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The bar chart below shows the estimated world illiteracy rates for regions and by gender in the past

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PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS IN PROSTHODONTICS (DENTISTRY)

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Benefit of playing video games. Give reasons and examples

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transfer statement essay on econ/math passion USC - improvements

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Letter Of Intent For Turkey Burslari Scholarship - Human Behavior

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As countries progress, there is a trend towards living alone or in smaller family units

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Personal statement for Erasmus mundus IMSISS programme (self-founded)

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Personal Statement | GKS-G Scholarship 2024 | International Relations

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Gothic story - dont get off the train

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UF statement of intent - physical therapist

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Waterloo AIF, computational and financial management

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Today more people are overweight than ever before...

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Percentage of households

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty.

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Fluency in Korean - Global MBA STUDY PLAN

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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

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[TASK2] As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Writing task 1 (The process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products)

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Young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school

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[IELTS WRITING TASK 1] Average content of sodium, saturated fats and sugar

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Ielts writing task 2 - The Antarctic ozone hole

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Statement of Purpose Master Data Science EPFL

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Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree ?

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TASK 2 IETLS WRITING ON EDUCATION

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Letter of Motivation for Master's Degree in Cognitive Neuroscience and Clinical Neuropsychology

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Some companies block their employees from using social media networks and websites such as facebook.

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SOP for master application for Mining Engineering

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ยท TASK 2: Work from home You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

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Community service (scholarship essay)

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