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Task 1: The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in...

3 - @Holt Thank you for your detailed advice...

Writing Feedbackann_nguyen634 - Aug 22, 2020ann_nguyen634 - Aug 23, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 1: diagram describing procedure of electricity generation

3 - @Holt Thank you for the tips! I had better be flexible about paragraph structure....

Writing FeedbackPerry_c - Aug 22, 2020Perry_c - Aug 23, 2020
IELTS Writing task 2 topic: connection of news to people's life

3 - You seem to be addicted to using apostrophes in your presentation. You are using it at every turn, every...

Writing Feedbackcamnhuq - Aug 22, 2020Holt - Aug 23, 2020
IELTS Writing task 1- Line gragh shows the percentage of women employed in four country

3 - There is no comparison statement in the presentation of your summary. That should be included in the presentation. An...

Writing Feedbackthaochloe - Aug 22, 2020Holt - Aug 23, 2020
Equal funding for students' sports activities and libraries.

4 - @Holt Thank you...

Writing FeedbackLaura17 - Aug 22, 2020Laura17 - Aug 23, 2020
The competitive sports in the school curriculum - gives confidence with abilities to reach goals

3 - When you write an extent essay, you need to first think of whether you agree with the topic. Once...

Writing Feedbackanhquoc - Aug 22, 2020Holt - Aug 22, 2020
University Scholarship Essay Prompt: Write about a contemporary figure you admire (4000 characters)

2 - Does the character count include spaces or not? If it includes spaces, you need to cut this down by...

ScholarshipKurekoHikari - Aug 22, 2020Holt - Aug 22, 2020
Writing: Causes of water's shortage and how to fix it

3 - In the cause and solution essay, you have to remember 2 things: 1. Never include information not found in...

Writing FeedbackQuocHuu - Aug 21, 2020Holt - Aug 22, 2020
IELTS task 2: Boarding schools are excellent for children, according to some people's opinion

6 - I find your essay quite simple but reasonable. It may be crucial that you put some academic words and...

Writing FeedbackNguyenPhuoc - Aug 21, 2020camnhuq - Aug 22, 2020
'Blue scrubs was all I knew growing up' - An event that sparked a period of personal growth.

2 - The focus of this essay is too much on your grandmother, the relationship you have with your grandmother, and...

UndergraduateKaylaburks28 - Aug 21, 2020Holt - Aug 21, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 1: Line graph about Internet users as percentage of population in three countries

3 - @zxc5532130 The introduction described the topic well, except for a minor mistake where you used "American" improperly as...

Writing Feedbackzxc5532130 - Aug 21, 2020manutd9111993 - Aug 21, 2020
IELTS Writing Task 1: Line chart comparing international conferences in 3 cities

5 - @Holt Can you kindly suggest an acceptable opening sentence for this topic please? Sure, if this thread is...

Writing Feedbackmaihaan - Aug 21, 2020manutd9111993 - Aug 21, 2020
The field of law - Motivation PERSONAL STATEMENT - KGSP

3 - The personal statement for the GKS scholarship is not individually written. You must have a copy of the topics...

ScholarshipMoel - Aug 20, 2020Holt - Aug 21, 2020
Writing task 1:the graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US

2 - You did not give graph in your presentation but as far as i understand, the main fault of this...

Writing FeedbackCold Sand - Aug 20, 2020zoyatariq - Aug 20, 2020
The two pie charts shows the comparison of the percentage of homes owned and rented in the UK

4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your detailed advice. I will try the best to write better essays next...

Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Aug 20, 2020DiepVu99 - Aug 21, 2020
Passion for leading teams - Chevening leadership essay

2 - Your first 2 experiences are too basic to make an impression on the seasoned reviewer. You should focus on...

ScholarshipCarolinabgp - Aug 20, 2020Holt - Aug 20, 2020
STATEMENT ON WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN THE USA?

3 - Greetings friends... I have come up with the below essay, on why I want to study in the USA...

EssaysMaria110 - Aug 19, 2020Maria110 - Sep 3, 2020
Jobs categories for graduate and postgraduate students

3 - Hello @zoyatariq, I have some suggestions for your writing as below: + First sentence: I think you should...

Writing Feedbackzoyatariq - Aug 19, 2020legendark - Aug 20, 2020
IELTS Writing II: Compare importance of parks and sports facilities to shopping malls in a new town.

2 - I am unclear about this presentation as you did not provide the original prompt with the discussion. I know...

Writing Feedbackmaiquynhngan - Aug 19, 2020Holt - Aug 20, 2020
Foreign investments and local business protection - Writing task 2

2 - There are minimal mistakes in your essay for example you have used "my own perspective" you shouldn't have used...

Writing Feedbacktuongnam - Aug 19, 2020aqsa27 - Aug 19, 2020
IELTS WRITING - TASK 2 - Essay about Wealth gap problems and solutions

3 - Your discussion format is incorrect. You have changed the discussion topic and presentation instruction in your prompt paraphrase section....

Writing Feedbackthaojena - Aug 19, 2020Holt - Aug 20, 2020
IELTS Writing task 2: Opinion essay about "advertising"

4 - Dear @Holt and @tuongnam, Thank you for your responses...

Writing Feedbacklegendark - Aug 19, 2020legendark - Aug 21, 2020
Writing task 1 - The average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

3 - @ legendark thanks for your feedback. I have a mistake like you said with my sentence "an experienced trend"....

Writing Feedbacktuongnam - Aug 19, 2020tuongnam - Aug 19, 2020
The Pie Chart - the proportion of water usage by various categories in Sydney, Australia (1997-2007)

3 - you need to improve your reporting skills, you have made mistakes such as chart instead of using charts or...

Writing Feedbackduongtranah02 - Aug 19, 2020aqsa27 - Aug 19, 2020
Data on the changes in the proportion of women in Australia who gave birth to their first child

3 - In my perspective, I sIn my perspective, I suppose that the writing task 1 don't need to mention everything...

Writing Feedbackjenniele - Aug 19, 2020tuongnam - Aug 19, 2020
In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness

3 - You're using to much informal word in this essay, and also many words repeat in one paragraph. Besides, the...

Writing Feedbackhien2004 - Aug 19, 2020tuongnam - Aug 19, 2020
Essay about the opinion of people in traveling

2 - You immediately failed this essay test. The very minute to offered a fact in the first sentence rather than...

Writing Feedbacktuongnam - Aug 18, 2020Holt - Aug 19, 2020
Life cycle of bees, their growth in different periods and average life expectancy from eggs to adult

2 - The presentation is too short for you to be properly graded by the examiner. With only 152 words, you...

Writing FeedbackBichPhuong83 - Aug 18, 2020Holt - Aug 18, 2020
Children In Third World Countries vs. Education

2 - The most common mistake in your presentation would be in your word presentations. Academic papers should never see the...

Research Papersjudyalvarez6 - Aug 18, 2020Holt - Aug 18, 2020
Wordless Love: My Goal to Become a Veterinarian

2 - So, the goal is to discuss your career plan for after you graduate. It is not a discussion of...

Scholarshipkirkwoodkirk - Aug 18, 2020Holt - Aug 18, 2020
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