designing, assessing, economic policy - Letter of motivation for Erasmus Mundus EPOG+

4 - I'm not an expert in writing the motivation letters, statements of purpose, etc., but your paper looks good enough....

ScholarshipNhilist - Jan 28, 2022LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
Do you agree that imposing a heavy tax on sugary products can discourage potential consumers?

2 - Do not add information to the presentation. Doing so alters the original content presentation and reduces the accuracy...

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Law student - Erasmus mundus motivation letter

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your honest review. I narrowed my topic to a singular theme as you...

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My biggest Challenge yet ..... help me on how can I improve my memoir

2 - The writer keeps confusing the timeline of his memoir presentation. He cannot make up his mind as to whether...

Writing Feedbackhelpmewrite23 - Jan 27, 2022Holt - Jan 28, 2022
How can I write UCW personal statement prompt considering its missions and values

2 - It is important that you do not waste word count on useless opening sentences that merely repeat the...

ScholarshipFreDrick Mwepu - Jan 27, 2022Holt - Jan 28, 2022
Essay to apply at University College Dublin for MSc Course

3 - @Holt Hey. Thank you for your feedbacks. I needed more clarity to what you mentioned. Do you want...

Graduatesanghaisahil3 - Jan 27, 2022sanghaisahil3 - Jan 27, 2022
[IELTS Writing task 1] EU-born Science and Technology employees working in the US in 1999

5 - @hellogorkha thank you!...

Writing Feedbackcaesar23 - Jan 27, 2022caesar23 - Jan 30, 2022
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of six categories of average household expenditures

2 - How many charts? How would you clearly differentiate the representations of each chart? How are these titled in...

Writing FeedbackTiana - Jan 27, 2022Holt - Jan 27, 2022
Do you agree that traditional cultures, traditional habits could be replaced by advanced technology?

3 - First sentence should end with a full-stop at benefits for people. Full stop after the word assertion is required....

Writing FeedbackAbby210 - Jan 27, 2022hellogorkha - Jan 28, 2022
Practice and theory. Motivational letter for MBA in university of Padua (Italy)

2 - The quotations, regardless of whether these are original or taken from someone else, are not necessary in a motivational...

Lettersahmadshk8888 - Jan 26, 2022Holt - Jan 27, 2022
Living independently - Family I write it for IELTS

3 - I really like the way you took advantage of showing data that backup your argue, it feels more realistic...

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Farming interest - Describe the world you come from

3 - Thank You very much for your advice...

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Language acquistion from the early age.

2 - An opinion based on the author's point of view (disagreement) with the idea presented is not in question and...

Writing Feedbackphuonganh1752005 - Jan 26, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Write a motivational letter for MSC scholarship swedish University of Agricultural Sciences

3 - @Holt Hi Thanks so much I will do as advised...

LettersGlow92 - Jan 26, 2022Glow92 - Jan 26, 2022
World Wide Web infrastructure. PTDF STATEMENT OF PURPOSE ON CYBER SECURITY

2 - The applicant has failed to make a connection between his interest in cybersecurity and the Petroleum and Oil industry...

ScholarshipVictorehiks - Jan 25, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for Masters at Tampere University in Peace, mediation and conflict research

2 - The overall letter is not applicable as a motivational reference. The content is more of a conversational personal statement....

Lettersaayushmaniktalia - Jan 25, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
Reference letter for Master of Design program in Hungarian university

2 - The first paragraph must contain a clear reference to the position of the person making the reference. It must...

LettersAni0506 - Jan 25, 2022Holt - Jan 26, 2022
The Computer Engineering program - reasons why you decide to apply to this department..

2 - This is a highly unprofessional sentence structure. Remember that you are addressing an academic professional through this essay....

Undergraduatepavuk - Jan 24, 2022Holt - Jan 25, 2022
The graph provides information related to how many tourists visited a Carribean island

2 - Divide this long presentation into at least 2 sentences. By increasing the sentence count, the writer will provide...

Writing Feedbackahmadsalkaf - Jan 24, 2022Holt - Jan 25, 2022
The chart illustrates the proportion male and female tutors in six categories of educational setting

4 - I think that the you should talk about the general trend of male and female's proprotion in your overview...

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