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'Dancing is close to my heart' - MIT essay... how the world shaped your dreams essay

5 - This second one is better, I think, but I really like the second half of the dance essay. ...

Undergraduatepmadhini - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
CMC essay ("Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis")

14 - one slight problem. this essay does not sound interesting. you need more showing than telling. try to describe the...

UndergraduateZuhayr90 - Jan 2, 2009zowzow - Jan 14, 2009
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR CHINAMANO ELWIN TINASHE-

4 - Just more of the same sort of thing I mentioned before. So, "My plan is to engage in full...

Graduateetchinamano - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 5, 2009
Cornell CALS essay - "the significance of ingredients and nutrition"

3 - One of the activities of the trip was to differentiate between freshly squeezed fruit juice an d artificially flavored...

UndergraduateA346 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
writing technique advices for the essay " regular and election days"

8 - It is better than it was, certainly. You now sound more thoughtful, and have gone into more depth on...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 6, 2009
for IELST...." sports or physical course is importmant "essay

5 - Is that true? Wow, schools should not drop phys. ed... it is so important! I is even important for...

Writing Feedbackpamfan0810 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Uva favorite word - Uncertainty

3 - "Uncertainty" is a word that acts as a gargantuan, dark cloud whose only purpose is to obscure the sun,...

Undergraduatemad3na90 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies"

4 - Hi Thanks a lot for your corrections. This is my essay i really want to know whether i have...

Writing Feedbackcraver - Jan 2, 2009craver - Jan 6, 2009
Columbia Essay ("I am an artist.")

2 - This essay is written very well and I really can't find anything wrong with it. However, I would like...

Undergraduatejane6272 - Jan 2, 2009r991183878 - Jan 2, 2009
Common App Essay- ("I was an extremely snoopy child")

5 - I'm so sorry I could not comment in time!! It does look great, though, as the others said. I...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
"Yes, master." - Stanford Short Essay (intellectual vitality)

4 - I like watching people; don't run away from me now. I simply find people's expressions fascinating; (use a :)...

Undergraduateheartmilktea - Jan 2, 2009hopefull - Jan 2, 2009
is this topic "my world" worthy?

3 - Good advice from Sean! Also, break this up into 2 or 3 paragraphs for clarity. Most importantly, start and...

Undergraduatemjsuh90 - Jan 2, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
submission question (I my common app at 12:01)

9 - Submission Question!!!! - Important I submitted my application and supplement yesterday (12-31-10) but commonapp says it was submitted...

Undergraduatemdg921 - Jan 1, 2009Guest - Jan 1, 2011
Payment Question (it doesn't show up on the Common App site yet)

21 - yea, they said it takes a few days to show up even if you've already paid it. check it...

Student TalkRachovsky - Jan 1, 2009shreeek - Jan 4, 2010
Common App supplement (Sentence structure and grammar problems)

4 - "As Santana strums his guitar to the hip-hop beat, infusing it with Spanish sounds, I step up to the...

Undergraduater991183878 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
BU supplemental - ("differences between New York City and Boston")

2 - Is this an essay answering the question of "why BU" or is it actually meant to be a comparative...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Sean - Jan 2, 2009
Emory Supplement - ("I first heard of Emory through a friend")

4 - Imagine Emory University as a great rock band. There I am in the crowd; just one of the thousands...

Undergraduateyokang - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common App and Artist's Statement.

4 - In August 2008 I found myself venturing onto an old, near-decrepit ship docked in a harbor on the Hudson...

Undergraduateavelo - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Brown Supplement Essay Siddhartha

4 - Use italics for titles. Sidhartha is a great book!!!! However, when you refer to the person, do...

UndergraduateJoe112 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common Application Essay - My Father

2 - I think you do too much telling and not enough showing. Also be sure that this essay focuses on...

UndergraduateHansaml91 - Jan 1, 2009yellowwoman - Jan 2, 2009
"First Impressions are Everything"; NYU Short Answers- grammar errors?

5 - Your short answer about the song was cute! It is very personal and it makes the reader feel like...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 1, 2009jennc09 - Jan 3, 2009
Common App Essay ("The final decision was based on me.")

3 - thanks for the help... I actually submited that .. Thanks and Happy new year.....

Undergraduateakashnegi - Jan 1, 2009akashnegi - Jan 2, 2009
Last Minute Common App Essay - "my band"

2 - USe a comma: To say the least, I used to be very shy and lacked the self-confidence required...

UndergraduateJustin37 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
NYU Short Answer supplements - "a shopping trip with my father"

5 - Usually when you shorten essays they become better. It is a matter of filtering out the weak parts. On...

Undergraduatearghuman82 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
"room house in Chang Chun, China" my Virginia supplement answer.

5 - I'm Chinese too. I think you are talking about cherish ... 再强调一点...

Undergraduatecowluver - Jan 1, 2009charliesun - Jan 4, 2009
UPenn essay - The aspiration of attending the University of Pennsylvania

2 - I have told lots of people that I liked their user names, but I think you get the award...

UndergraduateLife is Cool - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Rice Supplement Why this school ("Bill Nye the Science Guy show")

4 - Yes, and take out all unnecessary words: In order to betterexplain why I am applying to the Wiess...

UndergraduateCzerwona - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
NYU Short answers ("a politically incorrect statement" and other answers)

3 - I agree, this is great stuff. However, for this first part (above) you give a mixed message. Is it...

UndergraduateHiroShima11 - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Bowdoin Short Essay

3 - We can improve this first sentence, too: For all students, college will be an unfamiliar environment that involves...

Undergraduateohreally - Jan 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 3, 2009
Common App Essay - "'God's peak'"

4 - Thanks for al the feedback :) the mountain was mount kinabalu in malaysia I also included a picture...

Undergraduateparadox - Jan 1, 2009paradox - Jan 4, 2009
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