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The profits of the top five mentioned mobile phone brands made through selling their products

2 - The brand names have not been outlined in the summary yet. No mention has been made at this...

Writing FeedbackGoldengoat - Aug 23, 2021Holt - Aug 24, 2021
Absence of word limit in essay prompts

2 - The rule of thumb for scholarship essays is to write no more than 500 words. How the applicant chooses...

Essayssalami - Aug 23, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
[W task 1]The pie graphs show greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 2002 and the forecast for 2030.

3 - You give clear structures. However, you should pay more attention to express you ideas transparently....

Writing Feedbackngoclinhhhh - Aug 23, 2021Goldengoat - Aug 25, 2021
Global Korea Scholarship 2022 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Communication major

3 - You've explain all the must included information, but your essay is still lack in the relationships between the paragraphs....

Undergraduateadeliatiara365 - Aug 23, 2021ayutian - Aug 25, 2021
I can't wait to challenge myself. PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP/GKS UNDERGRADUATE 2022

3 - Thank you so much for checking my essay! I'm going to fix my essay right now....

Scholarshipodereyn - Aug 23, 2021odereyn - Aug 24, 2021
LETTER to express my motivation to apply for the Engineering Technology Bachelor program

2 - The first paragraph is a waste of space. It is nothing but a run down off the prompt requirements...

LettersAbhishekvijay - Aug 23, 2021Holt - Aug 24, 2021
Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Effects?

2 - Rather than saying "some reasons" tell the reader what the reasons are. That will help create the thesis statement...

Writing FeedbackDuc Manh - Aug 23, 2021Holt - Aug 24, 2021
Some Countries Allow Old People To Work To Any Age That They Want.

2 - The writer is not responding to the discussion question in the opinion response sentence. A choice needs to be...

Writing Feedbackhanhhnah - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
The graph compares the consumption of six different energies in the USA from 1980 to 2030 prediction

2 - The student needs to review his indefinite article usage. "A" is used before consonant sounds while "an" is used...

Writing Feedbackthanhtra - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
Essay about opinion on donating a fixed sum from income to charity - IELTS writing 2

2 - Keep the sentence presentations simple. The writer is trying to unsuccessfully write advanced format and complicated word usage. The...

Writing FeedbackSuskie11 - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
I am applying for GKS Undergraduate 2022 and this is my Personal Statement (Electrical Engineering)

3 - @Holt Thank you for comment. I have one more question, Do you think the first paragraph is attractive...

Undergraduatemysp2001 - Aug 22, 2021mysp2001 - Aug 23, 2021
Statement of research interest - Applied to Master's Computer Science

2 - The essay needs to be refocused to provide clear responses to the prompts alone. Do not overdiscuss things by...

GraduatePraew_chprd - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
Any academic interests that excite you, and how you might use the Open Curriculum to pursue them

2 - Quirky is good. It made an interesting hook. The Betty Crocker reference is a bit overkill though. More attention...

Undergraduatemidnight_storm - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
Global Scientists and Engineers Program Application Essay pt.1

2 - The first paragraph fails to make a clear point. It needs to be better thought out and organized since...

Undergraduatede_doctor - Aug 22, 2021Holt - Aug 23, 2021
A ban on dangerous sports or freedom to do any sports or activity

3 - @Holt hello, i really appreciate your comments and one thing i want to explain is that all of the...

Writing Feedbackgintoki7 - Aug 21, 2021gintoki7 - Sep 5, 2021
Writing task 1: the line graph shows the number of enquiries received in one city in 2011

2 - Be aware of English word differences. A peach is a type of fruit. A peak is the summit of...

Writing Feedbackanhquynhnguyen22 - Aug 21, 2021Holt - Aug 22, 2021
An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves

3 - Your essay format is not correct => Task achievement problem...

Writing FeedbackCongHung - Aug 21, 2021thuthuy841999 - Aug 26, 2021
POTENTIAL NETWORKING - it opens up opportunities for international collaboration; CHEVENING ESSAY

2 - This presentation is more geared towards referrals rather than network building. While a referral is a simple networking method,...

Scholarshipieywa - Aug 21, 2021Holt - Aug 22, 2021
Strict controls should be applied to lessen the noise for better living environment.

4 - In my opinion, the essay is a great example for me to study for its diverse ideas. However, you...

Writing Feedbackthuong278qn - Aug 20, 2021Goldengoat - Aug 23, 2021
Writing task 2: Some people believe that technology has made man more social. Do you agree or not?

4 - In the first sentence, I think you should use either enhance or improve otherwise there will be a redundancy....

Writing FeedbackBill8 - Aug 20, 2021So Ri - Aug 29, 2021
The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 and 2008.

4 - of electricity supplied in four nations, namely, India, ... during five years, from 2003 to 2008. had...

Writing FeedbackChubii - Aug 20, 2021SaraOm - Aug 28, 2021
KGSP/GKS-U 2022 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Communication major; Motivations, family, experiences, etc.

5 - @hahaleesunwoo Try to make it shorter and remove hangul words because they clearly said that write it in Korean...

Undergraduatehahaleesunwoo - Aug 20, 2021shreyasrivastava - Aug 30, 2021
Statement of Purpose - what area of CS interests you particularly? Masters in Computer Science

2 - Half of this paper is a personal statement. The first half should be removed from this presentation as it...

Graduatesneha2312 - Aug 20, 2021Holt - Aug 21, 2021
Movie fans in different age group who went to the cinema once a month in the UK

2 - There is a redundant word presentation in the essay that affects the clarity and GRA considerations. The word "...

Writing FeedbackQuynhnhu123 - Aug 19, 2021Holt - Aug 20, 2021
Students' mandatory volunteering in their free time to serve the communities

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your comment. I will try to improve the mistake in another essay!...

Writing Feedbacklyvlyv - Aug 19, 2021lyvlyv - Aug 21, 2021
Some countries have introduced a law to limit working for employees. Why is the law introduced.

4 - Supporting sentences are not strong enough to clarify your main points...

Writing FeedbackJacksonHewitt - Aug 19, 2021thuthuy841999 - Aug 26, 2021
The chart show the ratio of male and female teachers in UK schools at different education levels

3 - @Holt I sent you my post data image. Thank you very much because file is too big, I will...

Writing FeedbackLiny - Aug 19, 2021Liny - Aug 20, 2021
Writing Task 1 - the number of Vietnamese students studying abroad in three countries

3 - Hi, I just want to give some feedback on your essay. 1. In IELTS writing task 1, you should...

Writing FeedbackKhanh Trang - Aug 19, 2021huyjunnie - Aug 20, 2021
Traditional subjects or a more modern approach to prepare students for today's world challenges

3 - @Holt I'm really grateful to you for your advice, I'll do my best to improve my above-mentioned faults....

Writing FeedbackBacher - Aug 19, 2021Bacher - Aug 21, 2021
Developing countries need financial help or practical aid and advice

5 - You should take care of using proper words and sentence structures....

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