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Personal Statement for a MSc in Computer Science from the University College London

2 - The essay seems to be open ended. The last paragraph seems to be hanging. There is no clear concluding...

GraduateCS_Masters2024 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Application Supplemental Essay (Why Barnard)- First-Year Transfer to Barnard College

2 - I am not very convinced about the effects of traditional Chinese dance with regards to finding your most powerful...

Undergraduatenafizux - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 (Line graph) - The money spent by British parents on their children's sport

2 - A chart is different from a line graph. The original prompt uses the term "chart" to describe the...

Writing Feedbackuyen_465 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A writting task 1 about some changes in an area

2 - Incorrect image identifier. This is a map illustration, not a graph. this mistake in image reference will affect...

Writing FeedbackPhongbeo12 - Jan 16, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out . What are the causes and solution

4 - @buitiendung i think you have to be more clear and distinct with your points and make sure all your...

Writing Feedbackbuitiendung - Jan 16, 2024triplej - Jan 24, 2024
Computer Science Degree - Stepindium Hanguricum Scholarship for applying to CS BSc

2 - A motivation letter should not contain any references to your high school studies or your position upon high school...

ScholarshipMoBassem - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Nanyang Technological University Scholarship Essay - Value and beliefs

2 - When you speak of values and beliefs, this should relate to the way that you participate in your community....

Undergraduatelemon_macarons - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Allowing children to use phones at the school

2 - Well, the discussion approach could be better. For these types of comparison essays, the examiner gives extra points for...

Writing FeedbackRahma20 - Jan 15, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture

2 - Do not exaggerate your response. Know when to use a measured response to the question and when not...

Writing Feedbackkhanhan - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Learning and Creativity - advice SOP for masters

2 - Refrain from mentioning the 8th grade in this essay. You are applying for admission to a masters course....

GraduateAkshay66 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Family and friends - ideas UBC personal profile

2 - You are spending too much time talking about how you influenced your friend. That is the longest aspect of...

UndergraduateIssacLee16543663 - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR M.SC IN ARCHITECTURE AND URBAN DESIGN IN MILAN

3 - I really love how you take account of the feedback from the consultant and how you shape your already...

GraduateSupreena - Jan 14, 2024himca - Jan 17, 2024
Visitors to Ashdown Museum: IELTS - Describe table and charts

2 - What was the rate for the extremely unfulfilled visitors? You did not indicate the percentages for that section of...

Writing Feedbackthienji - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum, for BSCS (undergraduate),Pakistani student

2 - You first indicated that your reason for applying to the scholarship is the positive experience of your friend. You...

LettersManahilFatima - Jan 14, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Some people enjoy working alone. Others would rather work in a group. What is your preference?

3 - You have the idea for the essay. However, your direction in this essay only focuses on the reasons rather...

Writing Feedbacktyratw4 - Jan 14, 2024alizarincrimsons - Jan 27, 2024
IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 Question: some people argue that university students should be free to choose

2 - Your first sentence in the first paragraph is misleading. There is no fiery discussion sparked across the globe. A...

Writing FeedbackLinhw - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
IELTS task 1 report on Dairy products

3 - @Holt I want to say thank you so much for your assessment. Would it be fine if I create...

Writing Feedbacksummerchilld - Jan 13, 2024summerchilld - Jan 14, 2024
International Applicant applying for West Point seeking feedbac, Explain Why you want to attend USMA

2 - The essay response does not indicate if you will go back to your home country and serve as an...

Undergraduatesapper5446 - Jan 13, 2024Holt - Jan 14, 2024
Personal Statement for Master of Behavioral Science program at UPenn

2 - The response to the essay is totally incorrect. You are discussing your personal interest in behavioral science and how...

Graduatehimca - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Task 2: There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company.

2 - You have an under developed essay presentation. The first reasoning paragraphs that explains the reason for money as a...

Writing FeedbackLyth - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities

2 - The original prompt indicates pie charts, plural form (+S) so in your representation, you should mention the number of...

Writing Feedbackhanaaa - Jan 12, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
BRAZILIAN EMIGRATION (essay for an exam)

3 - @Holt Hi, Holt! Thank you very much for your feedback. I carefully read your response and I will try...

Writing Feedbackgmt16 - Jan 12, 2024gmt16 - Jan 13, 2024
Peace & Justice Difficult situation in conflict resolution. How you handled the situation. (CBEST)

2 - Okay, your eventual solution was violence. That has no place in these peace loving times. Threatening to beat up...

Writing FeedbackNorbsidy - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 11, 2024
Communication is essential - GKS-G | Language Study Plan | GMBA

2 - Remove the references to the other languages in the essay. Those are not necessary to the discussion and will...

Graduatesankook - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
The impact of enterprises - GKS-G GMBA | Goal of study and study plan

3 - @Holt Thank you for the review but my whole essay got edited its just the introduction part my whole...

Graduatesankook - Jan 11, 2024sankook - Jan 13, 2024
Cancer research is important to me - UBC PERSONAL PROFILE APPLICATION

2 - Wel... Yes and no. Yes, you answer the question with a hyper focus on cancer, but I do not...

Undergraduatesuzan11 - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
My quiet balcony - why you chose the academic program- NCSU Prompt

2 - You are taking too long to get to the point. This creative writing exercise will lose the interest of...

Undergraduatemonogatari - Jan 11, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Online shopping: do the pros outweight cons? - ielts essay - estimated score and advice

2 - Your essay is over discussed. You only need have presented 2 reasons for your opinion. Believe me, you did...

Writing Feedbacktteruchan65 - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Obtaining a Postgraduate degree through a Scholarship - how to answer this question?

2 - This is basically a 2 paragraph essay response. You have to consider the first part, which is yourself, and...

Essaysevanscoffie - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
GTE to Australia study abroad

2 - I am not confident about your financial status in relation to your application. You are automatically assuming that you...

UndergraduateAnn_Bui_29 - Jan 10, 2024Holt - Jan 13, 2024
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