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IN MOST COUNNTRIES PLANT AND ANIMALS ARE DECLINING ,TELL REASON AND SOLUTIONS

3 - And in most countries where birth control is freely available, birth rates tend to be below the level needed...

Writing Feedbackniraj - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 4, 2009
Piano; practicing a classical piece satisfies me, I can feel the tangible results of my improvement

9 - He must have sat down and played improvisational music several times. Each of these times, he played a...

UndergraduatePikafu - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 8, 2009
LOOKING OUT THE WINDOW - "The Mission"; Apa format

4 - Yes, many of your sources seem to come from the JPL website, but as you have the author names...

Undergraduateskyrider2812 - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 4, 2009
Prompt for "Examsmanship and the Liberal Arts" by Perry

9 - what I'm getting from this quote is the question: how does college help to broaden a student's view of...

EssaysAristae - Sep 4, 2009Aristae - Sep 7, 2009
"America's Best Colleges" guide - UCF Admissions Essay Help?

16 - What major? Why don't you say? This essay could have been written by any applicant. You need it...

Undergraduateshannyn92 - Sep 4, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 4, 2009
As a young man I'd choose to purchase a business instead of a house; TOEFL

4 - Your prose is clearly that of a non-native speaker, but is not "strange" in the way that you worry...

Writing Feedbackmrarching - Sep 4, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 5, 2009
Analytical essay on A Rose for Miss Emily

4 - Why not start with a point form outline in which you list the symbols and Gothic elements you wish...

Book Reportstholloway - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 4, 2009
GRE argument--Prescribe medication on men and women

3 - Ah. I see that the author's account has been suspend, and so will withhold comment....

Writing Feedbackyx200986 - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 4, 2009
What appeals the most to you about our school - My admission essay

8 - Thank you so much for your feedback EF_Sean. I'll try do it that way....

Undergraduatexcapedadinosaur - Sep 4, 2009xcapedadinosaur - Sep 7, 2009
Jamaican in Japan (First Draft)

5 - Revised As I approached the one year mark as a participant of the Japan Exchange and Teaching (JET)...

GraduateNikkiB - Sep 4, 2009NikkiB - Oct 8, 2009
Applying to college after a 10 year absence; Non-traditional Student

5 - Firstly, this essay as a whole is really inspiring, and like Simone and Sean said, it's strong and pointed....

UndergraduateSFLady77 - Sep 4, 2009catalyst0435 - Sep 4, 2009
Critique my essay; American Sports : Sportsmanship or to win at any cost

12 - Computer programs are notoriously difficult to use as a grammar learning tool, unless you are dealing with ESL software...

Writing Feedbackxubis - Sep 4, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 17, 2009
quantum mechanics - Why does Brown interest me?

14 - the essay is well written, but it doesn't really answer the prompt. The purpose of these kind of prompts...

Undergraduateyoungjoony - Sep 3, 2009ebby2010 - Oct 19, 2009
Experience relating to religious diversity as a response to an admission prompt?

6 - I see......

Undergraduatehorn15 - Sep 3, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 3, 2009
I hope to see hospitality industry in my motherland China thriving prosperously and being perfect

3 - Yea your writing style fades off from the very start actually. I attribute that mainly to your grammar. You...

Undergraduatecissywdi - Sep 3, 2009Liebe - Sep 3, 2009
Toefl Question: Movies and books in a modern life

10 - So, this experience will maybe motivate you to read more often? The main general principle that you...

Writing Feedbackessay0405 - Sep 3, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 4, 2009
Fascinated by the business world (Ryerson essay)

5 - Is there a prompt for this essay? I ask because your essay sounds like an autobiography of all...

Undergraduatesohelmatrix - Sep 2, 2009catalyst0435 - Sep 4, 2009
Exhibit Me --> Being a unique individual, I uphold specific beliefs

5 - ^Hearts are self-explainatory. ^I do not like this summarizing statement. ^Your paragraph funtions without...

UndergraduateMegumi - Sep 3, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 3, 2009
describe the world you come from (UC personal statement)

2 - For me, this essay doesn't work so well. Why? Too much telling and not enough showing, I think. Instead...

Undergraduateayrustayy - Sep 3, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 3, 2009
Crippling an Insect (My Common App Essay)

9 - Thanks, I realize the last paragraph could be extraneous, and probably is given the negative response to it, so...

Undergraduatecatalyst0435 - Sep 3, 2009catalyst0435 - Sep 4, 2009
"My passion for hockey" ; extracurricular activity

5 - It's good that it's a narrative. But, I'd get rid of the "woulds" and also use an action...

Undergraduatefat_b - Sep 2, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 3, 2009
The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one.

2 - "The technology's development brings about many changes in our society, today. One of these changes is the way people...

Writing Feedbackstranger1130 - Sep 2, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 2, 2009
'my close friend Jacob' - UF Essay, focused enough? Looking for opinion on it.

12 - PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS NOT THE PROMPT FOR THE UNIVERSITY OF FLORIDA ESSAY in 2009! 2009 essay question...

Undergraduatetrueathlete8 - Sep 2, 2009jankrav - Sep 7, 2009
My Four Year Old Role Model (Common App Essay)

3 - Not bad. The story is good, as is the lesson you learned from it. As others have mentioned, the...

UndergraduateBNP67 - Sep 2, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 2, 2009
"one week to compensate for 7 years of absence" - UF Topic

11 - I like how you incorporated your view on opportunities, and how they can be taken for granted. It can...

UndergraduateAlexP1992 - Sep 2, 2009Grad2010 - Oct 3, 2009
'Model United Nations' - MIT application essay.. Short response

14 - I see where the word "politics" would be vague if you're trying to convey your interest in MITMUNC. Maybe...

UndergraduateMayada - Sep 2, 2009Pikafu - Sep 6, 2009
What is the Difference between Literary Writings & Business Writings

10 - Look,first you have to see the enviroment of business writings where you can find the title for your particular...

Grammar, Usagebuboy1023 - Sep 2, 2009ayushman - May 20, 2014
UMichigan, diversity and how you can contribute; Spring Festival in China

5 - You picked a good experience to write about, and I think the essay is fundamentally solid. That lets...

Undergraduatecissywdi - Sep 2, 2009catalyst0435 - Sep 4, 2009
Essay about the happiest day of my life so far?

9 - That is a broad subject. Some rules are to be questioned, specially the ones that are there to...

Writing Feedbackdccb - Sep 2, 2009dccb - Sep 4, 2009
Do you think the educational benefits of test & exam outweigh any disadvantages?

4 - Sorry, no, we can't score the essay. But we can continue to offer suggestions and corrections for any other...

Writing Feedbackchaskie143 - Sep 2, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 5, 2009
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