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Medical and wellness services - your purpose course and Institution (AAS, Master of Public Health)

2 - There is a specific prompt that asks you to discuss how the courses you have chosen will help you...

ScholarshipYuayu7 - Apr 21, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
Being dependend in the modern world

3 - @Anh_65 Introduce the topic in a neutral tone, that is don't state your opinion first, then allow the...

Writing FeedbackAnh_65 - Apr 21, 2024Layson Manga - Apr 22, 2024
A persuasive essay topic on why its best to prioritize a healthy lifestyle

2 - This is a rhetorical question that would have been best placed at the end of the introductory paragraph....

Research Papersaspenswick - Apr 21, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
International arbitration and environmental law - Motivation letter for master admission

2 - What you have written is a personal statement. There is very little motivation focus in the letter so this...

LettersLeila321 - Apr 20, 2024Holt - Apr 21, 2024
Essay on the importance of use of force.

2 - Make sure to reference the author before the quotation int he paragraph. That way when you reference the...

Writing FeedbackJorge74 - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Waterloo Computer Engineering: Reasons for choosing your program

2 - I would avoid referencing "since I was young" in this case. Most reviewers tend to see such references as...

Undergraduateakmaster101 - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
a) give up to three practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connection

2 - Your reference got as far as the knowledge and skills discussion in the essay. In fact, you did this...

Scholarshipthangussh - Apr 19, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Imprisonment is the best solution to crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

3 - I believe that quality assurance is the factor that went missing in your writing process as you have made...

Writing Feedbackchanpu - Apr 17, 2024Sakuradesu - May 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's program in "Advanced Systems in Automation and Information Technology

3 - @Holt Thanks Sir, Your advice was very helpful, how about this: To a new thread please....

LettersSteve24kh - Apr 17, 2024Steve24kh - Apr 21, 2024
IELTS writing: Reasons and solutions for teenagers prefering socializing online to meeting in person

2 - The essay is overwritten. You should not write more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. That is...

Writing FeedbackNnop - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types from 2000 and 2009

2 - It is not enough to simply repeat the first part of the directions in the summary overview. You have...

Writing FeedbackQuien - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other.

2 - Nobody is asking if the statement is true or not. So you do not have to indicate that...

Writing Feedbackjasanh - Apr 17, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People are living longer lives now than they did in the past.

2 - Nobody is arguing this information with you. There is no need to provide an attestation in the paragraph....

Writing FeedbackLy Ly - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 - national consumer spending

2 - The essay is incomplete. The summary overview does not state several considerations such as : 1. What is...

Writing Feedbackhttra - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Education at the University of Twente - motivation letter

2 - This is not a well developed motivational letter. It is short, which makes it a good draft. An acceptable...

LettersNovellaleedeman - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
News plays an important part in most people's lives

2 - The essay is due to receive an immediate failing score. Kindly look at the guide writing question again. It...

Writing Feedbackhanahahaha - Apr 15, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Abstract: Relationship between customers and supermarkets

2 - I think that you should avoid the mention of the Post Covid 19-era in the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackecho5016 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it

2 - The first paragraph is not well developed. The idea behind the original topic got lost in the paraphrasing. The...

Writing FeedbackBAONGOC030815 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Many women now have children later in life. What are the causes? What are the pros and cons?

2 - Avoid the use of over used and exaggerated English reference phrases such as this one. Examiners consider its...

Writing Feedbackhvnnnn - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The essay is going to receive an immediate failing score. A quick review of the given statement shows that...

Writing Feedbackmikeelenka23 - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IT usage - reasons why I am proposing to these institutions (AAS)

4 - You should focus more on why you should attend those universities, what do you offer to the table. Don't...

ScholarshipSam2hayl - Apr 14, 2024akmaster101 - Apr 23, 2024
Preventing foreign companies from opening businesses to protect the local companies

2 - All IELTS Task 2 essays are single opinion essays unless otherwise specified as a comparative discussion. Since this...

Writing Feedbackitsismeafighter - Apr 14, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The Impact of Social Media on Mental Health

2 - The introduction paragraph needs more clarity. You cannot go from social media to virtual reality (VR) without first establishing...

Writing Feedbackjasminali123 - Apr 13, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
(WRITING TASK 2) Cosmetic surgery

2 - There is no need to say this. You already established the discussion parameters within the prompt restatement and...

Writing Feedbackthuyanh1910 - Apr 12, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.

2 - One of the immediate noticeable problems that will reduce your score is the way you have disregarded the English...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthuyha2001 - Apr 11, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
a huge money and time should be spent on wild animals or human population

2 - The prompt restatement is not clear. I am not sure if it is because the word choices are incorrect...

Writing Feedbackkhanhhuyen48936 - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Coming of Age - Personal Statement for GKS Scholarship

2 - Remove the reference to language study. There is a specific prompt that will allow you to discuss that in...

Scholarshipjayseong_id - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
A traditional South-Asian household - Application for Waterloo Fermat Workshop

3 - Hi, thank you for your help, but I actually got accepted last week :) I appreciate the help...

Scholarshipmal27 - Apr 10, 2024mal27 - Apr 20, 2024
Do you think it is better to do schoolwork with other students or to work alone?

2 - I do not know where to start with the review of this essay. It is simply not well written,...

Writing Feedbackhoangokkk205 - Apr 10, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Point of view different from a teacher or employer - FIT Portfolio

2 - The tendency of your response is to be too vague. You are not making enough specific references in the...

Undergraduateelipulpo - Apr 9, 2024Holt - Apr 20, 2024
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