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Essay about The Fountainhead by Ayn Rand

2 - Good afternoon. Ayn Rand was a philosopher, so try and look at her works from another (all) point(s)...

Essaysdorkee - Aug 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 20, 2008
Life of a death row inmate research, I have a thesis sentence

4 - I suggest you wait on the conclusion and the opening/thesis until after you've written the paper if possible. After...

Research Paperssheisabrat - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
UCF admissions essays, Why did you apply? what characteristics do you have?

3 - In college I think that qualities such as, caring, love, and genuine kindness could go a long way in...

Undergraduatezaz - Aug 19, 2008giuretig4 - Sep 17, 2008
Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science

2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...

Scholarshipdjellel - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
LOOSING THE BEST FRIEND- Life obstacle!

3 - thank you soooo very much! that helped me out tremendously!...

Undergraduatebeebee - Aug 19, 2008beebee - Aug 20, 2008
no other tools than face-to-face talk can replace human needs to meet and share joys and sorrows

4 - Both of those are fine; they are still used frequently today. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbackurgent - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 24, 2008
Outer space explore vs. Basic needs essay

2 - You make some really good points in this essay. If you can find some research supporting how much the...

Writing Feedbackngngmaiphuong - Aug 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
"changing experiance" UF admission essay

4 - You are welcome. I think that since this is a very personal essay you put a lot of emotion...

UndergraduateDiiyah - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
How to avoid in writing in the passive tone

2 - Good morning. In regards to the passive tone, the biggest "key" to remember is, "Don't tell your readers...

Grammar, Usagesylock232 - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
pen names in MLA works cited pages

2 - Good morning. In this case, you should use the pen name. When citing, you should use exactly what...

Grammar, Usagesarek - Aug 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 18, 2008
Need help for answering for questions in MA admission Essay

5 - I think you are in the right track. Have more emphasis on the details how the course would help...

Essaysboomerj - Aug 17, 2008dumi - Jun 7, 2013
Great Gatsby Essay for a private school

4 - Hi, What you write in your body paragraphs depends on what you establish in your thesis sentence. Writing...

Essaysrusty - Aug 16, 2008judas - Mar 25, 2014
'her husband, my father, has died' - UF - meaningful event

NEW - I would like some advice on my essay to the University of Florida the topic is: Describe a...

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essay on Juliets speech in Romeo and Juliet Modernized

2 - Make sure that everything in quotation marks is properly cited according to the specifics of your required citation style....

Writing Feedbacksylock232 - Aug 16, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
"Jennifer Lim" - College Application Essay

NEW - I was just starting fourth grade when I met Jennifer Lim. Then, I had just moved to the Philippines...

Undergraduateop2607 - Aug 16, 2008 -
Being in the middle of the spiral staircase. Essay on Education

5 - Sure :) Well, what about personal improvement? As one rises through the levels of education is it not...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Aug 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 16, 2008
'the barracades blocking' - FSU Admissions Virfes, Artes, Mores

2 - You've got a good start here, and some opportunities where you can expand upon how these values have impacted...

Undergraduateoliviasimon - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
'A dream come true' - Vires, Artes, Mores - FSU admissions essay

2 - I believe that it is. You explain how these values have impacted your life, and how you interpret them....

Undergraduatezaz - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
Identifying Line Numbers in Shakespearean Plays

2 - Good morning. Are there any explanations in the introduction or preface to the edition? Since each edition of...

Book ReportsBrendan - Aug 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 14, 2008
The unique way designers think; SOP - Design

NEW - What intrigues me is how long it takes us to appreciated the importance of design in our community and...

Graduatenandasc - Aug 12, 2008 -
'How could I have Epilepsy' - FSU admissions essay:

6 - I agree with you; the second one is more focused and thus more appropriate. I was fortunate enough...

Undergraduatecollege_girl - Aug 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 13, 2008
'The Youngest' - Question about main common app essay.

5 - Ok thanks any advice on the essay itself?...

Undergraduatewwr - Aug 12, 2008wwr - Aug 12, 2008
ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH, SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT? - Essay Revision

NEW - Please correct this essay for me. Thank you so much. ALWAYS TELLING THE TRUTH, SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT?...

Writing Feedbackppc - Aug 8, 2008 -
Some of my thoughts - an essay

8 - "some thoughts - an essay" This seems to be the crux of your problems. An essay is not usually...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Aug 12, 2008EF_Sean - Apr 6, 2009
Thesis - For Baby boomers

4 - Try looking at articles on Google Scholar, and use a word search for "baby boomers" and "behavior." be sure...

Essayssarahmk - Aug 12, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2008
"The Waste Land" as a Manifestation of Dream Content

4 - Sure thing! You know, it really depends on your citation style. MLA requires the complete citation each time...

Writing Feedbackelibats - Aug 11, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 12, 2008
Do you think that you are going to be successful business in the future?

2 - You meaning was not clear at many points in this essay, so if my corrections are not what you...

Undergraduatezoh - Aug 10, 2008EF_Team5 - Aug 11, 2008
'Healthcare Documentation Integrity' - essay for admission into an Art School

9 - Thank-you again I submitted my application today Is there anyway this thread can be erased?...

UndergraduateKWM - Aug 10, 2008KWM - Aug 22, 2008
Opposition to new ideas - Taking a position in a timed essay

3 - I really appreciate your valuable comments. I am preparing for an essay writing test and picking differnt topics to...

Writing Feedbacksummer - Aug 10, 2008summer - Aug 11, 2008
Paragraph about School and Writing

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